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2018 Bernie and Howie Stories

Viewing comments for Chapter 13 "Howie and Bernie's Adventure"
...stories and poems about the boys

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Comment from bookishfabler
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The dogs caught the mood from the humans, and wagged their tales and lolled their tongues accordingly. (wrong tale, you mean tails)
(Where did you go? Sixty five degrees sounds great to me.)

hugs Heidi

The RV I live in is smaller than that. It's just a travel trailer, not a fifth wheel.

 Comment Written 30-Aug-2017


reply by the author on 31-Aug-2017
    Hi there Heidi;
    Howie and Bernie truly had a good time. They loved the difference in their routine, and usually they are simply happy to be around me. I loved being away from the house and the chance to tell jokes, stories, and play tons of games. It was great, we were in Keizer, OR, so the morning temp was nice and mild,

    ~patty~
    the RV belongs to our friends
Comment from Asem.inspirations
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Hello Patty: What an awesome story and as usual so well written. I enjoy these stories so much from you. You are an exceptional writer. I loved how well you described Bernie's hesitance to accept Barney. The whole experience and trip described, made me smile and laugh throughout the read of it. I am in love with this story and happy that you had such a great time.

I just returned from vacation so I have a lot of catching up to do. Have a great day.

 Comment Written 30-Aug-2017


reply by the author on 31-Aug-2017
    Hi there Tier;
    Howie and Bernie truly had a good time. They loved the difference in their routine, and usually they are simply happy to be around me. I loved being away from the house and the chance to tell jokes, stories, and play tons of games. It was great,

    ~patty~
Comment from BeasPeas
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Hi Patty. This is a wonderful story that I enjoyed reading. You've explained your fun experience with friends and the dogs clearly. Your writing is humorous with the cute antics of the dogs, spoken primarily from Howie's perspective. Marilyn

 Comment Written 27-Aug-2017


reply by the author on 31-Aug-2017
    Hi there Marilyn;
    Howie and Bernie truly had a good time. They loved the difference in their routine, and usually they are simply happy to be around me. I loved being away from the house and the chance to tell jokes, stories, and play tons of games. It was great,

    ~patty~
reply by BeasPeas on 03-Sep-2017
    Hi Patty. I agree. Getting away for a while is fun and different. Marilyn
Comment from nartoonla
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Hello, How have you been? Hope well and feeling great.
I loved the story.. simple and easy to follow.. And with dogs! My favorite animals as many but they had me carry on reading. Good fun and enjoyed.
regards nartoonla

 Comment Written 27-Aug-2017


reply by the author on 31-Aug-2017
    Hi there;
    Howie and Bernie truly had a good time. They loved the difference in their routine, and usually they are simply happy to be around me. I loved being away from the house and the chance to tell jokes, stories, and play tons of games. It was great,

    ~patty~
Comment from Phyllis Stewart
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What a gorgeous camper you have. Must have been great to see the total eclipse live and in person. And you took all the dogs with you, too. You are braver than I am. LOL

 Comment Written 26-Aug-2017


reply by the author on 31-Aug-2017
    Hi Phyllis;

    Howie and Bernie truly had a good time. They loved the difference in their routine, and usually they are simply happy to be around me. I loved being away from the house and the chance to tell jokes, stories, and play tons of games. It was great,

    ~patty~
    the camper belongs to our friends
Comment from Mrs Happy Poet
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Yes my friend this must have been a wonderful experience for you and your friends the doggies even made4 some new friends even if they didn't truly understand the excitement of the time I enjoyed well done regards Jill

 Comment Written 26-Aug-2017


reply by the author on 31-Aug-2017
    Hi there;
    Howie and Bernie truly had a good time. They loved the difference in their routine, and usually they are simply happy to be around me. I loved being away from the house and the chance to tell jokes, stories, and play tons of games. It was great,

    ~patty~
Comment from emptypage
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The eclipse really was something.

The story is fun and I enjoyed reading it. I'm still trying to write about my eclipse experience, which was profound, but I can't get there quite yet. Maybe tonight.

 Comment Written 25-Aug-2017


reply by the author on 31-Aug-2017
    Hi there Marla;
    Howie and Bernie truly had a good time. They loved the difference in their routine, and usually they are simply happy to be around me. I loved being away from the house and the chance to tell jokes, stories, and play tons of games. It was great,

    ~patty~
Comment from mbroyles2
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Nice to see Howie and Bernie git to experience the total eclipse. Oh yes and let's not forget Barney.
At first I thought the boys were going to get visited by a giant purple dinosaur.
That's the first Barney that came to mind. Then it came up about Andy Griffith's sidekick.
Great story!
Michael

 Comment Written 25-Aug-2017


reply by the author on 31-Aug-2017
    Hi there Michael;
    Howie and Bernie truly had a good time. They loved the difference in their routine, and usually they are simply happy to be around me. I loved being away from the house and the chance to tell jokes, stories, and play tons of games. It was great,

    ~patty~
Comment from Rasmine
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Hello, Patty,
I'm hoping and praying my dying computer doesn't crash. I'm not a premier member anymore so I'm not reviewing poetry unless it's spooky :P
This was great. You have a way of writing that is very sweet and involving. :)
Nome

 Comment Written 25-Aug-2017


reply by the author on 31-Aug-2017
    Hi there;
    Howie and Bernie truly had a good time. They loved the difference in their routine, and usually they are simply happy to be around me. I loved being away from the house and the chance to tell jokes, stories, and play tons of games. It was great,

    ~patty~
Comment from Marvin Calloway
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This is another nice story of yours. It flowed right along. The dogs are so interesting to read about. They're like one or three of the family.
Good job.
Marv

 Comment Written 24-Aug-2017


reply by the author on 31-Aug-2017
    Hi there Marv;
    Howie and Bernie truly had a good time. They loved the difference in their routine, and usually they are simply happy to be around me. I loved being away from the house and the chance to tell jokes, stories, and play tons of games. It was great,

    ~patty~