False Love
Lies and deceit . . .59 total reviews
Comment from Bill Schott
This poem, False Love, seems to be the victory acknowledgement after an escape, for lack of a better term, from a bad relationship. A cheat will indeed lie to the end of the earth.
reply by the author on 13-Aug-2017
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This poem, False Love, seems to be the victory acknowledgement after an escape, for lack of a better term, from a bad relationship. A cheat will indeed lie to the end of the earth.
Comment Written 10-Aug-2017
reply by the author on 13-Aug-2017
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Thank you, Bill. Linda
Comment from Lena Borghi
This is a powerful write, full of strong emotion, with good flow and progression.
I liked the incidental rhymes and the photograph you chose complements it very well. Thanks for sharing.
Lena
reply by the author on 14-Aug-2017
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This is a powerful write, full of strong emotion, with good flow and progression.
I liked the incidental rhymes and the photograph you chose complements it very well. Thanks for sharing.
Lena
Comment Written 10-Aug-2017
reply by the author on 14-Aug-2017
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Lena: thank you so much for reading this poem and sharing your thoughts with me. livelylinda
Comment from Boogienights
This was very powerful, lots of emotion that almost always follows a breakup. There are many who can relate, myself included. I also liked the picture that you used.
reply by the author on 14-Aug-2017
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This was very powerful, lots of emotion that almost always follows a breakup. There are many who can relate, myself included. I also liked the picture that you used.
Comment Written 10-Aug-2017
reply by the author on 14-Aug-2017
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Boogienights: thank you for reading and commenting and for finding this poem six star worthy. livelylinda
Comment from RebelRose
False love happens more and more often these days with social media and dating sites being one of the biggest causes. I enjoyed your poem and I'm sure there are countless people who can relate.
reply by the author on 10-Aug-2017
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False love happens more and more often these days with social media and dating sites being one of the biggest causes. I enjoyed your poem and I'm sure there are countless people who can relate.
Comment Written 10-Aug-2017
reply by the author on 10-Aug-2017
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Thank you, RebelRose, for reading and commenting. livelylinda
Comment from jaded831
It is amazing what people do behind closed doors, unthinkable things. Your poem brings to light how important instinct is. If it is too good to be true it probably is, so if you have a bad feeling in any situation escape if you can.
reply by the author on 10-Aug-2017
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It is amazing what people do behind closed doors, unthinkable things. Your poem brings to light how important instinct is. If it is too good to be true it probably is, so if you have a bad feeling in any situation escape if you can.
Comment Written 10-Aug-2017
reply by the author on 10-Aug-2017
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Yes, the beginning was too good to be true . . . I should have listened to my head, not my heart. Thanks for reading. livelylinda
Comment from Sandra Stoner-Mitchell
We all like to believe that we weren't wrong to love the person who hurts us most. There are always excuses, they make to us and we make for them. I'm glad you broke away Linda, that is no way to live your life. You have to be free to be you. Well done, my friend. You wrote this beautifully. :) Sandra xx
reply by the author on 10-Aug-2017
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We all like to believe that we weren't wrong to love the person who hurts us most. There are always excuses, they make to us and we make for them. I'm glad you broke away Linda, that is no way to live your life. You have to be free to be you. Well done, my friend. You wrote this beautifully. :) Sandra xx
Comment Written 10-Aug-2017
reply by the author on 10-Aug-2017
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Thank you so much, Sandra. Yes, I felt much relief once I got out of there. livelylinda
Comment from dragonpoet
This talks of getting free from love that is binding and not freeing. Love should let you be yourself and not create fear in doing just that. This tells of hope of a happy life after learning what good love is like. Finding a clean and quiet door instead of a loud and dirty one.
Keep writing
dragonpoet
reply by the author on 10-Aug-2017
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This talks of getting free from love that is binding and not freeing. Love should let you be yourself and not create fear in doing just that. This tells of hope of a happy life after learning what good love is like. Finding a clean and quiet door instead of a loud and dirty one.
Keep writing
dragonpoet
Comment Written 10-Aug-2017
reply by the author on 10-Aug-2017
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Thank you, dragonpoet, for reading and commenting. livelylinda
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You're welcome, livelylinda.
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Comment from Kerry Foley Robinson
This is a very sad and terrifying poem you have penned, my friend. It had great rhythm and flow to it. I enjoyed it. Wonderfully written. ~Kerry
reply by the author on 10-Aug-2017
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This is a very sad and terrifying poem you have penned, my friend. It had great rhythm and flow to it. I enjoyed it. Wonderfully written. ~Kerry
Comment Written 10-Aug-2017
reply by the author on 10-Aug-2017
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Thanks again, Kerry. livelylinda
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Your welcome.
Comment from royowen
Deceit is written into the heart of some people, and no amount of cajoling or conscience will remove, it's a sort of pragmatic and temporary solution to what will cause a lot of angst later. Well done, Linda, some great, emphatic dialogue in your work, and excellent strategic rhyme to give it strength, well done, blessings, Roy
reply by the author on 10-Aug-2017
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Deceit is written into the heart of some people, and no amount of cajoling or conscience will remove, it's a sort of pragmatic and temporary solution to what will cause a lot of angst later. Well done, Linda, some great, emphatic dialogue in your work, and excellent strategic rhyme to give it strength, well done, blessings, Roy
Comment Written 10-Aug-2017
reply by the author on 10-Aug-2017
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Thank you for reading and commenting, Roy. livelylinda
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Well done
Comment from Mitchell Brontė
Hiya
This poem made for an enjoyable yet somber read. It flowed very nicely. Comprehensible and straight to the point.
The emotional reflections are insightful and impressive. Excellent choice of words.
It is has a good tone and the language used created marvellous imagery.
Mitchell
reply by the author on 10-Aug-2017
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Hiya
This poem made for an enjoyable yet somber read. It flowed very nicely. Comprehensible and straight to the point.
The emotional reflections are insightful and impressive. Excellent choice of words.
It is has a good tone and the language used created marvellous imagery.
Mitchell
Comment Written 10-Aug-2017
reply by the author on 10-Aug-2017
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Thank you, Mitchell, for reading and sharing your insights of this poem. livelylinda
