2018 Bernie and Howie Stories
Viewing comments for Chapter 14 "Summer Heat"...stories and poems about the boys
27 total reviews
Comment from BeasPeas
This is a darling write, Patty. Bernie and Howie are adorable and I enjoy reading about them. Your essays/stories are so loving and we all love our little furry guys and girls, don't we? Give them a treat for me. Marilyn
reply by the author on 10-Aug-2017
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This is a darling write, Patty. Bernie and Howie are adorable and I enjoy reading about them. Your essays/stories are so loving and we all love our little furry guys and girls, don't we? Give them a treat for me. Marilyn
Comment Written 05-Aug-2017
reply by the author on 10-Aug-2017
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sorry I'm so late in replying. I've been working with an editor on my work, 'One Man's Journey;' they are hoping to have it ready for sale next fall (2018!)
thank you so much for reading and reviewing my work,
~patty~
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Fantastic, Patty. Good for you. Marilyn
Comment from Cindy Warren
Bernie does have a beautiful tail. I bet waving it earns him lots of treats. I loved his dream. When Willow's paws twitch in her sleep I imagine her chasing tasty mice.
reply by the author on 04-Aug-2017
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Bernie does have a beautiful tail. I bet waving it earns him lots of treats. I loved his dream. When Willow's paws twitch in her sleep I imagine her chasing tasty mice.
Comment Written 03-Aug-2017
reply by the author on 04-Aug-2017
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Hi Cindy; Thank you so much for the lovely review,
~patty~
Comment from Rasmine
So cute!! I like the treats growing from trees -- I swear that is what they probably dream about. Wonder what my cat is dreaming about when she is kicking her legs, flailing her paws, and flickering her eyelids. Oh, the whiskers are moving too. :P
reply by the author on 04-Aug-2017
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So cute!! I like the treats growing from trees -- I swear that is what they probably dream about. Wonder what my cat is dreaming about when she is kicking her legs, flailing her paws, and flickering her eyelids. Oh, the whiskers are moving too. :P
Comment Written 03-Aug-2017
reply by the author on 04-Aug-2017
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Hi; Thank you so much for the lovely review,
~patty~
Comment from BOO ghost
How cute. He was lying with his tummy on the floor and his feet pushed out to the sides. Too tired to even wag his tail, Bernie let himself snooze. Poor pooch. safe is what matters most. Dog gone, during sleep was the bounty of treats. Hum, some juicy treats in his sleep. Dream on, Bernie. Bernie was awake. Howie spent so many hours cleaning, and the Mistress brushed every day, oh, I bet they did not mind to trim the pooch. Nice story,interesting. saw no SPAG issues. fantastic!
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reply by the author on 03-Aug-2017
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How cute. He was lying with his tummy on the floor and his feet pushed out to the sides. Too tired to even wag his tail, Bernie let himself snooze. Poor pooch. safe is what matters most. Dog gone, during sleep was the bounty of treats. Hum, some juicy treats in his sleep. Dream on, Bernie. Bernie was awake. Howie spent so many hours cleaning, and the Mistress brushed every day, oh, I bet they did not mind to trim the pooch. Nice story,interesting. saw no SPAG issues. fantastic!
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Comment Written 02-Aug-2017
reply by the author on 03-Aug-2017
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Hi Boo; I'm glad you enjoyed this little dog tale (tail.) These stories are rewards for myself; they seem to flow freely, and I don't have to edit very much and they are good to go!
I'm glad you enjoyed this one,
~patty~
Comment from Phyllis Stewart
I can just picture them playing and jumping to couch and back down. I had three dogs till recently when two died. THe last one is now clingy and whiny, even tho she never wanted anything to do with the others and would snap and growl at attempts to play. When she passes, I'm finished with dogs. They tied me down too much. And I miss the ones we lost.
reply by the author on 04-Aug-2017
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I can just picture them playing and jumping to couch and back down. I had three dogs till recently when two died. THe last one is now clingy and whiny, even tho she never wanted anything to do with the others and would snap and growl at attempts to play. When she passes, I'm finished with dogs. They tied me down too much. And I miss the ones we lost.
