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Brandon McCann

Viewing comments for Chapter 3 "Mommie Dearest, Or Is That Dullest?"
Young boy missing en route to Orlando, Florida

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Comment from Bill Schott
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This is a dynamic and highly unlikable character. She, at times, seems too evil, but I must admit I have met enough people in the world to know that she is a true-to-life person.

 Comment Written 27-Jul-2017

reply by the author on 28-Jul-2017
    If she is highly unlikable, then I achieved my purpose with her character development.

    Glad you enjoyed this chapter.

    Always appreciate your comments, support, and reviews.

    Much more to come so I invite you to ride along.
Comment from Rasmine
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This is really good. Do you mind if I become a fan of yours? When I read something intriguing, I don't really want to miss more of it. I hope Brandon's okay. :P

Take care.

 Comment Written 27-Jul-2017

reply by the author on 28-Jul-2017
    I do not mind if you become a fan of mine at all. I would say, "Welcome aboard! Glad to have you."

    Appreciate you taking the time to read this chapter and to write a review.

    Much more to come so I invite you to ride along.
Comment from Ulla
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Hi Brett, so now we're being introduced to one more character but an important one. The mother at this junction appears to be icy to put it mildly. I'm looking forward to start reading the story in earnest. All best. Ulla

 Comment Written 27-Jul-2017

reply by the author on 27-Jul-2017
    Thanks. Glad you enjoyed this chapter.

    Much more to come so I invite you to ride along.
Comment from dweigt
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This is a great introduction to a nasty character! Poor Brandon. Military school would have been an escape for him, I'm sure. Being raised by such a woman should leave some psychological scars for him to deal with, making him an interesting character for you.

Keep writing!

 Comment Written 27-Jul-2017

reply by the author on 27-Jul-2017
    Glad you enjoyed this chapter.

    Appreciate you taking the time to read it and to write a review.

    Much more to come so I invite you to ride along.
Comment from Mustang Patty
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Veronica sounds like one of those mothers that raises a psycopath. It is so horrible to imagine any child being treated like that - but it happens all too often. Brandon was lucky to be rid of her - though I seriously doubt he thought that.

Well told and I look forward to more,

~patty~

 Comment Written 27-Jul-2017

reply by the author on 27-Jul-2017
    Glad you enjoyed this chapter.

    Appreciate your comments, support, and reviews.

    Much more to come so I invite you to ride along.
Comment from MizKat
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Hi Brett,

Again you've written something interesting. You are wonderful at writing stories. I'm getting worse at writing poetry so I haven't written any for awhile.

Kat

 Comment Written 26-Jul-2017

reply by the author on 27-Jul-2017
    Glad you enjoyed this chapter of my book.

    Always appreciate your comments, support, and reviews.

    Much more to come so I invite you to ride along.
Comment from country ranch writer
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She uses her husbands neglect for her leaving what about the child missing? Her own flesh and blood is now missing and she better get her act together.

 Comment Written 26-Jul-2017

reply by the author on 27-Jul-2017
    Glad you enjoyed this chapter of my book.

    Your comments, support, and reviews appreciated.

    Much more to come so I invite you to ride along.
Comment from Spitfire
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This sounds more like an outline of a book complete with the biography of each character. As of now, Brandon's disappearance sounds like foul play so Mom can collect insurance.

 Comment Written 26-Jul-2017

reply by the author on 26-Jul-2017
    Glad you enjoyed this chapter.

    Appreciate your comments and support.

    Much more to come so I invite you to ride along.
Comment from doggymad
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What a wonderful mother and wife. You are spinning quite a story here and leaving the reader anxious to hear more.

Poor Brandon sounds like a loose end that had to be tied up

hugs

Freda

 Comment Written 26-Jul-2017

reply by the author on 26-Jul-2017
    A wonderful mother and wife? Interesting concept.

    Appreciate your comments and support.

    Much more to come so I invite you to ride along.
reply by doggymad on 27-Jul-2017
    Sorry Brett a poor attempt at sarcasm, she was anything but
    hugs

    Freda
Comment from Barb Hensongispsaca
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As a lot of mothers are this day and age. Quite an eye opener for the entrance into the story and lays the groundwork for some kidnapping

 Comment Written 26-Jul-2017

reply by the author on 26-Jul-2017
    Glad you enjoyed this chapter.

    Always appreciate your comments and support.

    Much more to come so I invite you to ride along.