Boiler Room
Viewing comments for Chapter 2 "Section 1 - Part 2: Boiler Room"Cody's worst nightmare from Hell becomes reality!
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Comment from Shirley E Kennedy
Aha! Wet the whistle indeed.
A smooth follow on from chapter one with retained pace
And maintained interest.
I like the ease of transgression from run of the mill to deep trouble in a short time span.
Thee twist in the tail works well.
See you next chapter.
:-) Shirley
reply by the author on 20-Aug-2017
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Aha! Wet the whistle indeed.
A smooth follow on from chapter one with retained pace
And maintained interest.
I like the ease of transgression from run of the mill to deep trouble in a short time span.
Thee twist in the tail works well.
See you next chapter.
:-) Shirley
Comment Written 19-Aug-2017
reply by the author on 20-Aug-2017
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Glad you enjoyed this portion of Cody's story.
I like twists and turns in a story. Believe they make one more interesting.
Comment from Asem.inspirations
Good morning Brett, Oh so we are still in the same book. I could see by the title of the first book, this one is part 2. However, I can see that we have yet another murder. This one was not so gory or gorily described as Cody's was.
This is another well written story chapter of this book. It is unfolding nicely and is still very intriguing. I will continued o follow this story to see what is going on. Is this the same murderer? I remember that you did name the other murderer who was a pedophile so I'm going to say that this is not the same murderer but I will soon see. Great story, nicely done.
reply by the author on 11-Aug-2017
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Good morning Brett, Oh so we are still in the same book. I could see by the title of the first book, this one is part 2. However, I can see that we have yet another murder. This one was not so gory or gorily described as Cody's was.
This is another well written story chapter of this book. It is unfolding nicely and is still very intriguing. I will continued o follow this story to see what is going on. Is this the same murderer? I remember that you did name the other murderer who was a pedophile so I'm going to say that this is not the same murderer but I will soon see. Great story, nicely done.
Comment Written 11-Aug-2017
reply by the author on 11-Aug-2017
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Glad you enjoyed this chapter of this book.
Much more to come so I invite you to ride along.
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I will - no problem.
Comment from MizKat
Hi Brett,
As usual this was interesting to read.
You're wonderful at writing things.
I still have another part to read yet.
I'm not sure which part was first.
Kat
reply by the author on 10-Aug-2017
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Hi Brett,
As usual this was interesting to read.
You're wonderful at writing things.
I still have another part to read yet.
I'm not sure which part was first.
Kat
Comment Written 10-Aug-2017
reply by the author on 10-Aug-2017
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Appreciate your comments, support, and reviews.
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Thank you so much!
Comment from kiwigirl2821
Hello Brett. Look it is hard to give you a four when your stories are great. I don't consider myself good enough to critique most stories ... I like to read and I like to read yours ... lol ... the story line is good. Your characters are real and the dialog is as though your reader is having a conversation with them. So from me you get a five. xoxo Kiwi
reply by the author on 10-Aug-2017
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Hello Brett. Look it is hard to give you a four when your stories are great. I don't consider myself good enough to critique most stories ... I like to read and I like to read yours ... lol ... the story line is good. Your characters are real and the dialog is as though your reader is having a conversation with them. So from me you get a five. xoxo Kiwi
Comment Written 10-Aug-2017
reply by the author on 10-Aug-2017
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Glad you enjoyed this chapter.
Much more to come so I invite you to ride along.
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indeed! :) deborah
Comment from emptypage
Interesting. I remember this pic from something before. A Cody story? Eagerly anticipating part two. And three. And four. However many it takes. Bit is 1,100 words a book?
reply by the author on 10-Aug-2017
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Interesting. I remember this pic from something before. A Cody story? Eagerly anticipating part two. And three. And four. However many it takes. Bit is 1,100 words a book?
Comment Written 09-Aug-2017
reply by the author on 10-Aug-2017
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I suppose if you wanted 1,100 words to be the length of a book one could make it that way.
However, especially since this book is for a contest where the length must be at least 50,000 words, I seriously doubt if 1,100 words meets that requirement.
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So did you mean a different number? Good luck in the contest.
Comment from Barb Hensongispsaca
Wow I see this is going to be a really different type of mystery. You took us one way and not another, feeding the two together will be interresting
reply by the author on 10-Aug-2017
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Wow I see this is going to be a really different type of mystery. You took us one way and not another, feeding the two together will be interresting
Comment Written 09-Aug-2017
reply by the author on 10-Aug-2017
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Glad you enjoyed this chapter.
Comment from Ricky1024
"Another wonderful "Cody Piece."
"Well written and presented."
"Great flow and an easy read."
"No Grammar issues."
"Great Theme and Imagery."
Adjectively speaking...
"What about her other piece with "The Pedopile of Shit?"
Dr. Ricky 1024.
reply by the author on 10-Aug-2017
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"Another wonderful "Cody Piece."
"Well written and presented."
"Great flow and an easy read."
"No Grammar issues."
"Great Theme and Imagery."
Adjectively speaking...
"What about her other piece with "The Pedopile of Shit?"
Dr. Ricky 1024.
Comment Written 09-Aug-2017
reply by the author on 10-Aug-2017
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Glad you enjoyed this chapter.
Much more to come so I invite you to ride along.
Comment from mediumhead
I love the description of Tammy at the beginning, it painted a clear picture in my head. I want to read more as he did not react in a normal way to the news that his girlfriend was dead! This left me with clear imagery and a thirst for more.
reply by the author on 10-Aug-2017
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I love the description of Tammy at the beginning, it painted a clear picture in my head. I want to read more as he did not react in a normal way to the news that his girlfriend was dead! This left me with clear imagery and a thirst for more.
Comment Written 09-Aug-2017
reply by the author on 10-Aug-2017
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Glad you enjoyed this chapter.
Much more to come so I invite you to ride along.
Comment from royowen
Poor old Justin Marindale's girl friend has been found dead, and Sherriff Daniels has come to ask Justin of his whereabouts at the time of Peggy Morris' death. Justin says he argued with her but didn't kill her, he's advised not to say anything more, not without a lawyer being present. Did he lkill her? Well done, Brett, good scribing, blessings Roy
reply by the author on 10-Aug-2017
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Poor old Justin Marindale's girl friend has been found dead, and Sherriff Daniels has come to ask Justin of his whereabouts at the time of Peggy Morris' death. Justin says he argued with her but didn't kill her, he's advised not to say anything more, not without a lawyer being present. Did he lkill her? Well done, Brett, good scribing, blessings Roy
Comment Written 09-Aug-2017
reply by the author on 10-Aug-2017
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Glad you enjoyed this chapter.
Much more to come so I invite you to ride along.
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Well done
Comment from Rasmine
Okay, I'm doing three, but not all the submissions to my messages. I know there will be a limit -- I didn't upgrade this month due to another bill.
Well, guess this is another book. Wonder if your chapters get put into the wrong books in your profile. Mine always do!
Hey, take care.
reply by the author on 09-Aug-2017
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Okay, I'm doing three, but not all the submissions to my messages. I know there will be a limit -- I didn't upgrade this month due to another bill.
Well, guess this is another book. Wonder if your chapters get put into the wrong books in your profile. Mine always do!
Hey, take care.
Comment Written 09-Aug-2017
reply by the author on 09-Aug-2017
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Yes, this is another book.
The third in the Cody Schroder Series.
He is my readers, and fans, all-time most popular character created here on FanStory.
Welcome aboard! Glad to have you here.
