Tears in Barcelona
A pointless attack18 total reviews
Comment from Ulla
Hi Maria Jose, yeah, it was pointless, yet so many lives were shattered. And for what? For some fanatics who can't perceive what is right or wrong. When will this nightmare ever end? I loved your poem. So poignant and very well written. All the best. Ulla:)))
reply by the author on 26-Aug-2017
Hi Maria Jose, yeah, it was pointless, yet so many lives were shattered. And for what? For some fanatics who can't perceive what is right or wrong. When will this nightmare ever end? I loved your poem. So poignant and very well written. All the best. Ulla:)))
Comment Written 25-Aug-2017
reply by the author on 26-Aug-2017
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Thanks for reading, Ulla. Have a nice weekend.
Comment from Pearl Edwards
A good question Maria, what did it all achieve. So many lives shattered, families forever changed. It is too easy for these thugs to use vehicles as a weapon of destruction and hate. Nicely written for this terrible tragedy Maria,
cheers.
reply by the author on 25-Aug-2017
A good question Maria, what did it all achieve. So many lives shattered, families forever changed. It is too easy for these thugs to use vehicles as a weapon of destruction and hate. Nicely written for this terrible tragedy Maria,
cheers.
Comment Written 25-Aug-2017
reply by the author on 25-Aug-2017
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Thanks for your review.
Comment from gsuarez
So very well expressed. My prayer is that anyone contemplating such an odious act would just read the words you have penned. Bravo mi amiga !!!
reply by the author on 24-Aug-2017
So very well expressed. My prayer is that anyone contemplating such an odious act would just read the words you have penned. Bravo mi amiga !!!
Comment Written 23-Aug-2017
reply by the author on 24-Aug-2017
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Thanks for your very kind words and for the generous rating.
Comment from MelB
Hi Maria, it's very sad that this is our world today! How heartbreaking for all the families. You did a great job of explaining it in your poem.
reply by the author on 23-Aug-2017
Hi Maria, it's very sad that this is our world today! How heartbreaking for all the families. You did a great job of explaining it in your poem.
Comment Written 22-Aug-2017
reply by the author on 23-Aug-2017
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Thanks for your kind review, Melisa.
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You're welcome.
Comment from Barb Hensongispsaca
Excellent free verse that says, here we go again. The pain stops and then another episode happens to start the pain all over again. Nicelly done
reply by the author on 23-Aug-2017
Excellent free verse that says, here we go again. The pain stops and then another episode happens to start the pain all over again. Nicelly done
Comment Written 22-Aug-2017
reply by the author on 23-Aug-2017
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Thanks for your understanding review, Barb.
Comment from Irish Rain
Heartbreaking. To what purpose? As you said, 'Nada.' I'll never understand what these people think to promote, except hate. But, then, it's quite likely that's their sole agenda. Just heartbreaking. This is beautiful. Blessings...
reply by the author on 23-Aug-2017
Heartbreaking. To what purpose? As you said, 'Nada.' I'll never understand what these people think to promote, except hate. But, then, it's quite likely that's their sole agenda. Just heartbreaking. This is beautiful. Blessings...
Comment Written 22-Aug-2017
reply by the author on 23-Aug-2017
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Thanks so much for reading.
Comment from kiwigirl2821
Hello Friend. I knew what this was about before the author's notes. It has such a spirit of futility about it, this write. You feel and love the people who were hurt and yet it only makes the resolve of your warrior goddess stronger! Blast these kind of terrorists to hell! xoxo deborah
reply by the author on 23-Aug-2017
Hello Friend. I knew what this was about before the author's notes. It has such a spirit of futility about it, this write. You feel and love the people who were hurt and yet it only makes the resolve of your warrior goddess stronger! Blast these kind of terrorists to hell! xoxo deborah
Comment Written 22-Aug-2017
reply by the author on 23-Aug-2017
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Thanks for your review, Deborah.
Comment from patcelaw
Oh, the awfulness of the terror attacks taking place around the world. And the majority are being carried out by the so called religion of peace. There is nothing peaceful about these dregs of society. Patricia
reply by the author on 23-Aug-2017
Oh, the awfulness of the terror attacks taking place around the world. And the majority are being carried out by the so called religion of peace. There is nothing peaceful about these dregs of society. Patricia
Comment Written 22-Aug-2017
reply by the author on 23-Aug-2017
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Thanks for reading, Patricia.
Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
Maria,
You did a great job expressing your thoughts/feelings. The repeating line works nicely to add emphasis to your well chosen words. Your poem creates imagery although it is very sad. Thanks for sharing & caring. I am so sorry for you & your country to have to go through this. Jan
reply by the author on 23-Aug-2017
Maria,
You did a great job expressing your thoughts/feelings. The repeating line works nicely to add emphasis to your well chosen words. Your poem creates imagery although it is very sad. Thanks for sharing & caring. I am so sorry for you & your country to have to go through this. Jan
Comment Written 22-Aug-2017
reply by the author on 23-Aug-2017
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Thanks for your understanding review, Jan.
Comment from royowen
This world has descended quite markedly into chaos, lawlessness and horror, I was trying to explain to my 10 year old grandson to cling to God, because the morale decline is seemingly accelerating in recent times. Well done, well written in expressive and well described imagery. A poem that abhors the terrible, pointless destruction of lives that occurred in Barcelona, recently, well done, Maria, blessings, Roy
reply by the author on 23-Aug-2017
This world has descended quite markedly into chaos, lawlessness and horror, I was trying to explain to my 10 year old grandson to cling to God, because the morale decline is seemingly accelerating in recent times. Well done, well written in expressive and well described imagery. A poem that abhors the terrible, pointless destruction of lives that occurred in Barcelona, recently, well done, Maria, blessings, Roy
Comment Written 22-Aug-2017
reply by the author on 23-Aug-2017
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Thanks for reading, Roy.
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Welcome Maria