Donald the Rapper
A poke in the ribs to our Pres.41 total reviews
Comment from Asem.inspirations
Good morning, my brother: I don't see anything wrong with this poem, except for the P word but I have my feeling about this President too. I just really try to keep them to myself but sometimes my distaste does spill out. I like the poem very much. It really shows that you have a healthy sense of humor. Much love...
reply by the author on 25-Jan-2018
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Good morning, my brother: I don't see anything wrong with this poem, except for the P word but I have my feeling about this President too. I just really try to keep them to myself but sometimes my distaste does spill out. I like the poem very much. It really shows that you have a healthy sense of humor. Much love...
Comment Written 25-Jan-2018
reply by the author on 25-Jan-2018
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Thank you my sister. To my regret, I have not always shown or exhibited a better sense of decorum when writing. I am however, working very hard at making wiser choices. I thank you very much for your kind remarks about my poetry.
Comment from kiwigirl2821
Hello Nomi. I think you have written something that sings the truth. Funny thing about singing, it doesn't matter if you are in tune or not! Trump is unfortunately our worst effort at being a president, let alone capable of leading us into "being great again" ... hell's bells I thought we were already a great nation! Thanks for putting a bit of fun into a truly less than fun reign! xoxo Kiwi (American Girl living in New Zealand, haha)
reply by the author on 02-Aug-2017
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Hello Nomi. I think you have written something that sings the truth. Funny thing about singing, it doesn't matter if you are in tune or not! Trump is unfortunately our worst effort at being a president, let alone capable of leading us into "being great again" ... hell's bells I thought we were already a great nation! Thanks for putting a bit of fun into a truly less than fun reign! xoxo Kiwi (American Girl living in New Zealand, haha)
Comment Written 02-Aug-2017
reply by the author on 02-Aug-2017
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Thank you so much my dear. Anyone who thinks America is not and has not always been great, they should ask all the people doing all that they can to get here and stay here. Many of us interpret those buzz words to mean that he wants to make America like it was when corporations ruled the roost and were able to do what they wanted to whomever they wanted, grab all the profits available, spit on the poor and go dancing off into the night.
Comment from WriterHeather
Wow...I think I just fell in love with rap! This is funny,and so well done. I'm not highly political,but some of the sentiments in this rap poem certainly resonant with me. Good job.
reply by the author on 27-Jul-2017
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Wow...I think I just fell in love with rap! This is funny,and so well done. I'm not highly political,but some of the sentiments in this rap poem certainly resonant with me. Good job.
Comment Written 27-Jul-2017
reply by the author on 27-Jul-2017
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Thank you Heather. I love and appreciate your wonderful review comments.
Comment from rjuselius
haha. lmao! this is an entertaining piece of poetry dear nomi! i love the concept altogether. it made me laugh so that is always a sizable plus.
thank you for sharing!
blessings and a hearty squeeze!
rebekka x
reply by the author on 27-Jul-2017
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haha. lmao! this is an entertaining piece of poetry dear nomi! i love the concept altogether. it made me laugh so that is always a sizable plus.
thank you for sharing!
blessings and a hearty squeeze!
rebekka x
Comment Written 27-Jul-2017
reply by the author on 27-Jul-2017
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Thank you Rebekka. I enjoyed your wonderfully kind comments and the always welcome hearty squeeze.
Comment from PoemsOfDD
Nomi338, this is fantabulous. I really enjoyed the tongue in cheek and honest description of the current president who is a gangsta rapper. You had me chuckling all the way - especially with this crude but funny part:
"Be a stand-up guy, don't be a wussy
If you see someone you like, just grab'em in the pussy"
Thank you for an excellent, fun and entertaining read. ~DD
PS - I love your candor in your end notes too - "I am sorry. If you do not accept my apology, that is your problem as I really do not care." Love it!!
reply by the author on 27-Jul-2017
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Nomi338, this is fantabulous. I really enjoyed the tongue in cheek and honest description of the current president who is a gangsta rapper. You had me chuckling all the way - especially with this crude but funny part:
"Be a stand-up guy, don't be a wussy
If you see someone you like, just grab'em in the pussy"
Thank you for an excellent, fun and entertaining read. ~DD
PS - I love your candor in your end notes too - "I am sorry. If you do not accept my apology, that is your problem as I really do not care." Love it!!
