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Animal poetry and short stories

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Comment from Dawn Munro
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Hahahahaha! How do you come UP with these things? This is great, Bill - I loved it, and could picture the whole thing, even 'heard' it. Very clever, and lots of fun. :))

 Comment Written 13-Aug-2017


reply by the author on 13-Aug-2017
    Thank you, Dawn.
reply by Dawn Munro on 13-Aug-2017
    You're very welcome. Sorry to be so late! Been off the site a good while.
Comment from damommy
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This is certainly new. Creatures with different languages. Still, they were able to comprehend to a point what the other wanted. Or at least, the mole seems to have a better understanding.

Bless his heart. Everywhere he pops up, he hears the same reaction. lol

 Comment Written 12-Aug-2017


reply by the author on 12-Aug-2017
    Thank you, da, for giving this a look. Bill
Comment from nomi338
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That was interesting. I know from my own personal experience, a confusion of languages can be quite perplexing. This confusion of languages is supposedly an action taken by God,if it is true it is a clear indication that he has some kind of sense of humor.
Question: Are you going to make your way completely through the animal kingdom?

 Comment Written 12-Aug-2017


reply by the author on 12-Aug-2017
    I will keep going until it gets old.
Comment from BeasPeas
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LOL! It seems you are putting your German to good use--not so much your French--still, I got the gist and found it amusing. The mole and the baby rabbit. An enjoyable read. Marilyn

 Comment Written 12-Aug-2017


reply by the author on 12-Aug-2017
    Thanks, Marilyn
Comment from kiwigirl2821
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Hello Bill. Well now you are going into a different kind of territory. So we are onto the mole stories now. I took German for three years in high school so was fun to be able to understand the language. zehr gut, gut gmach :) xoxo Kiwi

 Comment Written 12-Aug-2017


reply by the author on 12-Aug-2017
    Danke schon, kiwi.
reply by kiwigirl2821 on 12-Aug-2017
    keine bange :) d
Comment from Cass Carlton
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Dear Bill, You do have a way of presenting odd bodies in odd circumstances, don't you? This is a brief lesson in conversational German using two amusing creatures to teach. The rabbit is quite rightly scared of a strange tunnel appearing in his garden, while the mole bumbles his way from point A to point B oblivious to the consternation of his fellow creatures. a delightful vignette of a "Brambly Hedge" type of story. Well done cheers Cass












'brambly Hedge"

 Comment Written 12-Aug-2017


reply by the author on 12-Aug-2017
    Thank you, CC, for giving this a look. Bill