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Betrayal

Difficult recovery from betrayal

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Comment from TAB_that's me
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After reading the other poem, no recovery will not be easy this time.

I feel your sadness and your pain. Praying for you my friend.

teresa

 Comment Written 11-Aug-2017


reply by the author on 11-Aug-2017
    Thank you, Teresa! I'm actually recovering faster than I thought I would. Early on, you warned me to be careful but how can you be careful when you are certain you have finally found the love of your life after so many years?? For five months she had me completely snowed but gradually, the sociopath showed her true face. A new tomorrow has begun. Linda
reply by TAB_that's me on 11-Aug-2017
    I'm just glad you are ok and glad things are going ok and that you have a safe place to live.
Comment from apky
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A theme we all experience at some stage in our lives.
Betrayal physical and emotionally hurts, renders us
half alive at times. You've captured all that beautifully
in your poem. And yes, sometimes it seems harder than we
can cope with. But there's always that light at the end of the dark tunnel.

 Comment Written 11-Aug-2017


reply by the author on 11-Aug-2017
    aply: thanks so much for reading and sharing your thoughts with me. livelylinda
Comment from bichonfrisegirl
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Hi Linda. Even the strongest of people have a tough time with betrayal. To those who are always honest and loyal, it's a really hard thing to come to terms with, especially if one is betrayed by their spouse/lover. The passing of time makes it hurt less, and I sincerely hope that you reach that point sooner rather than later.

"within a cocoon of sadness softly cradled" ... an excellent description of how we feel when betrayed. ~ ~ Connie

 Comment Written 11-Aug-2017


reply by the author on 11-Aug-2017
    Thank you, Connie, for reading and sharing your thoughts with me. I'm actually dealing quite well with this situation. livelylinda
Comment from artemis53
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When the background is read it is always quite telling. When one posts at the top two poems it pretty much tells the story that is never pretty. You will work this out but be prepared for the times it can instantly come back and you seem to be right there again. This is when you need to be on your guard because you are extremely vulnerable when these moments appear.

 Comment Written 11-Aug-2017


reply by the author on 11-Aug-2017
    artemis53: I'm aware of my vulnerability and being extra cautious. Thank you for reading and sharing your thoughts with me. livelylinda
Comment from G.B. Smith
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Hey there Linda

It has been far too long that I have NOT been here to read your works. This is awesome and sad as well. Recovery from a broken heart is NEVER easy. This mirrored my life in a way

Bear

 Comment Written 11-Aug-2017


reply by the author on 11-Aug-2017
    Well, I didn't miss you because I have been away from this site for a while, also! Glad we are both back. Linda
Comment from Barb Hensongispsaca
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Recovery from any sadness is very hard and the memories make it harder to help heal, depending on the circumstances. Very well stated

 Comment Written 10-Aug-2017


reply by the author on 11-Aug-2017
    Thank you, Barb, for reading and commenting. Linda
Comment from l.raven
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HI Dos, I don't understand a lot about love...don't think I want to...I know how I feel when I love some one...but I don't think I am a good judge of knowing when some one loves me...I have a problem...I don't know the lies from the truth...I always want to believe the best of the one I love...not believing they would betray me...I know my husband passed truly loved me...he had his ways about him...but didn't like to see me cry...today it's a game played...sigh...so many betray there husbands and lovers...once again sweet girl...I am so sorry...well written you...will call soon...love to ya Linda xxoo

 Comment Written 10-Aug-2017


reply by the author on 13-Aug-2017
    There she is!! I hope you are well. Yeah, Kathy had me completely snowed for 4 1/2 months and demonstrated her nasty, lying side for the next 4 1/2 months. But, I left 5 weeks ago and am on the road to recovery. Hope to see you soon. Linda, Too
reply by l.raven on 23-Aug-2017
    so glad you are feeling better...well call soon...love Uno...xxoo
Comment from kiwigirl2821
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hello again Linda,

Sweetie I don't think recovery is ever easy no matter how you got into a situation where you have to recover. Poetically you are gifted and I'm absolutely sure if you just keep writing it out, others will help you along the way. Good luck. This is another example of your beautiful work. xoxo deborah



 Comment Written 10-Aug-2017


reply by the author on 13-Aug-2017
    kiwigirl2821: Thank you for reading and providing music to muse by . . . linda
Comment from Kerry Foley Robinson
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Well, I sure hope for recovery. This is a very sad and tormenting write, my friend. The sadness is portrayed through the words well. ~Kerry

 Comment Written 10-Aug-2017


reply by the author on 10-Aug-2017
    Kerry: thank you so much for reading and sharing your thoughts with me. livelylinda
reply by Kerry Foley Robinson on 10-Aug-2017
    Your welcome.
Comment from royowen
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A friend's, family or relational betrayal is the most difficult thing to recover from. It took all the resources of wisdom I had available to me, I even blamed God for "setting me up". Beautifully written and presented Linda, the narrative is emphatically tragic and emotively scribed in articulate emphasis, well done again, blessings, Rioy

 Comment Written 10-Aug-2017


reply by the author on 10-Aug-2017
    Thank you, Roy! livelylinda
reply by royowen on 10-Aug-2017
    Most welcome