The Products of Love
Viewing comments for Chapter 9 "Ron's reaction to the news"...the story of Jenny and Ron
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Comment from patcelaw
Patty, what a sad and compelling story about your friend, Jenny and Ron. It is so sad to think that a man has no concern that his flesh and blood he would want aborted. Not a man of character. Patricia
reply by the author on 31-Jul-2017
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Patty, what a sad and compelling story about your friend, Jenny and Ron. It is so sad to think that a man has no concern that his flesh and blood he would want aborted. Not a man of character. Patricia
Comment Written 31-Jul-2017
reply by the author on 31-Jul-2017
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Hi Patricia; thank you for continuing to follow this story. I think you will be surprised with how it all turns out,
~patty~
Comment from nartoonla
Hello, Wow what a story ...is it true.._? If so what a bastard and yet some caring emotions came through ..To be continued. Nooo.. Hate that as often miss the end. Was it meant to be so... leaving all that read the story in suspense.. or really so? How to follow it up if so. ?
Brief not really into such love stories but it was nicely told and you got me hooked and wanting more. Well done. Regards nartoonla.
reply by the author on 31-Jul-2017
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Hello, Wow what a story ...is it true.._? If so what a bastard and yet some caring emotions came through ..To be continued. Nooo.. Hate that as often miss the end. Was it meant to be so... leaving all that read the story in suspense.. or really so? How to follow it up if so. ?
Brief not really into such love stories but it was nicely told and you got me hooked and wanting more. Well done. Regards nartoonla.
Comment Written 31-Jul-2017
reply by the author on 31-Jul-2017
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Hi there; yes, this story is based in the truth that one of my best friends went through back in 1983.
this was a very difficult chapter to write; I still can't believe that Ron only saw ONE option.
Much more to come,
~patty~
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Hi, remind me as not sure how to go about new posts.... The poor friend and yet she inspired you... no doubt as you consoled. Ah, lots of love stories that tare your heart apart.. and leave you with your mouth open... But then as everything it depens.. later..nartoonla
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This story only has about three more new posts coming - there are a few chapters that need to be edited to fit in with the story line that were posted earlier.
Thank you for reading,
~patty~
Comment from Rasmine
Patty, men can be so dumb and cruel. But then again, Jenny was a little hasty with judging him. Actually, I think I would have reacted like Jenny did, but Ron should have followed her out when she ran out.
I'm getting into this, can't wait for the next. :)
Take care
reply by the author on 31-Jul-2017
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Patty, men can be so dumb and cruel. But then again, Jenny was a little hasty with judging him. Actually, I think I would have reacted like Jenny did, but Ron should have followed her out when she ran out.
I'm getting into this, can't wait for the next. :)
Take care
Comment Written 31-Jul-2017
reply by the author on 31-Jul-2017
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Hi there; this was a very difficult chapter to write; I still can't believe that Ron only saw ONE option.
Much more to come,
~patty~
Comment from apky
Oh dear, oh dear.
But all is not lost yet. I'm curious to know what Ron and Jenny will do when they face each other. again. After all, this was not exactly a break - they simply misinterrpret each other's words and reactions.
reply by the author on 31-Jul-2017
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Oh dear, oh dear.
But all is not lost yet. I'm curious to know what Ron and Jenny will do when they face each other. again. After all, this was not exactly a break - they simply misinterrpret each other's words and reactions.
Comment Written 31-Jul-2017
reply by the author on 31-Jul-2017
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Hi Aki; this was a very difficult chapter to write; I still can't believe that Ron only saw ONE option.
Much more to come,
~patty~
Comment from lyenochka
Oh, horror! He didn't even ask if that's what she wanted! Poor Jenny. She seemed to be connected with the baby already. I did like that you switched to get inside Ron's head and the feeling like a boat lost at sea - great metaphor someone who works at a shipyard!
reply by the author on 31-Jul-2017
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Oh, horror! He didn't even ask if that's what she wanted! Poor Jenny. She seemed to be connected with the baby already. I did like that you switched to get inside Ron's head and the feeling like a boat lost at sea - great metaphor someone who works at a shipyard!
Comment Written 31-Jul-2017
reply by the author on 31-Jul-2017
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Hi; I'm glad you enjoyed that line - I loved creating it! this was a very difficult chapter to write; I still can't believe that Ron only saw ONE option.
Much more to come,
~patty~
Comment from Cindy Warren
He accuses her of her being cold? What a jerk. At least we know she isn't going to let him tell her what to do. I hope she tells him where he can stick his money.
reply by the author on 31-Jul-2017
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He accuses her of her being cold? What a jerk. At least we know she isn't going to let him tell her what to do. I hope she tells him where he can stick his money.
