God's Presence
Breathtaking...............6 total reviews
Comment from clsandau
The words ring so true in your poem. Through faith, God is always with us and the more we realize this, the stronger we are. The picture is quite lovely and peaceful as your poem is. I particularly like the last stanza which is so true. Blessings, Carol
reply by the author on 21-Aug-2017
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The words ring so true in your poem. Through faith, God is always with us and the more we realize this, the stronger we are. The picture is quite lovely and peaceful as your poem is. I particularly like the last stanza which is so true. Blessings, Carol
Comment Written 20-Aug-2017
reply by the author on 21-Aug-2017
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Thank you so much for the excellent review and your exceptional comments. Have a great week!
Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
Harmony,
I enjoyed reading your contest entry on faith. Good job with your message. Your strong faith shines in your well chosen words. The image is great too.
last line 1st verse deepens---> deepen no s
Best wishes in the contest. Jan
reply by the author on 21-Aug-2017
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Harmony,
I enjoyed reading your contest entry on faith. Good job with your message. Your strong faith shines in your well chosen words. The image is great too.
last line 1st verse deepens---> deepen no s
Best wishes in the contest. Jan
Comment Written 20-Aug-2017
reply by the author on 21-Aug-2017
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Hi Jan, Thank you so much for this excellent review and your exceptional comments. Have a great week! Maria
Comment from Poetic Friend
Beautifully written poem, Harmony13. I agree with your sentiments, God's presence is evident in nature and its beauty. I love your description of such. Your faith is also evident in this poem.
The lack of punctuation works fine in this poem. However, you may want to considering capitalizing "his" when referring to God.
Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 21-Aug-2017
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Beautifully written poem, Harmony13. I agree with your sentiments, God's presence is evident in nature and its beauty. I love your description of such. Your faith is also evident in this poem.
The lack of punctuation works fine in this poem. However, you may want to considering capitalizing "his" when referring to God.
Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 20-Aug-2017
reply by the author on 21-Aug-2017
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Thank you so much for the excellent review and your exceptional comments. Thank you also for suggesting I
capitalize "his" which I did with your suggestion. Have a great week!
Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear
This speaks poet's deep faith in God helps him feel God's presence in Nature and helps feel God protects him and walks with him every step and reveals his will at his time; I liked.
reply by the author on 21-Aug-2017
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This speaks poet's deep faith in God helps him feel God's presence in Nature and helps feel God protects him and walks with him every step and reveals his will at his time; I liked.
Comment Written 19-Aug-2017
reply by the author on 21-Aug-2017
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Thank you so much for the excellent review and your great comments. Have a wonderful week!
Comment from brenda faye curtis
Your faith is true, as evidenced by your writing, and I found this piece to be truly inspiring. The reader experiences a sense of contentment, and we can all benefit from that. Best of luck in the contest!
reply by the author on 21-Aug-2017
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Your faith is true, as evidenced by your writing, and I found this piece to be truly inspiring. The reader experiences a sense of contentment, and we can all benefit from that. Best of luck in the contest!
Comment Written 19-Aug-2017
reply by the author on 21-Aug-2017
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Thank you so much for the excellent review and your great comments. Have a wonderful week!
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Bless you, harmony 13, and you have a great week, too!
Comment from nbonner
God is all around us, I truly believe that. He hears our prayers even when we whisper. To have faith is to live. Thank you for sharing and best wishes on the contest
reply by the author on 21-Aug-2017
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God is all around us, I truly believe that. He hears our prayers even when we whisper. To have faith is to live. Thank you for sharing and best wishes on the contest
Comment Written 19-Aug-2017
reply by the author on 21-Aug-2017
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Thank you so much for the excellent review and your great comments! Have a wonderful week!
