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The deepest secret we ever had.

A true story

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Comment from wilkswrites
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I am so trying to understand why you feel guilty. Did you really think that pointing out this error on the casino's part was the thing to do? Okay, maybe it was, but to be honest with you, I know I would have walked away. I think you did good by holding on to it for so long. I do know how it feels to have a chunk of change, and then not have it anymore due to your own spending habits. Thanks for sharing.

 Comment Written 01-Sep-2017


reply by the author on 03-Sep-2017
    thanks for your kind review, ine. have a good sunday
Comment from Bucketlist
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It takes a lot of courage to write about guilt, but somehow it is cathartic . Maybe you could donate small money ( in � or £) amounts to charities for the homeless, or work with Habitat for Humanity i some way.

 Comment Written 24-Aug-2017


reply by the author on 26-Aug-2017
    Thanks for your kind review, anom.. Have a great weekend
Comment from emptypage
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Well, don't go beating yourselves up too much. I guarantee you, most people have done far worse.

I hope your gambling is under control now--aka, out of your life. I know addictions are not easy to give up.

Well written. Very interesting.

 Comment Written 21-Aug-2017


reply by the author on 23-Aug-2017
    Thanks for your kind review, ine. Have a great week.
Comment from robyn corum
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Dear Mystery Author,

This was a totally unexpected type of story and you wrote it well. I could see it all play out and I could totally relate. We often do things that seem right at the time, but later regret those choices. --frowny face--

A couple of notes, if you'll permit?

1.) We (hung) onto it for years,

2.) But the money is gone: (w)e spent it on online casinos.

Thanks and good luck in the voting!

 Comment Written 20-Aug-2017


reply by the author on 20-Aug-2017
    Thanks for your kind and helpful review, anon. Have a blessed and nice Sunday.
Comment from giraffmang
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Hi there,

I think there may be worse things than this, but everything is on a personal level in what one can live with.

We hang onto it for years - probably hung here rather than hang.


 Comment Written 20-Aug-2017


reply by the author on 20-Aug-2017
    Thanks for your kind and helpful review, anon. Have a blessed and nice Sunday.
Comment from apky
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Well, narrator, I think God has forgiven you and you need to forgive yourself as well. You at last came out with it, told your friend, and now tell it here. You have done everything to earn your forgiveness from your own self:

We were so careful with taking it off, only bit by bit. We hang onto it for years, when we reckoned they could not come after us.

Robert, my husband, told me not to tell anybody. Somewhat later I took my best friend in confidence. She is the only one that knows.

 Comment Written 20-Aug-2017


reply by the author on 20-Aug-2017
    Thanks for your kind and helpful review, anon. Have a blessed and nice Sunday.
Comment from Poetic Friend
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Well, if this poem is non-fictional now FanStorians know your deepest secret
Sadly, you lost your money gambling, which can become addictive, especially online gambling. It is just like playing a video game on the computer, but the only thing is that actual money is not involved with that video game.

Thank you for sharing your story. Your expressed yourself well. I did not notice anything grammar nits. I was too engaged in your story.

 Comment Written 20-Aug-2017


reply by the author on 20-Aug-2017
    Thanks for your kind and helpful review, anon. Have a blessed and nice Sunday.