This Time - That Time 2
Viewing comments for Chapter 10 "The Truth Dawns"Veronica is sent back again
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Comment from aryr
Another great chapter Sandra. It was so intense when both James and Veronica realize that Joe has possessed little Michael. Then they bring Mildred up to date. It was refreshing that James came up with the idea of giving Joe a purpose to return and using knowledge- I am sure it will be knowledge about Frances. Great chapter, thanks.
reply by the author on 08-Aug-2017
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Another great chapter Sandra. It was so intense when both James and Veronica realize that Joe has possessed little Michael. Then they bring Mildred up to date. It was refreshing that James came up with the idea of giving Joe a purpose to return and using knowledge- I am sure it will be knowledge about Frances. Great chapter, thanks.
Comment Written 07-Aug-2017
reply by the author on 08-Aug-2017
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Thank you so much for another lovely review, Alie! Yes, a bit of male input had to happen, or I'd be accused of sexism! LOL. I'm glad you enjoyed this part, my friend. Big hugs. Sandra xxx
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You are so welcome Sandra, heavens no= please don't be accused of sexism-lol the men need their moments.
Comment from royowen
What a great perceptive and imaginative mind you have Sandra, I can't imagine I would think of this. The entire episode was classically interesting and very perceptively thought out and applied, and dealing with three separate individuals. With James' solid, calm personality, in the face of maternal panic, holding the emotional fort. Well done, it will great reading how the deal with this problem, well done.
reply by the author on 08-Aug-2017
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What a great perceptive and imaginative mind you have Sandra, I can't imagine I would think of this. The entire episode was classically interesting and very perceptively thought out and applied, and dealing with three separate individuals. With James' solid, calm personality, in the face of maternal panic, holding the emotional fort. Well done, it will great reading how the deal with this problem, well done.
Comment Written 07-Aug-2017
reply by the author on 08-Aug-2017
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Thank you so much, Roy. They do make a good combination, don't they? Veronica is all mum when it comes to anything happening to her children, (as I would be) :)) I'm pleased you are still with me, dear friend, and enjoying the story. Biggest hugs! Sandra xxxxx
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Welcome Sandra
Comment from Mabaker
I'm giving you a five, as I've not read any previous chapters. That's my loss. This was very well put together and It I can start at Ch. One then I intend to read all the way through. Regards Mabaker.
reply by the author on 07-Aug-2017
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I'm giving you a five, as I've not read any previous chapters. That's my loss. This was very well put together and It I can start at Ch. One then I intend to read all the way through. Regards Mabaker.
Comment Written 07-Aug-2017
reply by the author on 07-Aug-2017
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Thank you so much, Mabaker, for reading this part. I would be over the moon if you can manage to read it as I would love your opinion on the story. :) Sandra xx
Comment from Mustang Patty
Hi Sandra; these poor people have a great deal to contend with. First, there was Veronica's time travel, and now they find out that Michael has been possessed by Joe's spirit. However, I think they will soon puzzle it out - I'm reasonably sure you wouldn't leave a little boy in this situation!
Well written. I didn't find any nits or SPAG,
~patty~
reply by the author on 07-Aug-2017
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Hi Sandra; these poor people have a great deal to contend with. First, there was Veronica's time travel, and now they find out that Michael has been possessed by Joe's spirit. However, I think they will soon puzzle it out - I'm reasonably sure you wouldn't leave a little boy in this situation!
