Comment from Eternal Muse

Excellent

A very nice example of a Lanturne, and your husband is a handsome man!

I had a little trouble with a small font, perhaps, enlarging it a bit would bring out the presentation.

 Comment Written 29-Jul-2017

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reply by the author on 29-Jul-2017

Hi there; thank you so much for stopping by to read and review. I did go and edit to make the font larger. I appreciate your thoughts on the poem and the compliment for my husband,

~patty~

Comment from honeytree

Excellent

The art work is great
for these words written.
When we see someone's
eyes can be very special
I like the words written
here very much indeed.

Honey tree

I have no six left

 Comment Written 29-Jul-2017

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reply by the author on 29-Jul-2017

Hi Honey tree; thank you so much for the lovely review. I appreciate the virtual 'six.'

~patty~

Comment from DR DIP

Excellent

Nice words Patty. Pretty well sums up your relationship in 3 lines hey. That is 30 years ago Patty how time must fly past like it has for me. Thanks for sharing

dip

 Comment Written 29-Jul-2017

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reply by the author on 29-Jul-2017

Hi dip; thank you so much for the lovely review.

~patty~

Comment from kiwigirl2821

Excellent

Hi Patty. I like how you have written this but am wondering with an open heart, why that last word "safe"? Is that better than a husband who makes you feel "loved"? Or is this something more personal that has happened in your life? Just a couple of thoughts that I'm feeling as I read this beautiful work of art. Good luck. xoxo Kiwi

 Comment Written 29-Jul-2017

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reply by the author on 29-Jul-2017

Hi; I'm glad you enjoyed the poem. I've shared a great deal about how I feel about my hubby, and I've shared a great deal about my early life - 'safe' is a key word.

Thank you so much for reading and the lovely review,

~patty~

Comment from Hitcher

Excellent

I bet you say that to all the blue eyed boys : ) Ok Ok I see, he's your hubby... Nice!!
It is a very cool romantic little lanturne poem friend. I wish you the best of luck with it, safe is a warm and wonderful place to be!

 Comment Written 29-Jul-2017

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reply by the author on 29-Jul-2017

thank you so much for the lovely review. I am indeed feeling safe to know I'm loved by my man,

~patty~

though I do always notice blue eyes

Comment from Barb Hensongispsaca

Excellent

A perfect lanturne poem for the contest. Syllable count is spot on and when you have love, I think you can write about anything. Very nicely done

 Comment Written 28-Jul-2017

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reply by the author on 29-Jul-2017

Hi Barb; thank you so much for the lovely review,

~patty~

Comment from flylikeaneagle

Exceptional

Patty: what a sweet poem about your hubby. I like the lost in
and feel safe. Wow! Have a fun filled summer with your treasure.
Your honey looks very loving. Mine has blue eyes, too. Nice opposites.
flylikeaneagle

 Comment Written 28-Jul-2017

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reply by the author on 29-Jul-2017

Hi there; thank you so much for the lovely review. I'm thrilled you felt like it deserved the shining sixth star,

~patty~

Comment from Jannypan (Jan)

Excellent

Your few words as required by the style say so much. Good job with those important words. Your poem does have a lantern shape. I can tell how much you love your husband. Best wishes in the contest. Jan

 Comment Written 28-Jul-2017

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reply by the author on 28-Jul-2017

hi there; thank you so much for the lovely review. I'm very lucky to have Dave in my life,

~patty~

Comment from RebelRose

Excellent

So much said in so few words. I know what you mean about feeling safe with your man.
It's a wonderful feeling and definitely worth writing about.

 Comment Written 28-Jul-2017

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reply by the author on 28-Jul-2017

Hi there; thank you for a lovely review. I do appreciate your words,

~patty~

Comment from BOO ghost

Excellent

Author notes appreciated. Oh, an unique poem. OK. BOO gets the logic. poem that looks like a lantern which is where the name of this poem comes from. has your hubby seen this? Romantic words. Nice camera shot! Nice looking lad, looks like a gentleman. Poem well written and orchestrated and happy life, you two! BOO ghost. BOO is out of nuggets.

 Comment Written 28-Jul-2017

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reply by the author on 28-Jul-2017

thank you so much for a great review of this poem. Hubby should be home any minute and I will show him his poem,

~patty~

reply by BOO ghost on 28-Jul-2017

Okie dokie. Heard that edam cheese is good from Netherlands.