Comment Written 27-Jul-2017
reply by the author on 27-Jul-2017
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Strangely, only one person so far out of many has had a problem. This person actually refused to accept my apology. Oh well.However, I do thank you for your awesome comments.
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Nomi338, Don't worry about the one - they are a minority...and besides, you put a disclaimer in the end notes of your poem :-) I liked it! ~DD
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Thank you.
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Pleasure :-)
Comment from Oatmeal
nomi338,
This is a beautiful poem. I liked it very much. It made for an enjoyable ead.Thoughts are expressed and described well. Very reflective, all thoughts are very well described, understandable and comprehensible.
There was no SPAG. No typos. No homophones. No problems at all.
I look forward to seeing you again.
Love you,
Oatmeal
reply by the author on 27-Jul-2017
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nomi338,
This is a beautiful poem. I liked it very much. It made for an enjoyable ead.Thoughts are expressed and described well. Very reflective, all thoughts are very well described, understandable and comprehensible.
There was no SPAG. No typos. No homophones. No problems at all.
I look forward to seeing you again.
Love you,
Oatmeal
Comment Written 26-Jul-2017
reply by the author on 27-Jul-2017
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Thank you Oatmeal. I wish all who read my work was as nice, kind and as supportive as you.
Comment from Bill O'Bier
Wow - a great piece and all so true. Thanks for the great rhymes I just loved the whole thing. Can't wait to read more from you.
All the best...
Bill~
reply by the author on 27-Jul-2017
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Wow - a great piece and all so true. Thanks for the great rhymes I just loved the whole thing. Can't wait to read more from you.
All the best...
Bill~
Comment Written 26-Jul-2017
reply by the author on 27-Jul-2017
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Thanks Bill, I appreciate your review comments.
Comment from FxstsLisa
Bravo! This is the best Donald Trump poem I've read yet (and I've read a lot). I don't read poetry to my husband often but I shared this with him, and he laughed hard. What will Trump do next? More Donald poetry is welcome...
reply by the author on 27-Jul-2017
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Bravo! This is the best Donald Trump poem I've read yet (and I've read a lot). I don't read poetry to my husband often but I shared this with him, and he laughed hard. What will Trump do next? More Donald poetry is welcome...
Comment Written 26-Jul-2017
reply by the author on 27-Jul-2017
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Thank you Lisa, I am well pleased that you thought it good enough to share with your hubby. I sometimes share things I read here with my wife. I also only share things that I think are good and worthy of sharing. That you thought my poem was in that category thrills me so much.
Comment from mermaids
This is a fun poem and sadly, correct. I long for our previous president. Your words are humorous and you have a smooth flow of lines and words. Your strong steady beat gives your poem a musical feel to it.
reply by the author on 27-Jul-2017
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This is a fun poem and sadly, correct. I long for our previous president. Your words are humorous and you have a smooth flow of lines and words. Your strong steady beat gives your poem a musical feel to it.
Comment Written 26-Jul-2017
reply by the author on 27-Jul-2017
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May the Mermaids swim in peace forever. Thank you so much for your kind review comments.
Comment from TAB_that's me
Amen Nomi to all of what you said! I whole-heartedly agree. He is disgusting, doesn't know crap about running a country and I wish Obama could come back.
teresa
reply by the author on 27-Jul-2017
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Amen Nomi to all of what you said! I whole-heartedly agree. He is disgusting, doesn't know crap about running a country and I wish Obama could come back.
teresa
Comment Written 26-Jul-2017
reply by the author on 27-Jul-2017
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Hey Teresa. Thank you for your really great comments. I appreciate all that you said. It makes my day.
