Waiting At Heaven's Gates
something for my special friend34 total reviews
Comment from Mrs Happy Poet
Hello my friend this is well written and indeed very beautiful to know that you have something to look forward to when you leave this world is reassuring well done regards Jill
reply by the author on 23-Aug-2017
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Hello my friend this is well written and indeed very beautiful to know that you have something to look forward to when you leave this world is reassuring well done regards Jill
Comment Written 19-Aug-2017
reply by the author on 23-Aug-2017
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Jill, thank you for your excellent review and comments. I truly enjoy your reviews.
I hope you have a great and enjoyable day my friend,,,,,,,,,,Jim
Comment from nbonner
Lovely love poem. To finally be with the person you were meant to be with, there are no words. I love the imagery used here. Thank you for sharing
reply by the author on 23-Aug-2017
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Lovely love poem. To finally be with the person you were meant to be with, there are no words. I love the imagery used here. Thank you for sharing
Comment Written 19-Aug-2017
reply by the author on 23-Aug-2017
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thank you for this excellent review and comments,,,,,,,,,Jim
Comment from Pantygynt
This alternately rhyming piece in quartrains has a beautiful poignancy. Having followed much of your earlier writing I am aware of who this is for and I know the way you feel. Even eternity together will clearly not be too long for you two.
reply by the author on 23-Aug-2017
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This alternately rhyming piece in quartrains has a beautiful poignancy. Having followed much of your earlier writing I am aware of who this is for and I know the way you feel. Even eternity together will clearly not be too long for you two.
Comment Written 19-Aug-2017
reply by the author on 23-Aug-2017
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Jim, thank you for this great review and your comments. I thought it an ordinary poem and I didn't have the resources to promote it, that special friend did. I am curious to know who you think she is. I will confirm your answer if you are right. One other author told me who she is and that person was right.
Have a great day my friend,,,,,,,,,,Jim
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I don't know her name but she has made you very happy.
Comment from Pullmanspb
Reminds me of a dilemma my mother-in-law used to discuss. Her first husband did during D-Day and her second husband died about 10-11 years ago. If all 3 of them go to heaven, which one will she be with and what will there ages be.
Your lovely poem brought back this unanswerable dilemma.
Steven
reply by the author on 23-Aug-2017
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Reminds me of a dilemma my mother-in-law used to discuss. Her first husband did during D-Day and her second husband died about 10-11 years ago. If all 3 of them go to heaven, which one will she be with and what will there ages be.
Your lovely poem brought back this unanswerable dilemma.
Steven
Comment Written 19-Aug-2017
reply by the author on 23-Aug-2017
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Steven for me I do not have that problem. I'm not married so I have no one that means anything to me. We share many things and this is why we have a special friendship forever!
Thank you for your review and comments,,,,,,,,,Jim
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And, of course, I catch my typo after posting my comment. Her first husband "died" during D-Day
Comment from marybell1
I enjoyed reading your spiritual poem "Waiting at Heaven's Gates. You rhymed it well except in the first stanza. Date and gates do not rhyme. Adding an 's' alteres the rhyming.
All the best in the contest.
Marybell1.
reply by the author on 23-Aug-2017
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I enjoyed reading your spiritual poem "Waiting at Heaven's Gates. You rhymed it well except in the first stanza. Date and gates do not rhyme. Adding an 's' alteres the rhyming.
All the best in the contest.
Marybell1.
Comment Written 19-Aug-2017
reply by the author on 23-Aug-2017
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Thank you for your review and suggestion about the s,,,,,,,,,,,Jim
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You are most welcome.
Marybell1.
