Comment from Sandra Stoner-Mitchell

Excellent

They certainly do! This is a perfect love poem contest entry, Patty, it says so much about the love between two people. The ending tells it all. Well done and good luck! :) Sandra xxx

 Comment Written 12-Aug-2017

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reply by the author on 12-Aug-2017

Hi Sandra; thank you so much for the wonderful review. I had a good time writing this one,

~patty~

Comment from Mitchell Brontė

Excellent

Hi Patty
Really enjoyed this beautiful love poem, which flowed effortlessly,
lovely rhythm and lines throughout, stitched fantastically well
which enables your words to sell themselves to the reader.
I particularly enjoyed the imagery shown which paints such a vivid picture in the mind......an excellent poem, that was a pleasure to read.
Mitchell.

 Comment Written 12-Aug-2017

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reply by the author on 12-Aug-2017

Hi Mitchell; thank you so much for your lovely review. I'm glad you liked this short poem of love,

~patty~

Comment from c_lucas

Excellent

A tumble between the sheets can save a relationship. This is very well written with a smooth flow of words, making for a very good read. Good luck in your contest.

 Comment Written 12-Aug-2017

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reply by the author on 12-Aug-2017

Hi Charlie; thank you so much for the lovely review. I had a great time writing this,

~patty~

reply by c_lucas on 12-Aug-2017

You're welcome, Patty. Charlie

Comment from Dolly'sPoems

Excellent

A night of passion and loving in this naughty tale of togetherness and love, your poem certainly came alive and I wish you luck with the contest Patty, love Dolly x

 Comment Written 12-Aug-2017

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reply by the author on 12-Aug-2017

Hi Dolly; thank you so much for the lovely review of this piece. It was a fun write!

~patty~

Comment from duchessofdrumborg

Excellent

"Night Work", is an extremely well-written and semi-erotic piece. This talented poet's work was a pleasure to both read and review. I look forward to seeing your next post.

 Comment Written 12-Aug-2017

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reply by the author on 12-Aug-2017

Hi there; thank you so much for stopping by to read and review. I had a lot of fun writing this piece,

~patty~

reply by duchessofdrumborg on 12-Aug-2017

Hi ~Patty~, you're more than welcome.

Best wishes, the Duchess

Comment from DR DIP

Excellent

Short and sweet Patty. A picture tells a thousand words. Great description of your lover as well Patty. Its quite obvious judging by the sheets what sort of night you had lol thanks for sharing.

dip

 Comment Written 12-Aug-2017

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reply by the author on 12-Aug-2017

hi dip; thank you for the lovely review. I enjoyed writing this poem,

~patty~

Comment from Sandra du Plessis

Excellent

A very well-written Whitney poem. The evidence of a night filled with love and passion can be seen in the rumpled bed sheets. It takes hard work at night for sure.

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 Comment Written 12-Aug-2017

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reply by the author on 12-Aug-2017

Hi Sandra; thank you so much for the lovely review. Rumpled sheets are fun,

~patty~

Comment from Barb Hensongispsaca

Excellent

A perfectly done whitney love poem with each line leading up to the crumpled sheets telling the story. Very well composed, flows so good

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 Comment Written 12-Aug-2017

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reply by the author on 12-Aug-2017

thank you, Barb. I had fun writing this one,

~patty~