Comment from barbara.wilkey

Exceptional

I really enjoyed reading your Love Poem contest entry. It flowed smoothly and is a wonderful poem. Thank you for sharing and I wish you the best of luck with the contest.

 Comment Written 12-Aug-2017

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reply by the author on 12-Aug-2017

Hi Barbara; thank you so much for the lovely review. I appreciate your comments and support of my work.

~patty~

Comment from Bill O'Bier

Excellent

A real lover is a man who can thrill you just by touching your head or smiling into your eyes - just at the touch of that lover, you become a poet. Sounds like that's what you have. Thanks for sharing.

All the best...
Bill~

 Comment Written 12-Aug-2017

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reply by the author on 12-Aug-2017

Hi Bill; thank you so much for the lovely review and analysis of the poem. I do indeed have all of that,

~patty~

Comment from Marvin Calloway

Excellent

You paint a nice picture of love, reciprocated. Another's life brings life to yours.
It always amazes me how writers like you get can impart so much meaning into so few words.

 Comment Written 12-Aug-2017

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reply by the author on 12-Aug-2017

Hi Marv; thank you so much for the lovely review. I enjoyed putting this poem and presentation together.

~patty~

Comment from RebelRose

Excellent

I don't know if this contest is over yet but this is a good entry. You found the perfect picture to enhance your words.

 Comment Written 12-Aug-2017

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reply by the author on 12-Aug-2017

Hi there; I think the end date for this contest is way off in the future, I just thought this poem would be perfect. I'm glad you enjoyed the piece and the presentation,

~patty~

Comment from gsuarez

Excellent

Not aware of Whitney poetry. So clever. As for the content the words speak of an evening of unbridled passion. The artwork is Very complimentary.

 Comment Written 12-Aug-2017

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reply by the author on 12-Aug-2017

thank you so much for stopping by to read and review. The Whitney poetic form is one I came across on this site, completed by another writer.

I'm glad you enjoyed the poem; thank you for the accolades,

~patty~

Comment from Dean Kuch

Excellent

Heh-heh-heh...
Yes, Patty. Rumpled sheets can disclose quite a bit to those who might see them and were not privy to the previous night's activities.
Of course it all depends upon who was there the night before in relation to how they got in that condition. For example, two drinking buddies getting together for an all nighter wouldn't necessarily convey the same tale as a guy and his lady friend.
Or, a man and his pet Chimpanzee, lol.
At least I would hope not!
Your Whitney Poem is in good form and well composed.
Best wishes to you in the Love Poem Contest.

 Comment Written 12-Aug-2017

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reply by the author on 12-Aug-2017

Hi Dean; sheets can get rumpled so easily. However, this love poem speaks of romance and hot sex.

There, I said it,

Thanks for reading. I'm glad you enjoyed it,

~patty~

reply by Dean Kuch on 12-Aug-2017

Hahahaha, yeah, I kinda' figured, Patty.
You're welcome. :)

Comment from alvina224224

Exceptional

Excellent example of the Whitney form, patty. I think poets who include such a clear explanation of the form deserve extra points, as they are our teachers, as well as role models. Your final line 'Rumpled sheets tell the night's tale', not only summarises the whole poem, but uses the sheets as traitors. Well done!

 Comment Written 12-Aug-2017

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reply by the author on 12-Aug-2017

Hi there; thank you so much for your time to read and review. I'm appreciative of your supporting words, as well as gratitude for the guidance given in my author's notes. I'm glad my poem was joyful to read, and you wholly approve of my last line,

~patty~
ps; the shining sixth star is lovely!

Comment from patcelaw

Excellent

Patty, this is a wonderfully worded romantic Whitney poem. It was a joy to read and I am happy to review it for you. May your weekend be filled with blessings, Patricia

 Comment Written 12-Aug-2017

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reply by the author on 12-Aug-2017

Hi Patricia; thank you so much for the lovely review. I'm glad you enjoyed this poem,

~patty~

Comment from kiwigirl2821

Excellent

Hi Patty OMG sheets sheets and more sheets. I think I've read more poetry with sheets in it than I've ever read before. A wonderful Whitney. You've inspired me to write one lol. Love a good old fashion love story. Awesome xoxo Kiwi

 Comment Written 12-Aug-2017

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reply by the author on 12-Aug-2017

Hi; I'm so glad you enjoyed this piece. You give me so many things to think about with your poetry,

~patty~

Comment from Asem.inspirations

Excellent

Hello Patty,

This is a very nice way to say how special your hubby is to you and with you, brief but to the point. Yet so lovely and poetic. I really like it.

 Comment Written 12-Aug-2017

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reply by the author on 12-Aug-2017

Hi Tier; thank you for stopping by to read and review. I'm glad you enjoyed this piece,

~patty~