Pink Top
responding to Joy and Robyn's challenge, free verse w/rhymes8 total reviews
Comment from robyn corum
hahaha! That's pretty fun! I thought, when you said pink top, that you were going to mention a pencil, too. (Cause of the eraser on top!) haha! Yep, you have me fooled! Thanks for playing!
reply by the author on 18-Aug-2017
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hahaha! That's pretty fun! I thought, when you said pink top, that you were going to mention a pencil, too. (Cause of the eraser on top!) haha! Yep, you have me fooled! Thanks for playing!
Comment Written 18-Aug-2017
reply by the author on 18-Aug-2017
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thxs for stopping by and reading your challenged poemly story. lol
lulube
Comment from TAB_that's me
Well you did the challenge. It sounds like fun. It sounds like you didn't like pink when you were a kid. It brought magic I guess but like your Mom said, not the right kind. lol.
teresa
reply by the author on 18-Aug-2017
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Well you did the challenge. It sounds like fun. It sounds like you didn't like pink when you were a kid. It brought magic I guess but like your Mom said, not the right kind. lol.
teresa
Comment Written 17-Aug-2017
reply by the author on 18-Aug-2017
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You're right, I never liked pink, but I do now. thxs for your great comments and review.
lulube
Comment from c_lucas
A very interesting pairing, of which, I need to apologize to another poet. This is very well written with a smooth flow of words, making for a very interesting read.
reply by the author on 18-Aug-2017
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A very interesting pairing, of which, I need to apologize to another poet. This is very well written with a smooth flow of words, making for a very interesting read.
Comment Written 17-Aug-2017
reply by the author on 18-Aug-2017
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glad you enjoyed the read. Mistook another's work? It happens to all of us.
thxs for your review
lulube
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For my sin, I sentenced myself to thirty lashes with a wet noodle. Oh! the pain. LOL
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almost like self medicating eh? lol
lulube
Comment from Janilou
Very cute poem. I loved the twist at the end and was not expecting it. Hahahahaha. Sixth grade indeed. I thought you did an excellent job with this writing challenge and wish you all the best!
Very cute indeed.
Jan
reply by the author on 17-Aug-2017
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Very cute poem. I loved the twist at the end and was not expecting it. Hahahahaha. Sixth grade indeed. I thought you did an excellent job with this writing challenge and wish you all the best!
Very cute indeed.
Jan
Comment Written 16-Aug-2017
reply by the author on 17-Aug-2017
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thxs for enthusiastic comments. A great response. and thxs for the best wishes.
lulube
Comment from BOO ghost
Pretty presentation. I s a eye popper! Colors pop out at ya'. BOO's favorite quatrain: Luckily, the teacher finally speaks,
All heads turn to read their papers
All but one, the cutest of them all
I stared into his eyes; they were so dreamy
A magic top, that brings about thoughts so steamy
Well done like magic!
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reply by the author on 17-Aug-2017
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Pretty presentation. I s a eye popper! Colors pop out at ya'. BOO's favorite quatrain: Luckily, the teacher finally speaks,
All heads turn to read their papers
All but one, the cutest of them all
I stared into his eyes; they were so dreamy
A magic top, that brings about thoughts so steamy
Well done like magic!
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Comment Written 16-Aug-2017
reply by the author on 17-Aug-2017
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What a fantastic presentation for a review. I must follow you to see how your poetry reads. thxs for this fun review
lulube
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Anytime at all... BOO likes fun!
Comment from Joy Graham
Oh why didn't they sell magic pink tops when I was in school? High marks would have been helpful and allowed me to imagine a career. Tee hee hee. You have good imagination, Lu :) I'm glad you joined in with the magic fun. We inspire each other.
reply by the author on 17-Aug-2017
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Oh why didn't they sell magic pink tops when I was in school? High marks would have been helpful and allowed me to imagine a career. Tee hee hee. You have good imagination, Lu :) I'm glad you joined in with the magic fun. We inspire each other.
Comment Written 16-Aug-2017
reply by the author on 17-Aug-2017
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We certainly do inspire each other. Glad you approved of this bit. Thxs for your review, Joy
lulube
Comment from Badger_29
I gave this six because of its bouncy, up-beat rhythm, and great rhyme and meter. It also conveys a very fun and ironic message, one that we can all relate to. As I read, it brought back memories of my fashion statements in school, which ranges from the professional look, to total hippy, complete with tie-dye pants, shirt, and shorts!
Great Fun!
Blessings,
Brother Badger
reply by the author on 17-Aug-2017
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I gave this six because of its bouncy, up-beat rhythm, and great rhyme and meter. It also conveys a very fun and ironic message, one that we can all relate to. As I read, it brought back memories of my fashion statements in school, which ranges from the professional look, to total hippy, complete with tie-dye pants, shirt, and shorts!
Great Fun!
Blessings,
Brother Badger
Comment Written 16-Aug-2017
reply by the author on 17-Aug-2017
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You kept a tie-dyed shirt from back then didn't you. Am I the only one that did? lol
Thxs for your awesome comments and review. Glad you liked it.
lulube and for the blinging 6 stars here! here!
Comment from rheabug
So cute! I really liked this poem and the way it was presented for the post. You should do well in the contest.Thank you for sharing with the fanstory community. Hugs.......
reply by the author on 16-Aug-2017
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So cute! I really liked this poem and the way it was presented for the post. You should do well in the contest.Thank you for sharing with the fanstory community. Hugs.......
Comment Written 16-Aug-2017
reply by the author on 16-Aug-2017
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thxs for your great comments and review. It was fun to do.
lulube
