Sweet Summer Treat
1-6-1 rhyming entry15 total reviews
Comment from EverInParadise
Cute. Says it all and says it well. Good luck with the poetry. Your art selection fit perfectly. I'm not sure I could manage the 1-6-1 rhyme this well.
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reply by the author on 02-Aug-2017
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Cute. Says it all and says it well. Good luck with the poetry. Your art selection fit perfectly. I'm not sure I could manage the 1-6-1 rhyme this well.
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Comment Written 02-Aug-2017
reply by the author on 02-Aug-2017
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Thanks. Glad you liked this short poem and the artwork. Cheers .. ;o)
Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
Good job with the contest prompt mystery poet. Your lines/syllables/rhymes are correct. The picture is perfect, too.
To beat summer hat, go somewhere where the air co is running full blast.
Best wishes in the contest. Jan
reply by the author on 02-Aug-2017
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Good job with the contest prompt mystery poet. Your lines/syllables/rhymes are correct. The picture is perfect, too.
To beat summer hat, go somewhere where the air co is running full blast.
Best wishes in the contest. Jan
Comment Written 01-Aug-2017
reply by the author on 02-Aug-2017
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Thanks, Jan. Glad you liked this short, summery poem and the picture. Appreciate all your comments. Cheers ... ;o)
Comment from country ranch writer
Lovely scenery and the water where ever it was. It is a great get away on a hot day and just lazing back in the sun shine enjoying one self. Great time to enjoy some sweets.
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Lovely scenery and the water where ever it was. It is a great get away on a hot day and just lazing back in the sun shine enjoying one self. Great time to enjoy some sweets.
Comment Written 01-Aug-2017
Comment from Curly Girly
Well done! As far as I can see, this verse meets all the necessary criteria for the contest.
beat
summer heat with a sweet
treat
This makes me think of a nice, cool ice-cream treat.
Mmmm!
CG
reply by the author on 02-Aug-2017
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Well done! As far as I can see, this verse meets all the necessary criteria for the contest.
beat
summer heat with a sweet
treat
This makes me think of a nice, cool ice-cream treat.
Mmmm!
CG
Comment Written 01-Aug-2017
reply by the author on 02-Aug-2017
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Yes... a cool, yummy ice cream treat. ice cream, you scream ... we all scream for ice cream. Glad you liked this short, summery poem. Appreciate your comments. Cheers ... ;o)
Comment from Teri7
This is a very well written 1-6-1 poem for the prompt. You used very good wording and great imagery. We need those type of treats here in TN as it is really hot lately! Best wishes in the contest. Teri
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reply by the author on 02-Aug-2017
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This is a very well written 1-6-1 poem for the prompt. You used very good wording and great imagery. We need those type of treats here in TN as it is really hot lately! Best wishes in the contest. Teri
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Comment Written 01-Aug-2017
reply by the author on 02-Aug-2017
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Thanks, Teri. Glad you liked the wording and imagery in this short, summery poem. Hope you find some delicious, cool treats in TN. Cheers ... ;o)
