Cold
Warm hearts turn cold18 total reviews
Comment from smileycloud
a very nice 5 7 5
the content actually tells a story
even though such a short piece in which to tell it
good luck in the contest
have a smiley day
reply by the author on 20-Aug-2017
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a very nice 5 7 5
the content actually tells a story
even though such a short piece in which to tell it
good luck in the contest
have a smiley day
Comment Written 20-Aug-2017
reply by the author on 20-Aug-2017
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Thank you for you review.
Comment from marybell1
I enjoyed reading your moon contest entry. You followed all the rules for this genre and you chose an appropriate photo.
All the best.
Marybell1.
reply by the author on 20-Aug-2017
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I enjoyed reading your moon contest entry. You followed all the rules for this genre and you chose an appropriate photo.
All the best.
Marybell1.
Comment Written 20-Aug-2017
reply by the author on 20-Aug-2017
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Thank you for your review.
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You are most welcome.
Marybell1.
Comment from Gert sherwood
Hello author
what a great entry for this prompt contest
you words go perfect with amazing vivid picture
Best to you
Gert
reply by the author on 19-Aug-2017
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Hello author
what a great entry for this prompt contest
you words go perfect with amazing vivid picture
Best to you
Gert
Comment Written 19-Aug-2017
reply by the author on 19-Aug-2017
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Thank you for your review.
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You are welcome
Gert
Comment from robyn corum
Dear Mystery Poet,
This is a cool and very relative poem -- perfect timing with the eclipse so near! *smile* This poem perfectly describes the moment of the darkening - when the skies grow black and the warmth of the sun is gone for a bit. Nice job! Good luck in the contest!
reply by the author on 19-Aug-2017
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Dear Mystery Poet,
This is a cool and very relative poem -- perfect timing with the eclipse so near! *smile* This poem perfectly describes the moment of the darkening - when the skies grow black and the warmth of the sun is gone for a bit. Nice job! Good luck in the contest!
Comment Written 19-Aug-2017
reply by the author on 19-Aug-2017
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Thank you for your review.
Comment from kiwigirl2821
Wow! This one is short sweet and to the point. It is in perfect format and the message is crystal clear to this reader. That last line was the hard punch. "Turns warm hearts cold" Yikes ... great write good luck. xoxo Kiwi
reply by the author on 19-Aug-2017
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Wow! This one is short sweet and to the point. It is in perfect format and the message is crystal clear to this reader. That last line was the hard punch. "Turns warm hearts cold" Yikes ... great write good luck. xoxo Kiwi
Comment Written 19-Aug-2017
reply by the author on 19-Aug-2017
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Thank you for your review. I tried to get a tone, I wanted to leave the reader cold, because that is how I feel when the sun disappears.
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written 5-7-5 poem about the moon and the eclipse of the sun this coming week. It is a natural wonder and it does not happen often. We should enjoy this wonder that many of us will not see again.
reply by the author on 19-Aug-2017
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A very well-written 5-7-5 poem about the moon and the eclipse of the sun this coming week. It is a natural wonder and it does not happen often. We should enjoy this wonder that many of us will not see again.
Comment Written 19-Aug-2017
reply by the author on 19-Aug-2017
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Thank you for your review.
Comment from nbonner
Nice. Reading this puts me right there as the sun sets and the moon rises. Thank you for sharing and good luck on the contest
reply by the author on 19-Aug-2017
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Nice. Reading this puts me right there as the sun sets and the moon rises. Thank you for sharing and good luck on the contest
Comment Written 19-Aug-2017
reply by the author on 19-Aug-2017
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Thank you for your review.
Comment from Bill Schott
This 5-7-5, Cold, has the right set up and comes in advance of the expected eclipse. The extension to our own shadowed empathy is an interesting connection that needs to be explored further.
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reply by the author on 19-Aug-2017
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This 5-7-5, Cold, has the right set up and comes in advance of the expected eclipse. The extension to our own shadowed empathy is an interesting connection that needs to be explored further.
This rating does not count towards story rating or author rank.
The highest and the lowest rating are not included in calculations.
Comment Written 19-Aug-2017
reply by the author on 19-Aug-2017
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Thank your for your review.
