Donald the Rapper
A poke in the ribs to our Pres.41 total reviews
Comment from lalajovanoski
Hello my dear friend, I very much enjoyed reading this excellent poem about our president. I found it to be quite amusing. I like the way that it flows it's very soft and smooth and this is cleverly written. Great alliteration and imagery. Thank you very much for sharing this. God bless you. With love, Lola
reply by the author on 25-Jul-2017
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Hello my dear friend, I very much enjoyed reading this excellent poem about our president. I found it to be quite amusing. I like the way that it flows it's very soft and smooth and this is cleverly written. Great alliteration and imagery. Thank you very much for sharing this. God bless you. With love, Lola
Comment Written 24-Jul-2017
reply by the author on 25-Jul-2017
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Hello Miss Lola. I love your kind, friendly and supportive words. I do wish that there were many more Lolas in the world because we would then be much happier and much more at peace.
Comment from Dean Kuch
No apologies necessary as far as I'm concerned, Nomi.
Trump is a buffoon--a narcissistic Adolf Hitler wannabe who cares about one thing more than he cares about himself--money.
I didn't vote for the idiot and I'm not going to rally behind him either.
Good job with this!
~Dean
reply by the author on 25-Jul-2017
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No apologies necessary as far as I'm concerned, Nomi.
Trump is a buffoon--a narcissistic Adolf Hitler wannabe who cares about one thing more than he cares about himself--money.
I didn't vote for the idiot and I'm not going to rally behind him either.
Good job with this!
~Dean
Comment Written 24-Jul-2017
reply by the author on 25-Jul-2017
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Thanks Dean. You must already know that you are one of my favorite writers on this site. We have never physically met, but I consider you a friend, a well liked friend. I value your opinion, especially when it is supportive and it is often instructive, so I just want to thank you again. Sorry for the sentimentality, I got all choked up and started to run on .......
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I feel much the same way about you, my friend.
I have many good friends on this site--kind and supportive people, just like yourself--and I definitely consider you among them.
Well done, Nomi.
~Dean
Comment from c_lucas
Mishandling a modern
Woman will lead to an
Early Death.I prefer
To be Faint Of Heart
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This is very well written with a smooth flow of words, making for a very good read.
reply by the author on 25-Jul-2017
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Mishandling a modern
Woman will lead to an
Early Death.I prefer
To be Faint Of Heart
***
This is very well written with a smooth flow of words, making for a very good read.
Comment Written 24-Jul-2017
reply by the author on 25-Jul-2017
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Me too Charlie. Reach out to grab a woman by anything other than her imagination could result in tragedy. Thanks again old friend, I appreciate you as always.
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Likewise, Nomi. Charlie
Comment from kathleenspalding
You know, six stars for the author's notes!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Your rap is hilarious and deserved, and if people can't accept reality, they can fly themselves to NarNar land.
OK, poem-wise, it flows well and I see no errors. Great job!
reply by the author on 24-Jul-2017
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You know, six stars for the author's notes!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Your rap is hilarious and deserved, and if people can't accept reality, they can fly themselves to NarNar land.
OK, poem-wise, it flows well and I see no errors. Great job!
Comment Written 24-Jul-2017
reply by the author on 24-Jul-2017
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Thank you so much for a really great review. I think that you are a top notch reviewer, you are formally invited to review everything I submit here from now on. Thank you for the generous rating, I am actually humbled by your praise. Thank you.
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Lol. I'll fan you, if I haven't already. I think you'll like my Never Use Your Wife's Face Cream story.
Comment from Fridayauthor
Clever use of words and rhymes in this humorous posting. It seems the man paints himself into a position of generating this rampant response.
Well done with a nice final line!
Thank you!
reply by the author on 24-Jul-2017
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Clever use of words and rhymes in this humorous posting. It seems the man paints himself into a position of generating this rampant response.
Well done with a nice final line!
Thank you!
Comment Written 24-Jul-2017
reply by the author on 24-Jul-2017
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Thank you. let's just say that a fool is defined by the foolish things he does and says.
