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One must be cautious when using flames
3 total reviews
Comment from
Bill Schott
This 5-7-5 on fire, Friend and Foe, has the correct set up and reminds us that the flame that serves as beakon, heat, and tool, can also be a danger to our lives. Good to remember.
Comment Written 08-Aug-2017
reply by the author on 09-Aug-2017
Thanks for the read and the comments.
reply by Bill Schott on 09-Aug-2017
reply by the author on 09-Aug-2017
Comment from
EverInParadise
Good piece and good selection with the picture. A lot said in very few words. I am amazed at how the right words convey so much. Real and meaningful.
Comment Written 08-Aug-2017
reply by the author on 08-Aug-2017
Thank you for the read and the comments.
Comment from
Gypsy Blue Rose
Hello my friend
Dual by nature 5
A good friend or hurtful foe 7
Fire must be controlled 5.......Good syllable count, nice presentation. Good job.
Gypsy
Comment Written 08-Aug-2017
reply by the author on 08-Aug-2017
Thank you for the read and the comments.
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