Donald the Rapper
A poke in the ribs to our Pres.41 total reviews
Comment from Rasmine
LOL! Hey, if they are offended, why the hell aren't they offended by Trump saying 'grab them by the pussy?' I don't even know why someone would vote for a vulgar, sexist, racist ass -- and by their voting for a creep like that -- I'm offended. So don't worry if you offend them.
My favorite line made me laugh:
Be a stand-up guy, don't be a wussy
If you see someone you like, just grab'em in the pussy
Wow, my president is a gangsta rapper
So, I guess it doesn't matter,
That the country's in the crapper
He messes up bigly, his mistakes are huge
His cheeks are ruddy, is this fool wearing rouge?
LOL!
reply by the author on 25-Jul-2017
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LOL! Hey, if they are offended, why the hell aren't they offended by Trump saying 'grab them by the pussy?' I don't even know why someone would vote for a vulgar, sexist, racist ass -- and by their voting for a creep like that -- I'm offended. So don't worry if you offend them.
My favorite line made me laugh:
Be a stand-up guy, don't be a wussy
If you see someone you like, just grab'em in the pussy
Wow, my president is a gangsta rapper
So, I guess it doesn't matter,
That the country's in the crapper
He messes up bigly, his mistakes are huge
His cheeks are ruddy, is this fool wearing rouge?
LOL!
Comment Written 25-Jul-2017
reply by the author on 25-Jul-2017
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Thank you. Your words make me smile all over again. To have someone who does what you do express joy over what you have done is a thrill unlike any other, in my opinion. So, your praise of my poem gives me so much joy. Again, thank you so much.
Comment from JACK2
Many of us would stand and agree with your philosophy , thank God it wasn't Hillary
Good piece on a very real problem for our future. great choice of words to describe such a ugly man.
reply by the author on 25-Jul-2017
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Many of us would stand and agree with your philosophy , thank God it wasn't Hillary
Good piece on a very real problem for our future. great choice of words to describe such a ugly man.
Comment Written 25-Jul-2017
reply by the author on 25-Jul-2017
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Thank you, no matter what anyone's opinion of Hillary Clinton is, I don't believe that she would ever do any of the awful things this man has done and continues to do. The mere fact that so many of his appointees have bailed on him after reaching a point where they could no longer live with themselves is , I think, a strong indictment against him and his policies.
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ya they are both evil they should both be locked up.
Comment from Barb Hensongispsaca
You captured all the news articles on him in one swift cute and very different piece of writing. I truly think a lot more people are now finding out there is less of him than we thought. Quite a mixture of rhyme but it works
reply by the author on 25-Jul-2017
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You captured all the news articles on him in one swift cute and very different piece of writing. I truly think a lot more people are now finding out there is less of him than we thought. Quite a mixture of rhyme but it works
Comment Written 25-Jul-2017
reply by the author on 25-Jul-2017
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Thank you, I chose to do the poem in this way so that I could more freely say what I wanted to say. I appreciate your wonderful and supportive comments.
Comment from pipersfancy
Fast paced and cleverly rhymed, I enjoyed this (somewhat) madcap political romp quite well! Oh wait... there's an actual madcap political romp taking place as we speak!
Bertolt Brecht -- 'Art is not a mirror held up to reality but a hammer with which to shape it.'
pf
reply by the author on 25-Jul-2017
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Fast paced and cleverly rhymed, I enjoyed this (somewhat) madcap political romp quite well! Oh wait... there's an actual madcap political romp taking place as we speak!
Bertolt Brecht -- 'Art is not a mirror held up to reality but a hammer with which to shape it.'
pf
Comment Written 25-Jul-2017
reply by the author on 25-Jul-2017
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Hear, hear. Very well stated. I don't think anyone could have said it much better. Thank you for your comments.
Comment from Joan E.
