One True God
5-7-5 contest entry15 total reviews
Comment from sunnilicious
God is good. And so is this poem. Well thought out and clearly written. Good visual imagery. Memorable last line. Nice work. Good luck in the contest.
I don't mind you referring to God as a Him, however, that might be politically incorrect. I've read a few commentaries and had some conversations. God is omniscient and some mistake for Jesus, however, that was a Messenger capable of conveying God's words. So double-check on the term 'Him'.
reply by the author on 26-Aug-2017
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God is good. And so is this poem. Well thought out and clearly written. Good visual imagery. Memorable last line. Nice work. Good luck in the contest.
I don't mind you referring to God as a Him, however, that might be politically incorrect. I've read a few commentaries and had some conversations. God is omniscient and some mistake for Jesus, however, that was a Messenger capable of conveying God's words. So double-check on the term 'Him'.
Comment Written 26-Aug-2017
reply by the author on 26-Aug-2017
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Thank you for the great review. There are so many ways people refer to God. Are they correct? Probably most are not. I do know in the Bible it says God is a spirit and we must worship Him in truth and spirit. It also says in another place about the Father, Son and Holy Spirit are one. I go by what my King James Bible says! Blessings! Teri
Comment from Mrs Happy Poet
Oh yes my friend this is well written and very meaningful and beautiful God is the one that knows our beginning and end I enjoyed well done regards Jill
reply by the author on 26-Aug-2017
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Oh yes my friend this is well written and very meaningful and beautiful God is the one that knows our beginning and end I enjoyed well done regards Jill
Comment Written 26-Aug-2017
reply by the author on 26-Aug-2017
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Thank you for the great review and comment. He is all seeing and all knowing. Blessings, Teri
Comment from sharonlshelley
a lovely poem about god, the love and respect you give it, i love the picture is beautiful, good luck in the competition and thanks for sharing, sharon
reply by the author on 25-Aug-2017
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a lovely poem about god, the love and respect you give it, i love the picture is beautiful, good luck in the competition and thanks for sharing, sharon
Comment Written 25-Aug-2017
reply by the author on 25-Aug-2017
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Thank you for the great review and good wishes!
Comment from Shirley E Kennedy
What a stunning image choice---God our Saviour.
I really relate to your word choices.
What greater love can He show to all mankind than to create all life,
walk beside us throughout our lives and welcome us home at life's end.
A fine spiritual 5-7-5 poem.
:-) Shirley
reply by the author on 25-Aug-2017
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What a stunning image choice---God our Saviour.
I really relate to your word choices.
What greater love can He show to all mankind than to create all life,
walk beside us throughout our lives and welcome us home at life's end.
A fine spiritual 5-7-5 poem.
:-) Shirley
Comment Written 25-Aug-2017
reply by the author on 25-Aug-2017
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Thank you Shirley for the great review and comments!
Comment from smileycloud
lovely heartwarming poem
you say so much
in so few words
the message is not only beautiful
but it is very clear
blessings
have a smiley day
reply by the author on 25-Aug-2017
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lovely heartwarming poem
you say so much
in so few words
the message is not only beautiful
but it is very clear
blessings
have a smiley day
Comment Written 24-Aug-2017
reply by the author on 25-Aug-2017
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Thank you so much my friend for the great review and comments. Blessings, Teri
Comment from BeasPeas
Best of luck in the contest with this fine entry. It's true, he is the all there is and we are fortunate to have him in our lives. This is a nicely presented and worded 5-7-5. Marilyn
reply by the author on 25-Aug-2017
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Best of luck in the contest with this fine entry. It's true, he is the all there is and we are fortunate to have him in our lives. This is a nicely presented and worded 5-7-5. Marilyn
Comment Written 24-Aug-2017
reply by the author on 25-Aug-2017
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Thank you for the great review!
Comment from emptypage
Well, the image isn't to my liking because Jesus was a dark-skinned Middle-easterner, but the sentiment is spot on. The syllable count is on, too, and that is not true for all entries.
reply by the author on 24-Aug-2017
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Well, the image isn't to my liking because Jesus was a dark-skinned Middle-easterner, but the sentiment is spot on. The syllable count is on, too, and that is not true for all entries.
Comment Written 24-Aug-2017
reply by the author on 24-Aug-2017
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Thank you for the great review. One day I hope to see Jesus and all those issues will be resolved for us all! Blessings!
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
Hello, my friend,
Looking up to Him ..........5
The Author and Finisher .........7
Truly of our life.........5........good job with the syllable count :)
A 5/7/5 about God. Your lines one and two are grammatically connected and helps with the flow. Good job
reply by the author on 24-Aug-2017
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Hello, my friend,
Looking up to Him ..........5
The Author and Finisher .........7
Truly of our life.........5........good job with the syllable count :)
A 5/7/5 about God. Your lines one and two are grammatically connected and helps with the flow. Good job
Comment Written 24-Aug-2017
reply by the author on 24-Aug-2017
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Thank you for the good review!
Comment from Thal1959
Very nicely done. I am not partial to the briefer poetic forms like Haiku or Senryu, but sometimes they can be artistic as is yours. Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 24-Aug-2017
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Very nicely done. I am not partial to the briefer poetic forms like Haiku or Senryu, but sometimes they can be artistic as is yours. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 24-Aug-2017
reply by the author on 24-Aug-2017
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Thank you for the great review!
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You're welcome - it was my pleasure.
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written 5-7-5 poem. We can always trust God to come through in our times of distress. He will always hold our hand and lead us through on the right path.
reply by the author on 24-Aug-2017
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A very well-written 5-7-5 poem. We can always trust God to come through in our times of distress. He will always hold our hand and lead us through on the right path.
Comment Written 24-Aug-2017
reply by the author on 24-Aug-2017
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Thank you for the great review!
