Flaming Fire
5-7-5 poem2 total reviews
Comment from Drew Delaney
The firemen are very brave to fight such a monster as flames. You have some strong verbs to describe the scene. Cracked and hiss, tumbling, and quenched.
Nice work!
Drew
reply by the author on 08-Aug-2017
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The firemen are very brave to fight such a monster as flames. You have some strong verbs to describe the scene. Cracked and hiss, tumbling, and quenched.
Nice work!
Drew
Comment Written 07-Aug-2017
reply by the author on 08-Aug-2017
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Dear Drew, Thank you for your comments and review. Dove
Comment from LateBloomer
Hello author, A timely poem as wild fires continues. I especially liked:
Flames crackle and hiss
(Vivid imagery)
Great complementary photo choice. As this is a writing prompt entry, I wish you good luck. LateBloomer
reply by the author on 08-Aug-2017
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Hello author, A timely poem as wild fires continues. I especially liked:
Flames crackle and hiss
(Vivid imagery)
Great complementary photo choice. As this is a writing prompt entry, I wish you good luck. LateBloomer
Comment Written 07-Aug-2017
reply by the author on 08-Aug-2017
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Dear LateBloomer, Thank you for your comments and review. Dove
