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Love Turns

My mother's doll knew the truth

3 total reviews 
Comment from smileycloud
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great punchline
totally unexpected
good rythum and rhyme
good luck in the contest
have a smiley day

 Comment Written 22-Aug-2017

reply by the author on 22-Aug-2017
    Thank you for the read and the encouraging words.
Comment from Rasmine
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Hello!!

Great poem! I'm honored that you chose my photo. I'm on FanStory, but not now so maybe you know me -- I may know you too.

I want to wish you luck in the contest. This is definitely creepy enough!

 Comment Written 20-Aug-2017

reply by the author on 21-Aug-2017
    Great picture. Started the juices flowing. Thanks.
Comment from heavenempress
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Quite thrilling but scary. Horror at work. I ask clarification on the last part when u meant u poisoned her dead. It really sound a very bad relationship. The ending made it the best poem. I highly recommend your work to others.

 Comment Written 20-Aug-2017

reply by the author on 20-Aug-2017
    Thank you for your read and your kind encouragement.