Why don't monsters die
A child's question40 total reviews
Comment from nbonner
This is such a sad story. I know of these type of monsters and they have no conscious. My experience they should all rot in h!@@. That's just my thoughts. The poem was nicely written and I see no flaws. Excellent!
reply by the author on 15-Sep-2017
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This is such a sad story. I know of these type of monsters and they have no conscious. My experience they should all rot in h!@@. That's just my thoughts. The poem was nicely written and I see no flaws. Excellent!
Comment Written 14-Sep-2017
reply by the author on 15-Sep-2017
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Thank you very much for your excellent review****kahpot
Comment from evesayshi
In my opinion, a beautifully rhyming soliloquy bewailing the foes and hardships we encounter in life, drawing them each to us, either accidentally or by confused choice. It tells of abandonment and the emptiness rendered by these dark events...
reply by the author on 15-Sep-2017
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In my opinion, a beautifully rhyming soliloquy bewailing the foes and hardships we encounter in life, drawing them each to us, either accidentally or by confused choice. It tells of abandonment and the emptiness rendered by these dark events...
Comment Written 14-Sep-2017
reply by the author on 15-Sep-2017
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Thank you very much****kahpot
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You are very welcome...
Comment from LIJ Red
I think careless inattentive parents can program children to self-destruct under stress. This does not excuse monsters, but it does empower them. Tragic string of rhyming couplets. Excellent post.
reply by the author on 15-Sep-2017
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I think careless inattentive parents can program children to self-destruct under stress. This does not excuse monsters, but it does empower them. Tragic string of rhyming couplets. Excellent post.
Comment Written 14-Sep-2017
reply by the author on 15-Sep-2017
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Thank you very much****kahpotThank you very much for an excellent and understanding review***8
Comment from ronnie k
IT is more than amazing that tragic placed upon paper can reveal its seft in such beauty with words, I am almost shame to say I so enjoyed this write but it is the beauty of poetry that says I LOVED IT.
reply by the author on 15-Sep-2017
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IT is more than amazing that tragic placed upon paper can reveal its seft in such beauty with words, I am almost shame to say I so enjoyed this write but it is the beauty of poetry that says I LOVED IT.
Comment Written 13-Sep-2017
reply by the author on 15-Sep-2017
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Thank you very much for an excellent and understanding review****kahpot
Comment from pome lover
you expressed that person's feelings well. and your title is perfect.
child molesters ARE monsters - no soul, no morals, no shame.
I hope you can help your friend put the past aside and build a life of positive thoughts, accomplishments and joy. Don't let the monster win! congratulations on being recognized. good job.
pome lover
reply by the author on 15-Sep-2017
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you expressed that person's feelings well. and your title is perfect.
child molesters ARE monsters - no soul, no morals, no shame.
I hope you can help your friend put the past aside and build a life of positive thoughts, accomplishments and joy. Don't let the monster win! congratulations on being recognized. good job.
pome lover
Comment Written 13-Sep-2017
reply by the author on 15-Sep-2017
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Thank you very much, and we will try****kahpot
Comment from Gert sherwood
Hello kahpot
You poem yes, is so well rhymed with a very intense feeling asking why and how can these monsters that molest and abuse an innocence child or even an adult can feel no remorse or guilt
Gert
reply by the author on 13-Sep-2017
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Hello kahpot
You poem yes, is so well rhymed with a very intense feeling asking why and how can these monsters that molest and abuse an innocence child or even an adult can feel no remorse or guilt
Gert
Comment Written 13-Sep-2017
reply by the author on 13-Sep-2017
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Thank you very much ****kahpot
Comment from dragonpoet
This shows how the physical effects of rape heal but the emotional ones don't. It is sad that some get away with this crime. And these are really monsters even if they are mentally impaired. If so they need to be in mental wards and be helped.
Maybe castration should be a part of the punishment for male rapists but what do you do for females that rape boys?
Keep writing
dragonpoet
reply by the author on 13-Sep-2017
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This shows how the physical effects of rape heal but the emotional ones don't. It is sad that some get away with this crime. And these are really monsters even if they are mentally impaired. If so they need to be in mental wards and be helped.
Maybe castration should be a part of the punishment for male rapists but what do you do for females that rape boys?
Keep writing
dragonpoet
Comment Written 13-Sep-2017
reply by the author on 13-Sep-2017
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Thank you very much and a good question, maybe some sort of sterilization, many thanks****kahpot
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You're very welcome.
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Comment from Hitcher
A powerful poem that definitely stirs the emotions when one reads it. I am one who has similar beliefs friend. The rape and abuse of a child cannot be forgiven. To steal their innocence, their future, their ability to live a normal life needs a punishment that suits the crime... Death seams just!!
reply by the author on 13-Sep-2017
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A powerful poem that definitely stirs the emotions when one reads it. I am one who has similar beliefs friend. The rape and abuse of a child cannot be forgiven. To steal their innocence, their future, their ability to live a normal life needs a punishment that suits the crime... Death seams just!!
Comment Written 13-Sep-2017
reply by the author on 13-Sep-2017
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Thank you very much for an excellent and understanding review****kahpot
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
A scary thought and I tend to think they exist only in our minds, yet there are real monsters in human form that walk the streets, great rhymes with a chilling message, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 13-Sep-2017
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A scary thought and I tend to think they exist only in our minds, yet there are real monsters in human form that walk the streets, great rhymes with a chilling message, love Dolly x
Comment Written 13-Sep-2017
reply by the author on 13-Sep-2017
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Thank you very much****kahpot
Comment from Possummagic
This is a very powerful piece of poetry. I enjoyed the easy flow of the verses and found it well structured with good rhyming. The imagery was amazing and went well with the poem. PM
reply by the author on 13-Sep-2017
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This is a very powerful piece of poetry. I enjoyed the easy flow of the verses and found it well structured with good rhyming. The imagery was amazing and went well with the poem. PM
Comment Written 13-Sep-2017
reply by the author on 13-Sep-2017
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Thank you very much****kahpot
