Comment from lyenochka

Excellent

It's always a comfort when you fell God's presence and His love. It takes effort to realize He's always there. Sometimes, it's the times we are most needy, we hear Him best.

 Comment Written 25-Jul-2017

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reply by the author on 25-Jul-2017

thank you for the lovely review; your words are so true,

~patty~

Comment from Pantygynt

Excellent

This is actually a succinct statement of faith, accompanied by a beautiful piece of artwork depicting a cloudscape at the approch of sunset or it could just be shortly after sunrise over a winter landscape of skeletal trees.

 Comment Written 25-Jul-2017

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reply by the author on 25-Jul-2017

Hi Jim; thank you so much for the lovely review. It is a testament to my faith and I'm glad you read that into it,

~patty~

Comment from kiwigirl2821

Excellent

How kind you are Patty to be offering up yourself for this kind of deal. You know people are going to take your literally. Nice entry into the contest. Good luck. xoxo Kiwi

 Comment Written 25-Jul-2017

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reply by the author on 25-Jul-2017

thank you for the lovely review. I haven't seen any requests in my message box, but if I do - I will be happy to help in any way I can,

~patty~

Comment from Jacqueline M Franklin

Excellent

Hi, Patty

= Nice peaceful feeling in your poem with the soothing artwork.
= Lends itself to romance. Good luck in the contest.

= Due to company coming from England, and other friends, all due in August, I'll be very busy and unable to post. BUT, I will be back in September with all new chapters and poetry.

<> A Smile Is A Frown Turned Upside-down (*>*)
<> Cheers <> Jax / Jackie

 Comment Written 25-Jul-2017

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reply by the author on 25-Jul-2017

Hi Jax; thank you for the lovely review,

~patty~

Comment from JDRBAR

Excellent

If only more people would realize the difference God can make in our lives if only we would let Him. This is a beautiful little poem that says a lot. God bless.

 Comment Written 25-Jul-2017

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reply by the author on 25-Jul-2017

hi there; thank you so much for the lovely review.

~patty~

Comment from Janet Foor

Excellent

Not a haiku, but a lovely three line poem giving promise and hope to us from our Creator. Sunsets always make me feel close to Him.

Very nicely done.
Blessings
Janet

 Comment Written 25-Jul-2017

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reply by the author on 25-Jul-2017

hi Janet; thank you for the lovely review,

~patty~

Comment from Lindagail Hall

Excellent

You are not going to believe this the last two mornings I've awoken crying yet don't know why I then wrote a short poem. And here you are offering comfort and compassion. God works in mysterious ways. Love the simplicity of this three line that last line holds tight in my mind, great photo as well. Good luck in contest

 Comment Written 25-Jul-2017

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reply by the author on 25-Jul-2017

thank you so much for sharing this with me. I'm so sorry you were so sad, but I'm glad my poem was able to give you comfort.

Thank you for reading and reviewing and the lovely review. I hope you have a better day today,

~patty~

Comment from TAB_that's me

Excellent

This is so true. God is asking why so sad and He wants to comfort us. He is just waiting for us to ask Him to help.

Great 3 line poem - good luck!

teresa

 Comment Written 25-Jul-2017

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reply by the author on 25-Jul-2017

Hi Teresa; thank you so much for the lovely review. I'm reasonably sure I won't win the contest - I've read some of the other wonderful poems I'm up against - but it is fun to try!

~patty~

Comment from SarahPenn1

Excellent

I love that the questions aren't answered and yet help and love is offered anyway. A beautiful representation of faith and believing that we are never alone

Thank you

 Comment Written 25-Jul-2017

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reply by the author on 25-Jul-2017

thank you so much for the lovely review of this piece. This one just flowed naturally, so I believe it came from Him,

~patty~

Comment from Eternal Muse

Excellent

A very good use of three lines in this contest. Offering love for support is great comfort. Sometimes all we need is love. And it's not always there. Good social commentary.

Good luck in the contest.

 Comment Written 25-Jul-2017

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reply by the author on 25-Jul-2017

thank you so much for stopping by to read. I greatly appreciate your comments,

~patty~