Comment Written 31-Jul-2017
reply by the author on 31-Jul-2017
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Hi Cindy; this was a very difficult chapter to write; I still can't believe that Ron only saw ONE option.
Much more to come,
~patty~
Comment from BOO ghost
Jenny warned Ron that there wouldn't be any sex until they were in a committed relationship. yep, recall this. All started out as a dream of the perfect romance... your notes help. When she let herself in, she found Ron sitting with a strange woman. That was fast. He is a quick mover and a player. "Hi Ron. It's Jenny. I have something to tell you." This should prove interesting. I guess only one time was all it took. yep, he has powerful seeds. Dadio. I will call you back after I've processed all this. Right. this is great, Mustang. Like a boat escaped from its mooring, he and his thoughts floated out to sea. really like this metaphor. Creative. Like this Mustang. ----------@>> Cool idea. BOO already knew what his answer would be. Another deadbeat dad, it appears. Good imagination. You worked hard on this. BOO-tastic!
reply by the author on 31-Jul-2017
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Jenny warned Ron that there wouldn't be any sex until they were in a committed relationship. yep, recall this. All started out as a dream of the perfect romance... your notes help. When she let herself in, she found Ron sitting with a strange woman. That was fast. He is a quick mover and a player. "Hi Ron. It's Jenny. I have something to tell you." This should prove interesting. I guess only one time was all it took. yep, he has powerful seeds. Dadio. I will call you back after I've processed all this. Right. this is great, Mustang. Like a boat escaped from its mooring, he and his thoughts floated out to sea. really like this metaphor. Creative. Like this Mustang. ----------@>> Cool idea. BOO already knew what his answer would be. Another deadbeat dad, it appears. Good imagination. You worked hard on this. BOO-tastic!
Comment Written 31-Jul-2017
reply by the author on 31-Jul-2017
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Hi Boo; thank you so much for the lovely review. I'm glad you enjoyed that line - I had a great time creating it.
this was a very difficult chapter to write; I still can't believe that Ron only saw ONE option.
Much more to come,
~patty~
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i can believe it. The voice in the incubus needs a voice.
Comment from kiwigirl2821
Hi Patty. I wonder if Ron thinks he's a mess what is Jenny?
A couple of hours? Well Jenny gets 18 or 20 years! Men!
What a coward! She won't get rid of it. She loves this idiot!
yeah I'm enjoying it. Thanks mate. xoxo Kiwi
reply by the author on 31-Jul-2017
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Hi Patty. I wonder if Ron thinks he's a mess what is Jenny?
A couple of hours? Well Jenny gets 18 or 20 years! Men!
What a coward! She won't get rid of it. She loves this idiot!
yeah I'm enjoying it. Thanks mate. xoxo Kiwi
Comment Written 30-Jul-2017
reply by the author on 31-Jul-2017
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Hi there; this was a very difficult chapter to write; I still can't believe that Ron only saw ONE option.
Much more to come,
~patty~
Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
Patty,
Well, I almost feel a little sad for Ron--almost. He seems to be one without any communication skills. You did a great job focusing on the phone call for this chapter. I believe at times like this a third party needed to be involved to help with the strained relationship. Thanks for sharing. Jan
reply by the author on 31-Jul-2017
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Patty,
Well, I almost feel a little sad for Ron--almost. He seems to be one without any communication skills. You did a great job focusing on the phone call for this chapter. I believe at times like this a third party needed to be involved to help with the strained relationship. Thanks for sharing. Jan
Comment Written 30-Jul-2017
reply by the author on 31-Jul-2017
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Hi Jan; this was a very difficult chapter to write; I still can't believe that Ron only saw ONE option.
Much more to come,
~patty~
Comment from Curly Girly
Oh, no! I hope she takes his money and keeps the baby.
How could she be such an idiot and not take any birth control? Unbelievable! But yes, girls still fall pregnant to this day--just like that.
If only she had let Ron explain. Now, it's all become undoable.
Nicole
reply by the author on 31-Jul-2017
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Oh, no! I hope she takes his money and keeps the baby.
How could she be such an idiot and not take any birth control? Unbelievable! But yes, girls still fall pregnant to this day--just like that.
If only she had let Ron explain. Now, it's all become undoable.
Nicole
Comment Written 30-Jul-2017
reply by the author on 31-Jul-2017
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Hi Nicole; (Yes, she did take the money and did what she wanted with it.)
this was a very difficult chapter to write; I still can't believe that Ron only saw ONE option.
Much more to come,
~patty~