Comment from Unspoken94
Jim, it is so good to hear from you! Welcome
back! This is a wonderful poem of hope and
peace. But I assume that you and your
significant other had many days ahead. I am
so glad that you found each other and that you
were open to this relationship. -Bill
reply by the author on 23-Aug-2017
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Jim, it is so good to hear from you! Welcome
back! This is a wonderful poem of hope and
peace. But I assume that you and your
significant other had many days ahead. I am
so glad that you found each other and that you
were open to this relationship. -Bill
Comment Written 19-Aug-2017
reply by the author on 23-Aug-2017
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Bill, it is good to be back after a very close call at death. They had to revive me in the ER and moved me into a cardiac care unit with machines hooked up to me. I had kidney failure and a very high grade MRSA infection throughout my body. I was unconscious for three days after being put in isolation. Tough twelve days, Bill, but here I am on a long road to recovery.
thank you for your excellent review and great comments. It is good to be back, maybe part time at first. this woman truly means so much to me Bill, but there is many miles separating us. we manage to enjoy the greatest of friendship that I have never ever had in my life.
Bill, I hope you have a great day my friend,,,,,,,,,,Jim
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Geez, Jim. When you are well enough, MOVE! MOVE!
There is no good excuse.
Comment from angelface2
This is a very lovely poem, Jim. I made me think of my husband, who is waiting up there for me. I'd like to make one suggestion. In the 4th verse, put a semi-colon after the second sentence, as the 3rd sentence only continues on and I would eliminate will from that sentence. Makes better sense, I think. Miss Sally aka angelface2
reply by the author on 23-Aug-2017
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This is a very lovely poem, Jim. I made me think of my husband, who is waiting up there for me. I'd like to make one suggestion. In the 4th verse, put a semi-colon after the second sentence, as the 3rd sentence only continues on and I would eliminate will from that sentence. Makes better sense, I think. Miss Sally aka angelface2
Comment Written 18-Aug-2017
reply by the author on 23-Aug-2017
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thank you for your most excellent review and comments. I will definitely look at your suggestions to help make this much better.
Miss Sally I like your aka of angelface2. I hope you have a great enjoyable day my friend,,,,,,,,,,,Jim
Comment from sharonlshelley
this was lovely and you should carry on writing as this reads lovely and the picture really fitting with you work, carry on writing i loved it lots sharon
reply by the author on 23-Aug-2017
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this was lovely and you should carry on writing as this reads lovely and the picture really fitting with you work, carry on writing i loved it lots sharon
Comment Written 18-Aug-2017
reply by the author on 23-Aug-2017
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thank you Sharon for your review and your encouraging comments. I hope you have a great enjoyable day,,,,,,,,,,Jim
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
A great tribute to your special friend, filled with warm sentiments and kind words, eternal friendship is something rare and precious, best wishes, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 23-Aug-2017
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A great tribute to your special friend, filled with warm sentiments and kind words, eternal friendship is something rare and precious, best wishes, love Dolly x
Comment Written 18-Aug-2017
reply by the author on 23-Aug-2017
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Dolly, thank you for a most excellent review and comments. We care for each other deeply and we are very special friends who plan on spending eternity together.
I hope you have a great enjoyable day my friend,,,,,,,,,,,Jim
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
Hello, Jim,
Your poem is very sad and romantic about two lovers that are soulmates and have a deep connection that nothing can break. Good job, honey.
Gypsy hugs
reply by the author on 18-Aug-2017
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Hello, Jim,
Your poem is very sad and romantic about two lovers that are soulmates and have a deep connection that nothing can break. Good job, honey.
Gypsy hugs
Comment Written 18-Aug-2017
reply by the author on 18-Aug-2017
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Gypsy, thank you for this most excellent review. We live miles apart, but this friendship began on June sixth, 2016 and has gotten stronger each day. We have become soulmates and have talked about the two of us spending an eternity together.
I'm not sure if I am coming back to fanstory full time. Back in June, I came very close to dying and spent twelve days in the cardiac ward under isolation. It was touch and go for the first five days. Gypsy, I'm still struggling with different physical problems. I will try to do my best to get back into the flow.
Have a great day and weekend,,,, Jim
