Donald the Rapper
A poke in the ribs to our Pres.41 total reviews
Comment from apky
I loved, loved, this one.
I wish I had a six left - I just gave away my last and curse the Fates that made me "stumble" on your piece a little too late.
Loved:
Be a stand-up guy, don't be a wussy
If you see someone you like, just grab'em in the pussy
Wow, my president is a gangsta rapper
So, I guess it doesn't matter,
That the country's in the crapper
Nobody thought he would even be elected
Until the front running Hilary, was rejected
He messes up bigly, his mistakes are huge
His cheeks are ruddy, is this fool wearing rouge?
I wish his predecessor could become un-retired
So, he could step to this clown and say
Get out of town today,
YOU ARE FIRED!
reply by the author on 27-Jul-2017
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I loved, loved, this one.
I wish I had a six left - I just gave away my last and curse the Fates that made me "stumble" on your piece a little too late.
Loved:
Be a stand-up guy, don't be a wussy
If you see someone you like, just grab'em in the pussy
Wow, my president is a gangsta rapper
So, I guess it doesn't matter,
That the country's in the crapper
Nobody thought he would even be elected
Until the front running Hilary, was rejected
He messes up bigly, his mistakes are huge
His cheeks are ruddy, is this fool wearing rouge?
I wish his predecessor could become un-retired
So, he could step to this clown and say
Get out of town today,
YOU ARE FIRED!
Comment Written 26-Jul-2017
reply by the author on 27-Jul-2017
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Thank you so much for some awesome comments. Please know that you are appreciated.
Comment from Aussie
Well done poet! How about adding a cartoon of Trump to your poem? Your sentiments are mine too. A fool in charge of your country. I'm surprised he wasn't bumped off before he moved into the White House! Love it.
reply by the author on 26-Jul-2017
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Well done poet! How about adding a cartoon of Trump to your poem? Your sentiments are mine too. A fool in charge of your country. I'm surprised he wasn't bumped off before he moved into the White House! Love it.
Comment Written 26-Jul-2017
reply by the author on 26-Jul-2017
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I thought about that, but sadly he would just be replaced by an even bigger fool. One who could rally other fools to seek revenge. Either way we still lose.
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So glad we don't live in the States. Beautiful country, lousy boss. XX
Comment from tfawcus
If I were going to take offence, it would more likely be because of the author note than the poem! A spicy piece of political satire about a man who seems determined to set himself up for ridicule. I wonder if his continued clowning hides a deeper and more dangerous agenda concealed behind the facade.
reply by the author on 26-Jul-2017
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If I were going to take offence, it would more likely be because of the author note than the poem! A spicy piece of political satire about a man who seems determined to set himself up for ridicule. I wonder if his continued clowning hides a deeper and more dangerous agenda concealed behind the facade.
Comment Written 26-Jul-2017
reply by the author on 26-Jul-2017
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Your point is very well made and taken. Another though that keeps coming to my mind is that, most Republicans dislike this man, but they know that they can use him to fill their own pockets as much as possible, when he is of no further use, they will drop kick him so far, so fast that it will be as if he never existed. They will then brag to the country and the world, do you see what a service we did for the world in getting rid of this menace?
Comment from Chrissy710
How could one go past this rap without review. LOL and thought your hit the nail on the head. A fun poem with truth cleverly interweaved finishing with an apt ending Your fired. Perosnally I am sick to death of listeneing to all the crap about this Russian mystery and Trumps nepitonistic appointments. A sad state of affairs all round. Enjoyed you humour Cheers Christine
reply by the author on 25-Jul-2017
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How could one go past this rap without review. LOL and thought your hit the nail on the head. A fun poem with truth cleverly interweaved finishing with an apt ending Your fired. Perosnally I am sick to death of listeneing to all the crap about this Russian mystery and Trumps nepitonistic appointments. A sad state of affairs all round. Enjoyed you humour Cheers Christine
Comment Written 25-Jul-2017
reply by the author on 25-Jul-2017
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Thank you Chrissy,. You know maybe he forgot that there is a video clip during the campaign where he says to the Russians, that if they can find Hillary's missing Email that he is sure they will be richly rewarded. Now I ask you how does that sound to you.
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Hmmmmmmmm Say No more!
Comment from Cybertron1986
Love the straightforwardness and humorous accuracy to the noted facets of the current political conditions. Loved how you compared our POTUS to a rapper by rhyming "wussy" with the "p*****." That pretty summed up everything. Made my day!
