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Tears in Barcelona

A pointless attack

18 total reviews 
Comment from Ulla
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Hi Maria Jose, yeah, it was pointless, yet so many lives were shattered. And for what? For some fanatics who can't perceive what is right or wrong. When will this nightmare ever end? I loved your poem. So poignant and very well written. All the best. Ulla:)))

 Comment Written 25-Aug-2017


reply by the author on 26-Aug-2017
    Thanks for reading, Ulla. Have a nice weekend.
Comment from Pearl Edwards
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A good question Maria, what did it all achieve. So many lives shattered, families forever changed. It is too easy for these thugs to use vehicles as a weapon of destruction and hate. Nicely written for this terrible tragedy Maria,
cheers.

 Comment Written 25-Aug-2017


reply by the author on 25-Aug-2017
    Thanks for your review.
Comment from gsuarez
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So very well expressed. My prayer is that anyone contemplating such an odious act would just read the words you have penned. Bravo mi amiga !!!

 Comment Written 23-Aug-2017


reply by the author on 24-Aug-2017
    Thanks for your very kind words and for the generous rating.
Comment from MelB
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Hi Maria, it's very sad that this is our world today! How heartbreaking for all the families. You did a great job of explaining it in your poem.

 Comment Written 22-Aug-2017


reply by the author on 23-Aug-2017
    Thanks for your kind review, Melisa.
reply by MelB on 24-Aug-2017
    You're welcome.
Comment from Barb Hensongispsaca
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Excellent free verse that says, here we go again. The pain stops and then another episode happens to start the pain all over again. Nicelly done

 Comment Written 22-Aug-2017


reply by the author on 23-Aug-2017
    Thanks for your understanding review, Barb.
Comment from Irish Rain
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Heartbreaking. To what purpose? As you said, 'Nada.' I'll never understand what these people think to promote, except hate. But, then, it's quite likely that's their sole agenda. Just heartbreaking. This is beautiful. Blessings...

 Comment Written 22-Aug-2017


reply by the author on 23-Aug-2017
    Thanks so much for reading.
Comment from kiwigirl2821
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Hello Friend. I knew what this was about before the author's notes. It has such a spirit of futility about it, this write. You feel and love the people who were hurt and yet it only makes the resolve of your warrior goddess stronger! Blast these kind of terrorists to hell! xoxo deborah

 Comment Written 22-Aug-2017


reply by the author on 23-Aug-2017
    Thanks for your review, Deborah.
Comment from patcelaw
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Oh, the awfulness of the terror attacks taking place around the world. And the majority are being carried out by the so called religion of peace. There is nothing peaceful about these dregs of society. Patricia

 Comment Written 22-Aug-2017


reply by the author on 23-Aug-2017
    Thanks for reading, Patricia.
Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
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Maria,
You did a great job expressing your thoughts/feelings. The repeating line works nicely to add emphasis to your well chosen words. Your poem creates imagery although it is very sad. Thanks for sharing & caring. I am so sorry for you & your country to have to go through this. Jan

 Comment Written 22-Aug-2017


reply by the author on 23-Aug-2017
    Thanks for your understanding review, Jan.
Comment from royowen
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This world has descended quite markedly into chaos, lawlessness and horror, I was trying to explain to my 10 year old grandson to cling to God, because the morale decline is seemingly accelerating in recent times. Well done, well written in expressive and well described imagery. A poem that abhors the terrible, pointless destruction of lives that occurred in Barcelona, recently, well done, Maria, blessings, Roy

 Comment Written 22-Aug-2017


reply by the author on 23-Aug-2017
    Thanks for reading, Roy.
reply by royowen on 23-Aug-2017
    Welcome Maria