Comment Written 02-Aug-2017
reply by the author on 04-Aug-2017
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Hi Phyllis; I'm so sorry you are at the stage of losing beloved dogs - and then what? We decided Howie and Bernie will be the last dogs; if we are to replace them, there's always the chance the next ones would outlive us,
~patty~
Comment from pbomar1115
In a dog's world where there is play time, treats, and love from the mistress, what else to look forward to other than dreams. The Bernie and Howie story is dog heaven. These two little guys have it made.
reply by the author on 04-Aug-2017
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In a dog's world where there is play time, treats, and love from the mistress, what else to look forward to other than dreams. The Bernie and Howie story is dog heaven. These two little guys have it made.
Comment Written 02-Aug-2017
reply by the author on 04-Aug-2017
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Hi Phillip; Thank you so much for the lovely review,
~patty~
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You're welcome, Patty.
Phillip
Comment from Asem.inspirations
Awwwwwww Patty, I am so in love with your Bernie and Howie stories. I am living through your stories as I still miss my Julianna so much. Your dogs are sop precious and they way you describe what they are thinking and doing is priceless.
You will probably win another "Story of the Month" are quite the exceptional writer. I just really love your works. Keep doing what you do.
reply by the author on 04-Aug-2017
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Awwwwwww Patty, I am so in love with your Bernie and Howie stories. I am living through your stories as I still miss my Julianna so much. Your dogs are sop precious and they way you describe what they are thinking and doing is priceless.
You will probably win another "Story of the Month" are quite the exceptional writer. I just really love your works. Keep doing what you do.
Comment Written 02-Aug-2017
reply by the author on 04-Aug-2017
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Hi Tier; thank you so much for the lovely review. Writing about these little guys is a joy and it allows my head to calm down and focus on just one aspect of life, Thank you so much for the lovely review,
~patty~
Comment from Bichon
Wonderful story about your two little boys! I always enjoy reading about them and the antics they get up to. Dreaming can be nice, but the real world is where treats are given, haha!
reply by the author on 10-Aug-2017
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Wonderful story about your two little boys! I always enjoy reading about them and the antics they get up to. Dreaming can be nice, but the real world is where treats are given, haha!
Comment Written 02-Aug-2017
reply by the author on 10-Aug-2017
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sorry I'm so late in replying. I've been working with an editor on my work, 'One Man's Journey;' they are hoping to have it ready for sale next fall (2018!)
thank you so much for reading and reviewing my work,
~patty~
ps; thank you for the shining sixth star
Comment from country ranch writer
Sounds like some spoilt doggies to me with no air condition that is rough for you and the puppies. Cool tile is good for them so they don't over heat. A few treats wouldn't be bad either
reply by the author on 10-Aug-2017
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Sounds like some spoilt doggies to me with no air condition that is rough for you and the puppies. Cool tile is good for them so they don't over heat. A few treats wouldn't be bad either
Comment Written 02-Aug-2017
reply by the author on 10-Aug-2017
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sorry I'm so late in replying. I've been working with an editor on my work, 'One Man's Journey;' they are hoping to have it ready for sale next fall (2018!)
thank you so much for reading and reviewing my work,
~patty~
Comment from lyenochka
What a great doggie dream. I like how you wove in the dream sequence to waking and then the chase with Howie and finally the almost dream-like contentment in real life.
reply by the author on 10-Aug-2017
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What a great doggie dream. I like how you wove in the dream sequence to waking and then the chase with Howie and finally the almost dream-like contentment in real life.
Comment Written 01-Aug-2017
reply by the author on 10-Aug-2017
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sorry I'm so late in replying. I've been working with an editor on my work, 'One Man's Journey;' they are hoping to have it ready for sale next fall (2018!)
thank you so much for reading and reviewing my work,
~patty~
