A Stranger Touched My Heart
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Comment from dragonpoet
This sounds like a simple tale of love at first sight with a very tender and soft spoken man who's eyes probably tell of love before his words do.
The poem has a smooth rhythm even though the first stanza has mp rhyming and the last two do.
Keep writing
dragonpoet
reply by the author on 21-Sep-2017
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This sounds like a simple tale of love at first sight with a very tender and soft spoken man who's eyes probably tell of love before his words do.
The poem has a smooth rhythm even though the first stanza has mp rhyming and the last two do.
Keep writing
dragonpoet
Comment Written 21-Sep-2017
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Comment from MsPetra
Your rhyme and meter are spot on. I liked what you had to say here and how you said it. Your poem has brightened my day. It will stick with me.
There isn't anything that needs changing. Keep up the good work.
reply by the author on 21-Sep-2017
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Your rhyme and meter are spot on. I liked what you had to say here and how you said it. Your poem has brightened my day. It will stick with me.
There isn't anything that needs changing. Keep up the good work.
Comment Written 21-Sep-2017
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Comment from Adarian J. Wilson
In the second stanza, the third and fourth line, in my opinion are unrelated. It took a couple of readings to grasp the full concept of what you were telling the audience. It is otherwise well written.
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In the second stanza, the third and fourth line, in my opinion are unrelated. It took a couple of readings to grasp the full concept of what you were telling the audience. It is otherwise well written.
Comment Written 20-Sep-2017
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Comment from closetpoetjester
Wow! It sounds like your late night wanderings have come to an abrupt halt now you have discovered your destiny.
Sometimes you just know...
You articulated your feelings beautifully in a clear and well written piece. The closer leaves an air of mystery that resonates for this reader.
Good luck, if this is a bio!
Cheers P
reply by the author on 21-Sep-2017
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Wow! It sounds like your late night wanderings have come to an abrupt halt now you have discovered your destiny.
Sometimes you just know...
You articulated your feelings beautifully in a clear and well written piece. The closer leaves an air of mystery that resonates for this reader.
Good luck, if this is a bio!
Cheers P
Comment Written 20-Sep-2017
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Comment from flylikeaneagle
Fastdigits: beautiful poetry about being lonely and then finding the
love of your life. Many tales and memories and friends to share your
life with. Great rhymes. Two hearts beat as one, great line.
flylikeaneagle - nancy
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Fastdigits: beautiful poetry about being lonely and then finding the
love of your life. Many tales and memories and friends to share your
life with. Great rhymes. Two hearts beat as one, great line.
flylikeaneagle - nancy
Comment Written 20-Sep-2017
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Comment from marybell1
I enjoyed reading your poem "A Stranger touched my Heart." Did you mean to have all rhyming couplets? You have not rhymed any lines in tyour first stanza. You may wish to review this.
All the best.
Marybell1.
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reply by the author on 21-Sep-2017
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I enjoyed reading your poem "A Stranger touched my Heart." Did you mean to have all rhyming couplets? You have not rhymed any lines in tyour first stanza. You may wish to review this.
All the best.
Marybell1.
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Comment Written 20-Sep-2017
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Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear
This speaks how a stranger touched poet's heart and now they have entered into a new world where two hearts beat as one and the moment for telling their tales; I liked.
reply by the author on 21-Sep-2017
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This speaks how a stranger touched poet's heart and now they have entered into a new world where two hearts beat as one and the moment for telling their tales; I liked.
Comment Written 20-Sep-2017
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Comment from Oatmeal
FASTDIGITS,
I liked this poem very much and I do not have anymore 6's. So I decided to pump it up a little and then see if I have any 6's later. LOL Don't worry, I took my meds today. Thoughts are expressed and described well. The poem flowed very smoothly.
I do have another 6, oh well, you are getting it too.
There was no SPAG. No typos. No homophones. No problems at all.
I look forward to seeing you again.
Love you,
Oatmeal
reply by the author on 21-Sep-2017
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FASTDIGITS,
I liked this poem very much and I do not have anymore 6's. So I decided to pump it up a little and then see if I have any 6's later. LOL Don't worry, I took my meds today. Thoughts are expressed and described well. The poem flowed very smoothly.
I do have another 6, oh well, you are getting it too.
There was no SPAG. No typos. No homophones. No problems at all.
I look forward to seeing you again.
Love you,
Oatmeal
Comment Written 20-Sep-2017
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Comment from zanya
The spark that is true love well and truly ignited here with quiet dignity and mystique 'strangers who met/in a moment destiny had set'- and an appropriate pic
reply by the author on 20-Sep-2017
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The spark that is true love well and truly ignited here with quiet dignity and mystique 'strangers who met/in a moment destiny had set'- and an appropriate pic
Comment Written 20-Sep-2017
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Comment from Dolly'sPoems
The magical transition from strangers to lovers and the intimate start of a loving romance and history in the making, your poem is well told, warm and beautifully rhymed, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 20-Sep-2017
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The magical transition from strangers to lovers and the intimate start of a loving romance and history in the making, your poem is well told, warm and beautifully rhymed, love Dolly x
Comment Written 20-Sep-2017
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