I needed to be reminded of the possibility of humor in our current political environment. Thanks for the satire and the fun rhymes. I enjoyed your hoisting the President by some of his very on words! LOL- Joan
reply by the author on 25-Jul-2017
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I needed to be reminded of the possibility of humor in our current political environment. Thanks for the satire and the fun rhymes. I enjoyed your hoisting the President by some of his very on words! LOL- Joan
Comment Written 24-Jul-2017
reply by the author on 25-Jul-2017
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Thank you Joan, as writer we are always reminded of the power of words. What we write , what we say. Those words take on a life of their own and in this age where much is recorded and kept by someone, those words can come back and do us damage if we are not careful.
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I appreciate the sober warning... Take good care of yourself- Joan
Comment from Mustang Patty
LOL!! Thank you for sharing this fun poke at the president and his antics. Your words rang true and the rhyme and rhythm was wonderful. Hopefully, there won't be too many that will judge the subject matter rather than the writing,
~patty~
reply by the author on 25-Jul-2017
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LOL!! Thank you for sharing this fun poke at the president and his antics. Your words rang true and the rhyme and rhythm was wonderful. Hopefully, there won't be too many that will judge the subject matter rather than the writing,
~patty~
Comment Written 24-Jul-2017
reply by the author on 25-Jul-2017
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Thank you Patty. As I greatly admire your own writing and wordplay, I am humbled by your praise. Thank you for your comments.
Comment from Thomas Bowling
Even though I find the content reprehensible, the rhymes are quite good. I don't accept your apology. You know it's offensive, but posted it anyway.
reply by the author on 25-Jul-2017
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Even though I find the content reprehensible, the rhymes are quite good. I don't accept your apology. You know it's offensive, but posted it anyway.
Comment Written 24-Jul-2017
reply by the author on 25-Jul-2017
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And as I stated, I don't really care that you are offended. Do you think that I am not offended that a man who wants to lead the free world is a crass individual who does not even deign to apologize. I appreciate that you at least were not offended by the writing itself. Good day to you sir.
Comment from Walu Feral
Hahahaha! G'day mate.
It has been a long time, my friend. I hope you have been well.
I got a real kick out of this piece. Love him or hate him... he's "interesting individual" lol. You should have a look at some of "Mike Stevens" work on here... that's his main topic.
Great job.
Cheers Fez
reply by the author on 25-Jul-2017
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Hahahaha! G'day mate.
It has been a long time, my friend. I hope you have been well.
I got a real kick out of this piece. Love him or hate him... he's "interesting individual" lol. You should have a look at some of "Mike Stevens" work on here... that's his main topic.
Great job.
Cheers Fez
Comment Written 24-Jul-2017
reply by the author on 25-Jul-2017
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Hey G'day yourself. I see everything is going well with you. It is great to hear from you as well and I will certainly check out Mike Stevens. Thanks for the suggestion.
Comment from duchessofdrumborg
"Donald the Rapper", is a well-written and entertaining piece. This poet's work was a pleasure to both read and review. American politics are so very interesting. I look forward to seeing your nest post.
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reply by the author on 25-Jul-2017
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"Donald the Rapper", is a well-written and entertaining piece. This poet's work was a pleasure to both read and review. American politics are so very interesting. I look forward to seeing your nest post.
This rating does not count towards story rating or author rank.
The highest and the lowest rating are not included in calculations.
Comment Written 24-Jul-2017
reply by the author on 25-Jul-2017
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Thank you Duchess. It is always a pleasure to read your kind and supportive comments.
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nomi338, you're more than welcome.
Best wishes and take care, the Duchess
Comment from bhogg
Well, I'm a Republican, but am certainly not offended. If people read this and can't smile, shame on them. In fact, I enjoyed your author notes just as much as the post. Don't know .... I have hopes that things will turn around, but who knows. Regards, Bill
reply by the author on 25-Jul-2017
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Well, I'm a Republican, but am certainly not offended. If people read this and can't smile, shame on them. In fact, I enjoyed your author notes just as much as the post. Don't know .... I have hopes that things will turn around, but who knows. Regards, Bill
Comment Written 24-Jul-2017
reply by the author on 25-Jul-2017
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Thank you Bill. I believe that the worst thing for us as a species to lose, is our ability to laugh. It is a gift given to us by a happy God, who himself must appreciate humor. So, I think that, to go through life being unable to enjoy a good laugh is to go through life cursed.