Well written. I didn't find any nits or SPAG,
~patty~
Comment Written 07-Aug-2017
reply by the author on 07-Aug-2017
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I know, poor Veronica has never wanted any of this. At least she knows James is with her one hundred percent, and of course, Mildred has been with her from day one. Now they have to get Joe out of Michael and sent back to his own time. And, of course to the albino child. Veronica has to help him too!! Lots to do! Thank you so much for your lovely review, my friend.Big hugs. Sandra xxx
Comment from Mrs Happy Poet
Hello my friend this is well written I am not surprised that Veronica is worried her son could be taken over by Joe and she don't know what is going to happen again well done I enjoyed regards Jill
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Hello my friend this is well written I am not surprised that Veronica is worried her son could be taken over by Joe and she don't know what is going to happen again well done I enjoyed regards Jill
Comment Written 07-Aug-2017
reply by the author on 07-Aug-2017
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Thank you so very much, Jill, for the lovely 6 stars!!! You are always so nice to me. I'm so pleased you are coming along with me in this book too Big hugs, my friend. :) Sandra xxxx
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you are very talented and i am enjoying this very much ... Jill
Comment from nancy_e_davis
Oh, That would be awful! The only good thing is she has found Joe. Now the problem will be to get him to leave the body of her son and go back to face Sir John. That would be the incentive he needs I would guess. Good job Sandra. Nancy
reply by the author on 07-Aug-2017
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Oh, That would be awful! The only good thing is she has found Joe. Now the problem will be to get him to leave the body of her son and go back to face Sir John. That would be the incentive he needs I would guess. Good job Sandra. Nancy
Comment Written 07-Aug-2017
reply by the author on 07-Aug-2017
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Thank you, Nancy! Yes, she's got to find something that will entice him out, but she's not sure how it can happen, she never had a choice in the matter when she went 'body hopping' lol! We'll see! Thanks again, my friend. :) Sandra xxx
Comment from Barb Hensongispsaca
Wow what a twist in a story line and I love it. This is going to be a real challenge and well worth the trip with you. Very well thought up and no problems noted in the piece
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Wow what a twist in a story line and I love it. This is going to be a real challenge and well worth the trip with you. Very well thought up and no problems noted in the piece
Comment Written 07-Aug-2017
reply by the author on 07-Aug-2017
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Thank you, Barb! That is so nice of you! I'm so pleased you enjoyed it, you are always so encouraging my, my friend. Big hugs! :) Sandra xx
Comment from Ric Myworld
A fan of time travel since a child, your stories rekindle those repetitive dreams that conjure up so many of the difficulties these travels can create. Thanks for sharing another fine chapter. :-)
reply by the author on 07-Aug-2017
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A fan of time travel since a child, your stories rekindle those repetitive dreams that conjure up so many of the difficulties these travels can create. Thanks for sharing another fine chapter. :-)
Comment Written 07-Aug-2017
reply by the author on 07-Aug-2017
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Thank you again, Ric, for another lovely review. I'm so pleased you are into time travel, it means I get to keep you, LOL! Big hugs my friend. :) Sandra xxx
Comment from Ulla
Hi Sandra, I'm delighted you've posted so soon again. Just as I asked you to, hehe. yeah, I should have seen that Joe is talking and acting through Michael. No wonder that Veronica and Mildred are upset. But James has come up with sensible idea. Now to see whether it will work. I sure hope so. You know I'm enjoying this. A hug from a very hot Spain. Ulla xxx
reply by the author on 07-Aug-2017
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Hi Sandra, I'm delighted you've posted so soon again. Just as I asked you to, hehe. yeah, I should have seen that Joe is talking and acting through Michael. No wonder that Veronica and Mildred are upset. But James has come up with sensible idea. Now to see whether it will work. I sure hope so. You know I'm enjoying this. A hug from a very hot Spain. Ulla xxx
Comment Written 07-Aug-2017
reply by the author on 07-Aug-2017
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Aww, thank you, Ulla, so very much for the lovely 6 again! What can I say? You ordered me, and I had to do it!! LOL! I'm so pleased you enjoyed this one, my friend. Big hugs! :) Sandra xxx
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Yes, I did didn't I? And I got my wish fulfilled. xxx
Comment from Margaret Snowdon
What a treat to open up and find you've posted, Sandra.
No mother can help worrying about a precious son - I can't wait to read more -
your work is so well presented, making it easy to follow.
"Well(,) if he is, he can bloody well get - comma
Margaret
reply by the author on 07-Aug-2017
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What a treat to open up and find you've posted, Sandra.
No mother can help worrying about a precious son - I can't wait to read more -
your work is so well presented, making it easy to follow.
"Well(,) if he is, he can bloody well get - comma
Margaret
Comment Written 07-Aug-2017
reply by the author on 07-Aug-2017
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Thank you so much, Margaret! I've added that comma, thanks for that, my friend. I'm so pleased you like this part! Big hug, :) Sandra xxx
