Comment from Teri7

Excellent

This is very interesting about the poor little mole. You used very cute wording and very cute art work. It did make me sad that it was cute in half. Cute job. Blessings, Teri

 Comment Written 19-Aug-2017

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reply by the author on 19-Aug-2017

Thanks, Teri

Comment from despiser

Exceptional

Glad I'm not your neighbour. I knew this could happen to earthworms, but moles? Lucky you didn't slice it or your neighbour might have had a mole on the face. What kind of shrew would that make you? Clever and witty Bill, much enjoyed reading.

-D

 Comment Written 19-Aug-2017

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reply by the author on 19-Aug-2017

Thanks, d, for the incredible review. Bill

Comment from pome lover

Excellent

ounce of sad is poetic license.
this is some poem. glad I'm not your neighbor, but I think you had an eagle! pretty good with a pitching wedge.
I'm beginning to feel the same way about white wings, which I call pigeons.
zombie mole - pretty funny - though I doubt your neighbor thought so.
anyway, cute poem.
pome lover

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 Comment Written 19-Aug-2017

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reply by the author on 19-Aug-2017

This actually happened! No, I'm kidding. Or...am...I?

Comment from F. Wehr3

Excellent

That was very funny! I really enjoyed the chipping wedge image. I found one thing for your consideration.

There was not an once of sad--Did you mean an ounce?

Well done,
Russell

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 Comment Written 19-Aug-2017

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reply by the author on 19-Aug-2017

I did indeed. Thank you.