Brandon McCann
Viewing comments for Chapter 4 "Manhunter"Young boy missing en route to Orlando, Florida
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Comment from apky
This story, that started out rather "harmless" with little Brandon on an aeroplane seat next to a kind old fellow now seems to get more and more complicated and even dangerous - forgive my un-writer-like long sentence.
You do know how to weave a tale mysterious ang gripping, Brett.
I'm just about holding my breath for the next chapter.
reply by the author on 29-Jul-2017
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This story, that started out rather "harmless" with little Brandon on an aeroplane seat next to a kind old fellow now seems to get more and more complicated and even dangerous - forgive my un-writer-like long sentence.
You do know how to weave a tale mysterious ang gripping, Brett.
I'm just about holding my breath for the next chapter.
Comment Written 28-Jul-2017
reply by the author on 29-Jul-2017
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Glad you enjoyed this chapter.
Your comments, support, and reviews appreciated.
More to come so I invite you to ride along.
Comment from Rasmine
Hello, Brett, :)
I hope the child is okay. This is really interesting. :P
Come Helen Highwater (I thought it was 'hell or high water'? I looked up Helen Highwater, it's a string band.) he'd find the missing kid.
Can't wait for the next.
reply by the author on 29-Jul-2017
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Hello, Brett, :)
I hope the child is okay. This is really interesting. :P
Come Helen Highwater (I thought it was 'hell or high water'? I looked up Helen Highwater, it's a string band.) he'd find the missing kid.
Can't wait for the next.
Comment Written 28-Jul-2017
reply by the author on 29-Jul-2017
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Helen Highwater is a much more colorful way to express that comment without having to use profanity to express it.
Glad you enjoyed this chapter.
Much more to come so I invite you to ride along.
Comment from beizanten
Interesting last chapter ending. Interesting first paragraph, you capture my attention. Overall a well written and interesting story. Keep up the great work alright
reply by the author on 29-Jul-2017
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Interesting last chapter ending. Interesting first paragraph, you capture my attention. Overall a well written and interesting story. Keep up the great work alright
Comment Written 28-Jul-2017
reply by the author on 29-Jul-2017
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Glad you enjoyed this chapter.
Appreciate you taking the time to read it and to write a review.
Much more to come so I invite you to ride along.
Comment from Barb Hensongispsaca
Very well written and I truly love this character you have introduced. Taking charge, he rocks in the world of missing persons and takes charge when needed.. No problems noted
reply by the author on 29-Jul-2017
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Very well written and I truly love this character you have introduced. Taking charge, he rocks in the world of missing persons and takes charge when needed.. No problems noted
Comment Written 28-Jul-2017
reply by the author on 29-Jul-2017
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Glad you enjoyed this chapter.
Always appreciate your comments, support, and reviews.
Much more to come so I invite you to ride along.
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written chapter to introduce the bloodhound detective that will find the missing Brandon McCann as quickly as possible to finally go for retirement after years of seeking missing people, he is tired of this job.
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reply by the author on 28-Jul-2017
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A very well-written chapter to introduce the bloodhound detective that will find the missing Brandon McCann as quickly as possible to finally go for retirement after years of seeking missing people, he is tired of this job.
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Comment Written 28-Jul-2017
reply by the author on 28-Jul-2017
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Glad you enjoyed this chapter.
Appreciate your comments, support, and reviews.
Much more to come so I invite you to ride along.
Comment from Mustang Patty
Hi Brett; you created a great character and gave us a great deal of information about the way he feels about his job, and his wonderful instincts. I'm glad someone like him is on the case to find Brandon. Looking forward to more,
~patty~
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reply by the author on 28-Jul-2017
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Hi Brett; you created a great character and gave us a great deal of information about the way he feels about his job, and his wonderful instincts. I'm glad someone like him is on the case to find Brandon. Looking forward to more,
~patty~
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Comment Written 28-Jul-2017
reply by the author on 28-Jul-2017
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If I created a great character then I achieved my purpose. So, I appreciate that comment.
Glad you enjoyed this chapter.
Always appreciate your comments, support, and reviews.
Much more to come so I invite you to ride along.
