Brandon McCann
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Comment from Possummagic
I don't know at what stage I've entered the story but it certainly is gripping. I'm enjoying the easy way that the words, sentences and paragraphs flow together , to make this a great piece of work.
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reply by the author on 08-Aug-2017
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I don't know at what stage I've entered the story but it certainly is gripping. I'm enjoying the easy way that the words, sentences and paragraphs flow together , to make this a great piece of work.
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Comment Written 06-Aug-2017
reply by the author on 08-Aug-2017
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Glad you enjoyed this chapter.
Appreciate you taking the time to read it and to write a review.
Much more to come so I invite you to ride along.
Comment from Barb Hensongispsaca
This is going a different way than I expected and I am relieved and disappointed at the same time. Nicely written and very interesting start to this piece.
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reply by the author on 08-Aug-2017
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This is going a different way than I expected and I am relieved and disappointed at the same time. Nicely written and very interesting start to this piece.
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Comment Written 06-Aug-2017
reply by the author on 08-Aug-2017
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Glad you enjoyed this chapter.
Your comments, support, and reviews always appreciated.
Comment from Natali Holden
'"Why? By Who?" Brandon rapidly blazed his next two questions.' I like how you used rapidly blazed. It's not just plain old quickly, it's different and descriptive. I picked up reading 'Brandon McCann' the chapter before this and I'm already starting to like your characters. Well... not really Rickie Wolford. But Brandon's great. Your characters are nicely made. I can't wait for more chapters! Keep up the amazing work!
Natali ;)
reply by the author on 08-Aug-2017
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'"Why? By Who?" Brandon rapidly blazed his next two questions.' I like how you used rapidly blazed. It's not just plain old quickly, it's different and descriptive. I picked up reading 'Brandon McCann' the chapter before this and I'm already starting to like your characters. Well... not really Rickie Wolford. But Brandon's great. Your characters are nicely made. I can't wait for more chapters! Keep up the amazing work!
Natali ;)
Comment Written 06-Aug-2017
reply by the author on 08-Aug-2017
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Glad you enjoyed this chapter.
Appreciate you taking the time to read it and to write a review.
Much more to come so I invite you to ride along.
Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear
This speaks so real, pathetic, man could do this with a 13-y old boy not lost, abducted by a dangerous man locked in a room, Brandon thinks if he could dig a way into China; whither grandparents, no dessert, no computer, no game; I liked. (6-STAR)
reply by the author on 08-Aug-2017
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This speaks so real, pathetic, man could do this with a 13-y old boy not lost, abducted by a dangerous man locked in a room, Brandon thinks if he could dig a way into China; whither grandparents, no dessert, no computer, no game; I liked. (6-STAR)
Comment Written 06-Aug-2017
reply by the author on 08-Aug-2017
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Glad you enjoyed this chapter.
Appreciate you taking the time to read it and to write a review.
Much more to come so I invite you to ride along.
