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Viewing comments for Chapter 42 "What Crosses My Mind"possible selections for inclusion in book project
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Comment from frierajac
I especially liked the lines, 'my thoughts flash around me/ vignettes/a dancer nimble and lithe/ with the connection to the title, 'what's crossing my mind'.
You have the image of thoughts moving like the forms a dancer would take,
a Classic.
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I especially liked the lines, 'my thoughts flash around me/ vignettes/a dancer nimble and lithe/ with the connection to the title, 'what's crossing my mind'.
You have the image of thoughts moving like the forms a dancer would take,
a Classic.
Comment Written 11-Aug-2017
Comment from lyenochka
This seems like many a romance born in cyberspace where body-less souls meet through words. Smiles and tears are understood without any physical or "formal" meeting. Well done.
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This seems like many a romance born in cyberspace where body-less souls meet through words. Smiles and tears are understood without any physical or "formal" meeting. Well done.
Comment Written 10-Aug-2017
Comment from Possummagic
Deserving of a six if only I had one. Such beautiful imagery befitting this piece of poetry. I loved your choice of words and phrases. They seemed to flow effortless off the tongue. Well done.
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Deserving of a six if only I had one. Such beautiful imagery befitting this piece of poetry. I loved your choice of words and phrases. They seemed to flow effortless off the tongue. Well done.
Comment Written 10-Aug-2017
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
All we want is to feel and also make a difference to someone's life and make our own worthy, your words are food for thought, an intriguing write, love Dolly x
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All we want is to feel and also make a difference to someone's life and make our own worthy, your words are food for thought, an intriguing write, love Dolly x
Comment Written 10-Aug-2017
Comment from country ranch writer
Like the work up for this presentation and the image and thoughts of ones imagination at work running rampisd through ones mind. Not knowing one in person.
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Like the work up for this presentation and the image and thoughts of ones imagination at work running rampisd through ones mind. Not knowing one in person.
Comment Written 10-Aug-2017
Comment from kiwigirl2821
Hi Michael. This is what I want to call a dreamer's mind which comes from the heart and crawls all over the reader until toes are curled and so much other emotions are met. It is heart felt and stunning! Well done you xoxo Kiwi
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Hi Michael. This is what I want to call a dreamer's mind which comes from the heart and crawls all over the reader until toes are curled and so much other emotions are met. It is heart felt and stunning! Well done you xoxo Kiwi
Comment Written 10-Aug-2017
Comment from livelylinda
Michael: I don't believe that we have formally been introduced but we have read some of what crosses our minds in each other's poetry, so we are not complete strangers. And, I've found that our minds travel in the same time warp as we search for all elusive . . . Linda
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Michael: I don't believe that we have formally been introduced but we have read some of what crosses our minds in each other's poetry, so we are not complete strangers. And, I've found that our minds travel in the same time warp as we search for all elusive . . . Linda
Comment Written 10-Aug-2017
Comment from Kerry Foley Robinson
Wow, Mike, this is a fantastic poem, my friend. It is like a hopeless romantic, I love it. Hopefully one day we'll all be blessed with what crosses our mind one day. This was exquisitely presented with great romance. I love the font color:))) ~Kerry
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Wow, Mike, this is a fantastic poem, my friend. It is like a hopeless romantic, I love it. Hopefully one day we'll all be blessed with what crosses our mind one day. This was exquisitely presented with great romance. I love the font color:))) ~Kerry
Comment Written 10-Aug-2017
Comment from Sandra Stoner-Mitchell
That was so beautiful, Mikey, so romantic. Feelings bubbling inside for someone you haven't yet met, but one day will. And this is how you envision it. How you will feel when the right one comes along. You already know what it will be like, what your life will be like with her. Now you have to find her. Superb, my friend. :) Sandra xx
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That was so beautiful, Mikey, so romantic. Feelings bubbling inside for someone you haven't yet met, but one day will. And this is how you envision it. How you will feel when the right one comes along. You already know what it will be like, what your life will be like with her. Now you have to find her. Superb, my friend. :) Sandra xx
Comment Written 10-Aug-2017
Comment from Barb Hensongispsaca
LOL oh my dear again, candles, chilled wine, soft music, warm bath, and a voice to read as I relax.
In some places the words lost me as if they were out of place, but the last half was true passion for someone yet to meet
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LOL oh my dear again, candles, chilled wine, soft music, warm bath, and a voice to read as I relax.
In some places the words lost me as if they were out of place, but the last half was true passion for someone yet to meet
Comment Written 10-Aug-2017
