Comment from Dolly'sPoems

Excellent

Your words mean a lot and I can feel the warmth in them and your love for your hubby, he is a lucky man to have such a devoted wife, I wish you luck with the contest, love Dolly x

 Comment Written 28-Jul-2017

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reply by the author on 28-Jul-2017

Hi Dolly; thank you so much for the lovely review and well wishes,

~patty~

Comment from Rasmine

Excellent

Let me tell you, your hubby is a hottie. He looks very kind; you are very lucky. :)
Good poem, make sure you share it with him. I know you will, duh on my part.

TC and good luck in the contest.

 Comment Written 28-Jul-2017

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reply by the author on 28-Jul-2017

hi there; thank you so much for the lovely review. My hubby is certainly awesome. I count my blessings every day,

~patty~

Comment from Thomas Bowling

Excellent

It's wonderful to have someone who makes you feel safe. The blue eyes don't hurt either. A very short poem that gets right to the point. No beating around the bush.

 Comment Written 28-Jul-2017

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reply by the author on 28-Jul-2017

Hi Thomas; thank you so much for reading and the lovely review of the piece. I think I like writing short poems best - you have to make the most out of each word,

~patty~

Comment from robyn corum

Excellent

Patty,

It's not easy to write a full review about a small poem, but I'll try. *smile* This reads like a steamy love letter, and I feel a bit like a voyeur. heehee I can read a lot into this - just by the few words you've shared. Obviously, you think your man is nice-looking and strong and safe. Obviously, he holds your heart. This is a perfect ode to a man you love. Good luck in the contest!

 Comment Written 28-Jul-2017

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reply by the author on 28-Jul-2017

Hi Robyn; yes, reviewing short poems is challenging, so I try to make my words count!

Greatly appreciate you stopping by to read and review,

~patty~

Comment from rtobaygo

Excellent

Hello, Patty

As before with some of your poems, so much is conveyed to the reader using so few words. The sense of love and security is quite evident. Oh yes, nice picture of your husband.

Take care and stay safe,

Ray

 Comment Written 28-Jul-2017

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reply by the author on 28-Jul-2017

Hi again, Ray; I'm so glad you like this poem, and I greatly appreciate your comments about my ability to convey so much with just a few words,

~patty~

Comment from Thal1959

Excellent

When your husband was a tad younger, Patty? You don't mean the pic of you is outdated, do you? Ah, vanity - thy name is woman! Anyway, as if its important, this Lanturne actually is quite succinct. His blue eyes attract you, his strength protects you. Nicely done.

 Comment Written 28-Jul-2017

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reply by the author on 28-Jul-2017

Nope - the picture of me on my profile was taken last month. Dave's picture is one from 1987 - hmmm, thirty years ago. It is one of my favorites.

Thank you for reading and the lovely review of my lanturne,

~patty~

reply by Thal1959 on 28-Jul-2017

Always a pleasure, Patty.

Comment from gudbjorg

Excellent

A short text accompanied with a picture is a very good way in saying a lot in few words. These expressions very are important regarding any relationship and they can tell a whole story in just a moment. Your poem is well written, I like it, has a good flow and fantastic imagery. It is also is expressive and romantic, a good write. Well done.

 Comment Written 28-Jul-2017

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reply by the author on 28-Jul-2017

thank you so much for the lovely review of this piece. I love to write poems for my husband,

~patty~

Comment from patcelaw

Excellent

Patty, this is an excellent entry in the contest. I wish you the very best in the contest. I am glad you have a place of safety with your hubby. Blessings for a good weekend.Patricia

 Comment Written 28-Jul-2017

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reply by the author on 28-Jul-2017

hi there; thank you so much for reading and reviewing,

~patty~

Comment from Mistydawn

Excellent

What a wonderful poem about everlasting love. The picture was perfect, really added to the poem. You have a very handsome husband and his eyes no wonder they melt your heart.

 Comment Written 28-Jul-2017

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reply by the author on 28-Jul-2017

thank you so much for the review of my poem and for the compliment of my hubby. His eyes are still so blue, in spite of the grey in his beard,

~patty~

Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose

Excellent

Hello my friend


Your husband is very handsome, nice picture. You seem to be in love with him...how cool is that. It's very important to keep romance alive. Good job sweetie pie.

Gypsy hugs

 Comment Written 28-Jul-2017

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reply by the author on 28-Jul-2017

Hi Gypsy; thank you for the compliment on my hubby. In spite of the grey in his beard and hair now, he is still very handsome - those blue eyes still draw me in. I'm very lucky in deed.

Thanks for reading,

~patty~