Waiting At Heaven's Gates
something for my special friend34 total reviews
Comment from l.raven
HI Jim, I hope you are doing better my friend...this is a wonderful tribute to your special friend...everyone should have someone in their lives so wonderful to spend eternity ...I have been off the site for a couple weeks...and just got back...I love your poem you...and the stunning picture...very nicely written...love Linda xxoo
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HI Jim, I hope you are doing better my friend...this is a wonderful tribute to your special friend...everyone should have someone in their lives so wonderful to spend eternity ...I have been off the site for a couple weeks...and just got back...I love your poem you...and the stunning picture...very nicely written...love Linda xxoo
Comment Written 24-Aug-2017
Comment from F. Wehr3
Beautiful work, Jim! I hope your friend knows how special you are. I'm sure she does. Please, take it easy and follow your doctor's orders.
Take care,
Russell
reply by the author on 23-Aug-2017
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Beautiful work, Jim! I hope your friend knows how special you are. I'm sure she does. Please, take it easy and follow your doctor's orders.
Take care,
Russell
Comment Written 20-Aug-2017
reply by the author on 23-Aug-2017
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Russell, thank you for this excellent review and comments. Oh she knows because she urged me to post it, so I did.
I am doing everything that I am told to do and getting stronger each day. Many thanks for your concern. Take care my friend,,,,,,,Jim
Comment from Boogienights
This is a lovely poem about faith in a life after death, and also a loving tribute to your friend. It can be such a comfort to believe that there is something more after we die. Great imagery, very descriptive and gentle words. Thank you so much for sharing.
reply by the author on 23-Aug-2017
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This is a lovely poem about faith in a life after death, and also a loving tribute to your friend. It can be such a comfort to believe that there is something more after we die. Great imagery, very descriptive and gentle words. Thank you so much for sharing.
Comment Written 20-Aug-2017
reply by the author on 23-Aug-2017
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Boogienights, thank you for your excellent review, but most of all your exceptional comments. I truly appreciate them. Her and I are looking forward to that day in the future when we will spend an eternity together. Take care and have a great day,,,,,,,,Jim
Comment from Mitchell Brontė
Hi
What a deep and meaningful poem for a special friend.
Which describes your relationship with such vivid imagination.
The wonderful words throughout paint a fantastic picture which strengthens your feelings brilliantly.
and a great picture to accompany
Mitchell.
reply by the author on 23-Aug-2017
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Hi
What a deep and meaningful poem for a special friend.
Which describes your relationship with such vivid imagination.
The wonderful words throughout paint a fantastic picture which strengthens your feelings brilliantly.
and a great picture to accompany
Mitchell.
Comment Written 20-Aug-2017
reply by the author on 23-Aug-2017
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Mitchell, she is the only woman that I have ever considered my greatest friend. we share so many things but the most meaningful one is spending an eternity in Heaven together. Because of our age difference and my health issues, I most likely will get there first.
thank you ever so much for your very excellent review and comments. I truly appreciate them my friend,,,,,,,,Jim
Comment from Analie Shepherd
What a beautiful picture you have created here! One of the things I love about it, is that you really truly seem to be talking to the one you love ... not to me. I almost feel like an intruder, except you so graciously have invited the reader to enter in, and experience this lovely piece of art. Thank you!
It is a poem without guile, and no need to justify anything. It is honest and true. Worthy praise indeed! And well earned.
Blessings, Analie
reply by the author on 23-Aug-2017
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What a beautiful picture you have created here! One of the things I love about it, is that you really truly seem to be talking to the one you love ... not to me. I almost feel like an intruder, except you so graciously have invited the reader to enter in, and experience this lovely piece of art. Thank you!
It is a poem without guile, and no need to justify anything. It is honest and true. Worthy praise indeed! And well earned.
Blessings, Analie
Comment Written 20-Aug-2017
reply by the author on 23-Aug-2017
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Analie, I want to thank you for your most incredible review and very poignant comments. I'm sincerely glad you entered into the world of this poem. This comes straight from my heart for this woman.
I hope you have a great day and happiness,,,,,,,,,,,Jim
Comment from Daniel Silverhawk
A twist on the afterlife. A word spoken from the one that has passed away and awaits her friend in the afterlife.