Comment from Bill Schott
This would be a good rap on its own maybe. It sure zeros in on the current problem plaguing society. Wonder if we can deport him back to Russia with his business partner P. Vladdy?
reply by the author on 24-Jul-2017
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This would be a good rap on its own maybe. It sure zeros in on the current problem plaguing society. Wonder if we can deport him back to Russia with his business partner P. Vladdy?
Comment Written 24-Jul-2017
reply by the author on 24-Jul-2017
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Ah Bill, you are too funny. What you say is funny, but on point at the same time. In any place other than where he is, he is of no use to old Vlad the Impaler. I fear if he loses his place here, Vlad may impale him and toss him aside.
Comment from Thal1959
Oh, you're such a sensitive! I like this poem, although "bigly" is quite a stretch - but this is poetry, and poets are encouraged to make variations with words. The rhyme pair biscuit/risk it is quite good.
reply by the author on 24-Jul-2017
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Oh, you're such a sensitive! I like this poem, although "bigly" is quite a stretch - but this is poetry, and poets are encouraged to make variations with words. The rhyme pair biscuit/risk it is quite good.
Comment Written 24-Jul-2017
reply by the author on 24-Jul-2017
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Thank you so much. Actually the term bigly is a term that the poem's subject has used on occasion.
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You're welcome - thanks for the explanation, too.
Comment from moonsunrise
I feel your pain. I feel our country is not in a good place right now because of him. He is arrogant and does not think of the less fortunate but only the rich. I am shocked at the way he judges and condemns people who don't agree with him.
I miss President Obama. He had more class in his finger that you know who has in both hands. I am afraid his has given us a bad name with other countries.
I continue to pray for something positive to happen soon.
Thanks for sharing.
reply by the author on 24-Jul-2017
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I feel your pain. I feel our country is not in a good place right now because of him. He is arrogant and does not think of the less fortunate but only the rich. I am shocked at the way he judges and condemns people who don't agree with him.
I miss President Obama. He had more class in his finger that you know who has in both hands. I am afraid his has given us a bad name with other countries.
I continue to pray for something positive to happen soon.
Thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 24-Jul-2017
reply by the author on 24-Jul-2017
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Thank you for reading and reviewing my poem. I agree that this particular presidency is rather toxic.
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It sure is.
I look forward to reading more of your writing.
Comment from Heather Knight
Your poem doesn't offend me. In fact I agree with everything you say. I still cannot believe this guy was elected president...
Anyway, this is a very funny post.
Thanks for sharing.
reply by the author on 24-Jul-2017
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Your poem doesn't offend me. In fact I agree with everything you say. I still cannot believe this guy was elected president...
Anyway, this is a very funny post.
Thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 24-Jul-2017
reply by the author on 24-Jul-2017
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Thank you Maria. I think that most people agree with you and I. What I find puzzling is how can he still be so confident when most of the country rate him as the lowest yet.
Comment from Nikki-Nicole
You've penned this one well.
I especially like the rhyme and rhythm.
the last line leaves the reader with something to think about. 'YOU ARE FIRED!'
The question is: Will he be re-elected for a second term? It seems the citizens of the United States will have to put up with him for a little over three more years. He's in now, but will he be invited back?
Thanks for sharing.
Good luck with your future writing.
-Nicole-
reply by the author on 24-Jul-2017
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You've penned this one well.
I especially like the rhyme and rhythm.
the last line leaves the reader with something to think about. 'YOU ARE FIRED!'
The question is: Will he be re-elected for a second term? It seems the citizens of the United States will have to put up with him for a little over three more years. He's in now, but will he be invited back?
Thanks for sharing.
Good luck with your future writing.
-Nicole-
Comment Written 24-Jul-2017
reply by the author on 24-Jul-2017
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Thank you for your wonderful comments. There is great hope that the country's voters will wake up and realize their great mistake and vow that never again will we allow such a travesty.
