Family Poems and Stories 2010-2017
Viewing comments for Chapter 30 "Coffee starts my Day"...musings on us
33 total reviews
Comment from Teri7
This is a very well written short story about a typical day for you. It sounds like an almost perfect day. Seems as if you do what you want to do. Very good wording and great imagery. Best wishes in the contest. Teri
reply by the author on 04-Aug-2017
This is a very well written short story about a typical day for you. It sounds like an almost perfect day. Seems as if you do what you want to do. Very good wording and great imagery. Best wishes in the contest. Teri
Comment Written 03-Aug-2017
reply by the author on 04-Aug-2017
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Hi Teri; Thank you so much for the lovely review,
~patty~
Comment from Rasmine
Good luck in the contest. I didn't see or pay attention to this contest. (Your day sounds similar to mine. Now I'm interested. ;P
Have a good weekend!
reply by the author on 04-Aug-2017
Good luck in the contest. I didn't see or pay attention to this contest. (Your day sounds similar to mine. Now I'm interested. ;P
Have a good weekend!
Comment Written 03-Aug-2017
reply by the author on 04-Aug-2017
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Hi there; Thank you so much for the lovely review,
~patty~
Comment from Cindy Warren
Sounds nice. My days have not been so typical this past week. My fish tank sprung a leak right at the bottom. I was up all night emptying it and removing the gravel after work. Then I had to hunt down a neighbor to help me lift it to the floor so I could clean and re-seal it. The fish finally returned home last night. A typical day sounds like heaven right about now. Best of luck with your contest.
reply by the author on 04-Aug-2017
Sounds nice. My days have not been so typical this past week. My fish tank sprung a leak right at the bottom. I was up all night emptying it and removing the gravel after work. Then I had to hunt down a neighbor to help me lift it to the floor so I could clean and re-seal it. The fish finally returned home last night. A typical day sounds like heaven right about now. Best of luck with your contest.
Comment Written 03-Aug-2017
reply by the author on 04-Aug-2017
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Hi Cindy; Thank you so much for the lovely review,
~patty~
Comment from Mrs Happy Poet
Hello my friend this is well written it looks like you have everything in order with your days I wish I could keep to a strict schedule something always gets in my way well done regards Jill
reply by the author on 04-Aug-2017
Hello my friend this is well written it looks like you have everything in order with your days I wish I could keep to a strict schedule something always gets in my way well done regards Jill
Comment Written 02-Aug-2017
reply by the author on 04-Aug-2017
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Hi Jill; Thank you so much for the lovely review,
~patty~
Comment from Bichon
Lovely short story about a day in your life. It was very interesting to read and very enjoyable. I wish you the best of luck in the contest with this lovely entry.
reply by the author on 04-Aug-2017
Lovely short story about a day in your life. It was very interesting to read and very enjoyable. I wish you the best of luck in the contest with this lovely entry.
Comment Written 02-Aug-2017
reply by the author on 04-Aug-2017
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Hi Chloe; thank you so much for the lovely review,
~patty~
Comment from Margaret Snowdon
Well, that all sounds good to me - chores and such out of the way first, and then concentrate on writing.
Mind, if I had your dogs, then not much writing would get done, I'm afraid - I used to waste so much time playing with my little Cairn terrier or my son's dog when it came to stay whilst he went on holiday.
Good luck with the contest, Patty
Margaret
reply by the author on 01-Aug-2017
Well, that all sounds good to me - chores and such out of the way first, and then concentrate on writing.
Mind, if I had your dogs, then not much writing would get done, I'm afraid - I used to waste so much time playing with my little Cairn terrier or my son's dog when it came to stay whilst he went on holiday.
Good luck with the contest, Patty
Margaret
Comment Written 01-Aug-2017
reply by the author on 01-Aug-2017
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Hi Margaret; the dogs do keep me busy - but since they often act like cats in dog suits, they will sleep quite a bit. LOL!
Thank you for your well wishes in the contest,
~patty~
Comment from kiwigirl2821
Hello Patty. Isn't it so cool when a day is a normal satisfying time of life. Coffee with the hubby, the smells, the lists, the postings - all of these feel comfortable for this reader to read. Good luck. Loved this. xoxo Kiwi
reply by the author on 01-Aug-2017
Hello Patty. Isn't it so cool when a day is a normal satisfying time of life. Coffee with the hubby, the smells, the lists, the postings - all of these feel comfortable for this reader to read. Good luck. Loved this. xoxo Kiwi
Comment Written 01-Aug-2017
reply by the author on 01-Aug-2017
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Hi there; thank you so much for the lovely review.
~patty~
Comment from Bucketlist
Hi patti, sounds like you are strongly pulled to FS as I.The difference being I don't drink coffee! I liked your sharing of a routine with us. I hope the coffee gives you a long boost. I cannot find anything to ' pick on' thanks for sharing. I wish you a peaceful day.
Hugs,Trisha
reply by the author on 01-Aug-2017
Hi patti, sounds like you are strongly pulled to FS as I.The difference being I don't drink coffee! I liked your sharing of a routine with us. I hope the coffee gives you a long boost. I cannot find anything to ' pick on' thanks for sharing. I wish you a peaceful day.
Hugs,Trisha
Comment Written 01-Aug-2017
reply by the author on 01-Aug-2017
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Hi Trisha; thank you so much for the lovely review
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You are welcome patti
Comment from BOO ghost
Awe,matey, a cup of Jo. That should get BOO motivated and awake. yep, lot to do. is hard to juggle real life with fanstory castle. Makes common sense. Like the picture. It qualifies like you already know. 98 words. BOO don't drink coffee but sucks down soda pops like Johnny B' Good. Need the caffeine. Well orchestrated.
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reply by the author on 01-Aug-2017
Awe,matey, a cup of Jo. That should get BOO motivated and awake. yep, lot to do. is hard to juggle real life with fanstory castle. Makes common sense. Like the picture. It qualifies like you already know. 98 words. BOO don't drink coffee but sucks down soda pops like Johnny B' Good. Need the caffeine. Well orchestrated.
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Comment Written 01-Aug-2017
reply by the author on 01-Aug-2017
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Hi Boo; I remember the days before I started drinking coffee; I used to feast on Mr. Pibb for my caffeine source.
Thanks for reading,
~patty~
Comment from Asem.inspirations
Hello Patty, this typical day post is so nicely done. It's specific and to the point, well written, of course and gives us a fun peak into your very busy day. The life of a Writer, one we can all relate, very much, with.
reply by the author on 31-Jul-2017
Hello Patty, this typical day post is so nicely done. It's specific and to the point, well written, of course and gives us a fun peak into your very busy day. The life of a Writer, one we can all relate, very much, with.
Comment Written 31-Jul-2017
reply by the author on 31-Jul-2017
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Hi Tier;
thank you so much for this lovely review,
~patty~