Comment from Poetic Friend

Excellent

Ulla,

This story is a conversation that many have on a daily basis. They are interacting with each other, but they are not comprehending. each other. Thus, the conversations become separate monologues. I love the underlined message in this story. This was a good entry for the contest.

 Comment Written 13-Aug-2017

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reply by the author on 13-Aug-2017

Oh, thank you very much. Yeah, I do believe a conversation like this does happen to a lot. It's a sad state of affairs when it reach this point. All the best. Ulla:)))

Comment from alexisleech

Excellent

Brilliant! Well done Ulla, and good luck in the competition.
It's still miserable here, and more like April!
Alexis xxx
Me turning it around? Just (for) this once, couldn't you calm down and listen to what I'm saying.
Yeah, I will, but that brings us (back) right [back]to [the]start, doesn't it?

 Comment Written 04-Aug-2017

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reply by the author on 05-Aug-2017

Hi Alexis, thanks so very much. I can't believe your weather. I'm so sorry. We're so hot you wouldn't believe it. Thanks a lot for the review, and it reads just right after the corrections. I'll give you a ring tomorrow to see how you are. Ulla xxx

Comment from Brett Matthew West

Excellent

How many times does this conversation actually occur?

Frequently, with the same results.

Should make an interesting entry into this contest.

 Comment Written 04-Aug-2017

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reply by the author on 04-Aug-2017

Thank you so much, Brett. Glad you liked it. All best. Ulla;)

Comment from Heather Knight

Excellent

This is very funny, Ulla. Your two characters are so stubborn that in the end they don't say anything.
Your dialogue is very natural and I've enjoyed reading it.
Good luck in the contest.

 Comment Written 04-Aug-2017

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reply by the author on 04-Aug-2017

Thanks a lot, Maria Jose. So glad you liked it. All the best. Ulla:)))

Comment from MelB

Excellent

Hi Ulla, very good dialogue and contest entry. They did seem to be going in circles. I wasn't sure by the end what they were talking about either.

 Comment Written 03-Aug-2017

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reply by the author on 04-Aug-2017

Neither was I, hehe. Thanks a lot, Melissa. All the best. Ulla:)))

Comment from pbomar1115

Excellent

Very clever. I can see two people going at it. By evading the question asked, the evader tries to confuse. This one of those games often played on someone if the intention is to get under the person's skin. At the right moment, it is funny.

Phillip

 Comment Written 03-Aug-2017

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reply by the author on 04-Aug-2017

Thanks a lot, Phillip. I'm glad you liked it. All the best. Ulla:))

reply by pbomar1115 on 04-Aug-2017

You're welcome, Ulla.

Phillip

Comment from LaRosa

Excellent

Can you see me smiling in an idiotic way? Hear my sarcastic laugh?
This dialogue only piece sounds like me and my son.
Won't say any more, it's incriminating.
It's intense and humorous at the same time.

 Comment Written 03-Aug-2017

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reply by the author on 12-Aug-2017

Haha Rosa, you make me laugh. Thanks for a great review. All the best. Ulla:)))

Comment from Bill Schott

Excellent

The image you've chosen probably says more about this pointless arguement than I'm getting from it. It's important to note that the dialog begins in the middle somewhere and never really leads to a conclusion. It's like a Twilight Zone moment.

 Comment Written 02-Aug-2017

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reply by the author on 12-Aug-2017

Thanks a lot, Bill. Ulla:))

Comment from Phyllis Stewart

Excellent

Cute conversation between animals that happens all the time between humans. One suggestion. Remove "Christ" since it can be offense used in a humor piece. Change it to another exclamatory word.

 Comment Written 02-Aug-2017

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reply by the author on 12-Aug-2017

Hi Phyllis thanks a lot. Sorry for the late reply. I always seem to be behind. All the best, Ulla:)))

Comment from Sankey

Excellent

Funny, and so so true. Good work and I loved the photo. Wish you well in the contest I gave up on Contests years ago. Getting reading to pull the plug on this joint yet again after I get everything all fixed up.

 Comment Written 02-Aug-2017

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reply by the author on 12-Aug-2017

Thanks a lot, Sankey. Ulla:))