A Stranger Touched My Heart
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Comment from l.raven
HI fast, WOW!!!!!...true love is wonderful you...I wish I had those days back...when first meeting someone you truly fall in love with...sigh...I love every word...and love your picture...speaks for itself...very nicely written...love Linda xxoo
reply by the author on 23-Jan-2018
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HI fast, WOW!!!!!...true love is wonderful you...I wish I had those days back...when first meeting someone you truly fall in love with...sigh...I love every word...and love your picture...speaks for itself...very nicely written...love Linda xxoo
Comment Written 22-Jan-2018
reply by the author on 23-Jan-2018
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Tahnk you for stopping by and for those gracious comments regarding days that never pass. Stop by again
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you are always so welcome...and I will...love xxoo
Comment from BeasPeas
Very nicely constructed and rhymed. When the time is right, we meet that special person and it can't be rushed. Somehow love is on a timeline. Last stanza is especially nice. Marilyn
reply by the author on 24-Sep-2017
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Very nicely constructed and rhymed. When the time is right, we meet that special person and it can't be rushed. Somehow love is on a timeline. Last stanza is especially nice. Marilyn
Comment Written 24-Sep-2017
reply by the author on 24-Sep-2017
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Comment from ruzu27
What a beautiful romantic love poem. Makes you want to fall in love yourself again.
And you also chose a beautiful artwork which complements the words.
The poem is well-penned and I thank you for sharing it with us.
Blessings.
reply by the author on 21-Sep-2017
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What a beautiful romantic love poem. Makes you want to fall in love yourself again.
And you also chose a beautiful artwork which complements the words.
The poem is well-penned and I thank you for sharing it with us.
Blessings.
Comment Written 21-Sep-2017
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Comment from GWHARGIS
This was a deceptively simple poem. Very light to the ears but in it a real message is learned. The unity of two hearts creates something beautiful. Love the imagery of the night. Great job. Well written and good strong rhythm. Gretchen
reply by the author on 21-Sep-2017
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This was a deceptively simple poem. Very light to the ears but in it a real message is learned. The unity of two hearts creates something beautiful. Love the imagery of the night. Great job. Well written and good strong rhythm. Gretchen
Comment Written 21-Sep-2017
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Comment from Dorothy Farrell
Hi fastdigits, a short but very romantic poem expressing love newly found. Free verse in stanza one then aabb rhyme form in stanza two and three. The content is lovely and I particularly like your last stanza -
A new world had just begun
Two hearts now beat as one
All of our love to unfold
With tales yet to be told ....lovely!
Warm regards Dorothy
reply by the author on 21-Sep-2017
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Hi fastdigits, a short but very romantic poem expressing love newly found. Free verse in stanza one then aabb rhyme form in stanza two and three. The content is lovely and I particularly like your last stanza -
A new world had just begun
Two hearts now beat as one
All of our love to unfold
With tales yet to be told ....lovely!
Warm regards Dorothy
Comment Written 21-Sep-2017
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Comment from Meia (MESAYERS)
We were strangers who met
in a moment destiny had set
The silent words we spoke
And suddenly our hearts awoke
A new world had just begun
Two hearts now beat as one
All of our love to unfold
With tales yet to be told ; Such a beautiful love poem, so intensely romantic, I love it, well done kindest regards Meia x
reply by the author on 21-Sep-2017
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We were strangers who met
in a moment destiny had set
The silent words we spoke
And suddenly our hearts awoke
A new world had just begun
Two hearts now beat as one
All of our love to unfold
With tales yet to be told ; Such a beautiful love poem, so intensely romantic, I love it, well done kindest regards Meia x
Comment Written 21-Sep-2017
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Comment from MargaretEllen
I love this poem. In a few words, beautifully strung together, I was taken on a journey from loneliness and longing to the joy of two people willing to be together into the future. Absolutely lovely. Thank you!
reply by the author on 21-Sep-2017
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I love this poem. In a few words, beautifully strung together, I was taken on a journey from loneliness and longing to the joy of two people willing to be together into the future. Absolutely lovely. Thank you!
Comment Written 21-Sep-2017
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Comment from nomi338
When love arrives, it comes unbidden, uninvited and often unexpected. It hits one over the head in a non lethal way, but it manages to do its damage. No one is ever the same after falling in love, whether it lasts or it does not. Your life is forever changed, for once you have truly loved, you will never forget it.
reply by the author on 21-Sep-2017
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When love arrives, it comes unbidden, uninvited and often unexpected. It hits one over the head in a non lethal way, but it manages to do its damage. No one is ever the same after falling in love, whether it lasts or it does not. Your life is forever changed, for once you have truly loved, you will never forget it.
Comment Written 21-Sep-2017
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Comment from Daniel Silverhawk
I gave this poem four stars for inconsistency in the rhyme scheme. Free verse poems carry a unique atmosphere in that you dont expect it to rhyme. In this poem, you started with a free verse style poem then switched in the 2nd and 3rd to aabb rhyme scheme. I felt this took away from the flow of the poem and distracted from the words. It's difficult to continue to put into words a descriptive vision of meeting someone new. But I like the use of silken whispers. It shows s thickness to the whispers but with a gentle flow and caresses the ear.
Speaking silent words indicates a body language that only two people thoroughly attracted to can understand. With takes yet to be told expresses thoughts of history ready to be made with a long and exciting future planned.
It's a nice piece of work. Just the flow of the stanzas interrupted my thoughts
reply by the author on 21-Sep-2017
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I gave this poem four stars for inconsistency in the rhyme scheme. Free verse poems carry a unique atmosphere in that you dont expect it to rhyme. In this poem, you started with a free verse style poem then switched in the 2nd and 3rd to aabb rhyme scheme. I felt this took away from the flow of the poem and distracted from the words. It's difficult to continue to put into words a descriptive vision of meeting someone new. But I like the use of silken whispers. It shows s thickness to the whispers but with a gentle flow and caresses the ear.
Speaking silent words indicates a body language that only two people thoroughly attracted to can understand. With takes yet to be told expresses thoughts of history ready to be made with a long and exciting future planned.
It's a nice piece of work. Just the flow of the stanzas interrupted my thoughts
Comment Written 21-Sep-2017
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Comment from Angela VA
Your poem hints of longings which is followed by a spark, a flame, and finally hope for the future. I do wonder why your first and second lines end with a rhyme, with the exception of the first stanza. That impacted the flow a bit. Thanks for sharing your lovely poem.
reply by the author on 21-Sep-2017
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Your poem hints of longings which is followed by a spark, a flame, and finally hope for the future. I do wonder why your first and second lines end with a rhyme, with the exception of the first stanza. That impacted the flow a bit. Thanks for sharing your lovely poem.
Comment Written 21-Sep-2017
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