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Viewing comments for Chapter 4 "Lady Mathilde goes to London"Historical fiction
2 total reviews
Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear
This is a nice work on memoirs and letters from and to Mathilde, family and general letters having varied orders of feelings and expressions of relation and environment; I liked.
reply by the author on 07-Aug-2017
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This is a nice work on memoirs and letters from and to Mathilde, family and general letters having varied orders of feelings and expressions of relation and environment; I liked.
Comment Written 30-Jul-2017
reply by the author on 07-Aug-2017
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Thanks for taking time to read and critique zanya
Comment from Brett Matthew West
Storyline possesses enough action to move the tale along nicely.
Several different directions you could travel this accounting in from this point forward.
reply by the author on 07-Aug-2017
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Storyline possesses enough action to move the tale along nicely.
Several different directions you could travel this accounting in from this point forward.
Comment Written 29-Jul-2017
reply by the author on 07-Aug-2017
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Thanks for the encouraging review zanya