"Till then, I will sit next to your named star to reminisce" I love his line. It shows that we have stars named after us long before we ever die. What a wonderful picture of what awaits us in the afterlife with our family and friends home before us
reply by the author on 23-Aug-2017
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A twist on the afterlife. A word spoken from the one that has passed away and awaits her friend in the afterlife.
"Till then, I will sit next to your named star to reminisce" I love his line. It shows that we have stars named after us long before we ever die. What a wonderful picture of what awaits us in the afterlife with our family and friends home before us
Comment Written 19-Aug-2017
reply by the author on 23-Aug-2017
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Daniel, thank you for this most excellent review. This woman is very important to me and we plan to spend an eternity together in the afterlife.
I hope you have a great day my friend,,,,,,,,,,,Jim
Comment from harmony13
Excellent Poem! The poem is descriptive, creative, and thought provoking. The reader pondered on the words of this poem. The artwork compliments both the
words and theme of this poem.
reply by the author on 23-Aug-2017
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Excellent Poem! The poem is descriptive, creative, and thought provoking. The reader pondered on the words of this poem. The artwork compliments both the
words and theme of this poem.
Comment Written 19-Aug-2017
reply by the author on 23-Aug-2017
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thank you harmony for your excellent review and comments. I thought this was ordinary, but, she wanted me to post it. I did. I found through the reviews I received, it was not ordinary.
I hope you have a great day,,,,,,,,,,,Jim
Comment from Pam (respa)
-Nice to see you back on FS.
-Nice image.
-Author notes appreciated.
-Nicely penned poem, Jim,
with very good imagery.
-The meaning this person has
in your life is expressed very well:
"Those emotions we shared, created a life of bliss"
-Thanks for sharing.
reply by the author on 23-Aug-2017
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-Nice to see you back on FS.
-Nice image.
-Author notes appreciated.
-Nicely penned poem, Jim,
with very good imagery.
-The meaning this person has
in your life is expressed very well:
"Those emotions we shared, created a life of bliss"
-Thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 19-Aug-2017
reply by the author on 23-Aug-2017
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Pam, it is nice to be back. I missed the interaction quite lot. All of these words are true, honest and straight from my heart. Can't help feeling this way. Heck Pam, she felt it was that good.
Thank you so much for the welcoming back and your truly excellent review and comments.
I hope you have a great day my friend,,,,,,,,Jim
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You are very welcome, Jim, and it's nice that you are glad to be back on FS, too! You have a great day and a great rest of your week.
Comment from rspoet
Hello Jim,
This is an exception poem
speaking of eternity and the joy of being together
with special friends, soulmates and loved ones
"We will take long walks along Heaven's lake shore.
Then move among the stars and will ride the Milky Way too"
Excellent rhyming, but it is what's inside that soars
Wonderful picture to match
Sorry I'm out of sixes
Nicely done
RS
reply by the author on 23-Aug-2017
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Hello Jim,
This is an exception poem
speaking of eternity and the joy of being together
with special friends, soulmates and loved ones
"We will take long walks along Heaven's lake shore.
Then move among the stars and will ride the Milky Way too"
Excellent rhyming, but it is what's inside that soars
Wonderful picture to match
Sorry I'm out of sixes
Nicely done
RS
Comment Written 19-Aug-2017
reply by the author on 23-Aug-2017
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RS, thank you for your excellent review and comments. I have building this for some time and finally put it together. All of these words comes from my heart and we share the same thoughts and feelings about our eternal life together.
I hope you have a great day my friend,,,,,,,,,,Jim
Comment from RebelRose
I'm sure your friend finds this very touching, as for I. It is so emotion-filled. You certainly put your heart into it. Rhyme scheme is good and it flows well. Thanks for sharing your thoughts and feelings.
reply by the author on 23-Aug-2017
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I'm sure your friend finds this very touching, as for I. It is so emotion-filled. You certainly put your heart into it. Rhyme scheme is good and it flows well. Thanks for sharing your thoughts and feelings.
Comment Written 19-Aug-2017
reply by the author on 23-Aug-2017
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RebelRose, thank you for this excellent review. I have some very deep emotions for this woman and my special friend.
I hope you have a great and an enjoyable day,,,,,,,,,Jim