Awesome! Thank you
reply by the author on 25-Jul-2017
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Love the straightforwardness and humorous accuracy to the noted facets of the current political conditions. Loved how you compared our POTUS to a rapper by rhyming "wussy" with the "p*****." That pretty summed up everything. Made my day!
Awesome! Thank you
Comment Written 25-Jul-2017
reply by the author on 25-Jul-2017
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Thank you so much. I must admit that I was aiming for the bleachers with this. I wasn't sure if it would even be a hit, but I had hopes.
Comment from royowen
I enjoyed this parody about Donald Trump, the rhyming is inventive and imaginative, the narrative is clever and certainly finds a chorus of assent. I have no beef with Trump, (I guess it's because I'm an Aussie!) but he's not the smoothest of movers on the international stage! Well done, most enjoyable and entertaining, blessings, Roy
reply by the author on 25-Jul-2017
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I enjoyed this parody about Donald Trump, the rhyming is inventive and imaginative, the narrative is clever and certainly finds a chorus of assent. I have no beef with Trump, (I guess it's because I'm an Aussie!) but he's not the smoothest of movers on the international stage! Well done, most enjoyable and entertaining, blessings, Roy
Comment Written 25-Jul-2017
reply by the author on 25-Jul-2017
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Thank you Roy. I had a certain trepidation about some of the language I used. I went ahead and used it but I still feel a certain way about. I pray that God will forgive me.
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God looks at the heart, dear friend
Comment from DragonSkulls
HA HA HA. Ain't that the truth. Thank you for the chuckle and this great little rap. "Grab 'en by the pussy." Lol. Too funny. I don't have any suggestions for making this piece any better. It's great as is. Have a good one, nomi.
DS
reply by the author on 25-Jul-2017
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HA HA HA. Ain't that the truth. Thank you for the chuckle and this great little rap. "Grab 'en by the pussy." Lol. Too funny. I don't have any suggestions for making this piece any better. It's great as is. Have a good one, nomi.
DS
Comment Written 25-Jul-2017
reply by the author on 25-Jul-2017
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Thank you D.S. I reall appreciate your great comments, you just made my day.
Comment from SarahPenn1
This is so funnyð??? I can imagine it is well-received. Absolutely loved reading every word of it
Very politically relevant and also accurate, might I add.
My second ever 6 star rating!! Well-deserved indeed!
Thank you.
Shenel
reply by the author on 25-Jul-2017
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This is so funnyð??? I can imagine it is well-received. Absolutely loved reading every word of it
Very politically relevant and also accurate, might I add.
My second ever 6 star rating!! Well-deserved indeed!
Thank you.
Shenel
Comment Written 25-Jul-2017
reply by the author on 25-Jul-2017
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Wow! You have my long-lasting appreciation. It is always a pleasure to receive validation for something you are not sure will be well received. Thank you.
Comment from Eternal Muse
Many people feel this way about him. He disappointed all of us. He is rough and crass and lacks in manners and tact. His endless tweets got on everybody's nerves. I admit, he did something good for the economy of this country. But there is so much amiss...
A good rant. Thanks for sharing.
reply by the author on 25-Jul-2017
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Many people feel this way about him. He disappointed all of us. He is rough and crass and lacks in manners and tact. His endless tweets got on everybody's nerves. I admit, he did something good for the economy of this country. But there is so much amiss...
A good rant. Thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 25-Jul-2017
reply by the author on 25-Jul-2017
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Thank you for your great comments. We should not be too surprised because all politicians lie. Sometimes it is because they have to, others do it because they are so good at it and they just can't help themselves. LOL.
Comment from Pantygynt
You lot are stuck with Trump for at least four years unless someone gets so fed up with him they decide to resort to gun law. We are stuck with Brexit forever.
These are both examples of the price we pay for democracy. It doesn't always work the way we want it to, but it is the least awful of the political options.
An appropriate form this for what you had to say. As for grabs at the Pusey, didn't Trump make a name for himself doing just that?
reply by the author on 25-Jul-2017
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You lot are stuck with Trump for at least four years unless someone gets so fed up with him they decide to resort to gun law. We are stuck with Brexit forever.
These are both examples of the price we pay for democracy. It doesn't always work the way we want it to, but it is the least awful of the political options.
An appropriate form this for what you had to say. As for grabs at the Pusey, didn't Trump make a name for himself doing just that?
Comment Written 25-Jul-2017
reply by the author on 25-Jul-2017
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Agreed. The boldness and lack of shame is amazing. How can you manage anything with efficiency when your fingers are being worn out tweeting the whole day long?
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Empty vessels make the most noise. Lol.
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Yes, and his noise is almost deafening.
