Comment from Lindagail Hall

Excellent

This is a well tuned tight write. Though the reader feels the authors pain, and tries to place themselves in this chaotic emotions yet you still hold onto hope that the other may return to sort their differences out. Well wrote good luck in the contest

 Comment Written 04-Aug-2017

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reply by the author on 04-Aug-2017

Thank you for your very nice review. Its great to hear back from other writers.

Comment from zanya

Excellent

A searingly honest portrayal of the reality of family rows and how they can tear us apart 'disorder reigned /in our house of pain'- the poem so effectively evokes the turmoil-

 Comment Written 02-Aug-2017

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reply by the author on 03-Aug-2017

Thank you your nice review. Its great to hear from other writers

Comment from JennaG

Excellent

This is a very powerful and emotional piece. You've made good use of the required words. I like your description of the house that's so quiet, but the thoughts inside the mind raging and rioting. Good use of rhyme and great picture to accompany your work. Well done! Best of luck to you in the contest! :)

 Comment Written 02-Aug-2017

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reply by the author on 03-Aug-2017

Thank you so much for the best wishes and the kind review.