Comment from nancy_e_davis

Excellent

That would drive a person to distraction.
Traffic is bad enough these days without
having the distraction of a back seat driver.
Well done, Nancy

 Comment Written 10-Sep-2017

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reply by the author on 12-Sep-2017

Thank you, Nancy.

Comment from cupa tea

Excellent

sounds to me like what might be a good idea for all in-laws! Ha, well written easy to follow and to some degree pretty funny...Good luck in the contest!

 Comment Written 07-Sep-2017

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reply by the author on 07-Sep-2017

Thank you cupa tea. I just pictured a negative in-law and she appeared. Yet, desires and wishes don't always come true. :)

Comment from write hand blue

Excellent

Well that shut her up, a crash. I had a similar thing happen with a relative many years ago. There's nothing worse than someone wittering in the earhole of the driver I'm sure it has caused many accidents...

~Mel~

 Comment Written 23-Aug-2017

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reply by the author on 03-Sep-2017

Thank you. I don't know how this entered my mind. I just wrote it in that moment. i have to keep up with it because I like it.

Comment from Laine Carson

Excellent

Awful simply awful what happened to that poor Mother in law...but an entertaining story nevertheless, with a nice surprising twist at the end. It evoked both image and emotion. I was irritated along with the driver. I was then sad with the daughter while a bit satisfied as well. Nice job!

 Comment Written 22-Aug-2017

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reply by the author on 03-Sep-2017

Thank you Laine. This short episode came to me and I plan to write the story to that moment. How? I haven't the slighest idea.