Faster, Faster!
A silly little story.14 total reviews
Comment from Teri7
Maria, This is a really cute short story that would make any little child smile and laugh with glee to hear it being read to them. You used very cute wording and imagery. Blessings, Teri
reply by the author on 27-Jul-2017
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Maria, This is a really cute short story that would make any little child smile and laugh with glee to hear it being read to them. You used very cute wording and imagery. Blessings, Teri
Comment Written 27-Jul-2017
reply by the author on 27-Jul-2017
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Thanks for reading, Teri.
Comment from Ulla
Awww, Maria Jose, I think it was lovely little story and of course also very sad that she lost her favourite uncle. It's the sort of story that children like and childish adults like me.
I've been thinking about we meeting up in Madrid. What about 13th of September in the morning maybe for a coffee? It can't be too late because Marjory and I have so much to do. How does that sound? I would love to meet up with you. All the best. Ulla:)))
reply by the author on 26-Jul-2017
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Awww, Maria Jose, I think it was lovely little story and of course also very sad that she lost her favourite uncle. It's the sort of story that children like and childish adults like me.
I've been thinking about we meeting up in Madrid. What about 13th of September in the morning maybe for a coffee? It can't be too late because Marjory and I have so much to do. How does that sound? I would love to meet up with you. All the best. Ulla:)))
Comment Written 26-Jul-2017
reply by the author on 26-Jul-2017
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13th Sept sounds great. Let's talk again when the time comes near.
Thanks for reading.
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That we'll do. :)))
Comment from misscookie
I enjoyed reading you story
I found it to be very interesting yet, a little sad.
I for one think your never to old to read silly little stories .
It puts a smile on your face and makes you feel young age
Cookie
reply by the author on 26-Jul-2017
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I enjoyed reading you story
I found it to be very interesting yet, a little sad.
I for one think your never to old to read silly little stories .
It puts a smile on your face and makes you feel young age
Cookie
Comment Written 25-Jul-2017
reply by the author on 26-Jul-2017
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Thanks for your review, Cookie.
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It was my pleasure.
Cookie
Comment from Phyllis Stewart
Silly story but delightful. That is slowwww travel. She spent her whole life on the road. She regrets it, but others would choose adventure. To each her own. :)
reply by the author on 25-Jul-2017
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Silly story but delightful. That is slowwww travel. She spent her whole life on the road. She regrets it, but others would choose adventure. To each her own. :)
Comment Written 25-Jul-2017
reply by the author on 25-Jul-2017
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Thanks for reading, Phyllis.
Comment from Bucketlist
This well written from just a memory and God's slow lane critters. I had to laugh because with Parkinson's, slow is my mantra. Thank goodness for air travel! Thanks for sharing this ageless piece
Hugs Trisha
reply by the author on 25-Jul-2017
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This well written from just a memory and God's slow lane critters. I had to laugh because with Parkinson's, slow is my mantra. Thank goodness for air travel! Thanks for sharing this ageless piece
Hugs Trisha
Comment Written 25-Jul-2017
reply by the author on 25-Jul-2017
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Thanks for reading, Trisha. Take care.
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Welcome
Comment from Asem.inspirations
Good morning Maria, this is a very interesting story tale, especially since you adding the reality to it in the Arthur notes. It is a very cute child's story and I know that many children would enjoy reading it. You write very good children tales. Do you publish any of them? When I was running my home childcare I would have loved to have a bookshelf full of your children's books.
reply by the author on 25-Jul-2017
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Good morning Maria, this is a very interesting story tale, especially since you adding the reality to it in the Arthur notes. It is a very cute child's story and I know that many children would enjoy reading it. You write very good children tales. Do you publish any of them? When I was running my home childcare I would have loved to have a bookshelf full of your children's books.
Comment Written 25-Jul-2017
reply by the author on 25-Jul-2017
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Thanks for your kind review, Tier.
No, I haven't published any of this stories... maybe one day...
Comment from DR DIP
hehe loved your author's notes. Don't think you could be ever too old for fairytale stories and fables Maria this is a good one for your children's book. Because you are an English teacher teaching English to the Spanish(correct me if I'm wrong) it would be perfect for them to read you simple worded stories to practice their command of the English language.
Thanks for sharing
dip
reply by the author on 25-Jul-2017
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hehe loved your author's notes. Don't think you could be ever too old for fairytale stories and fables Maria this is a good one for your children's book. Because you are an English teacher teaching English to the Spanish(correct me if I'm wrong) it would be perfect for them to read you simple worded stories to practice their command of the English language.
Thanks for sharing
dip
Comment Written 25-Jul-2017
reply by the author on 25-Jul-2017
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Well, it is true. What I haven't shared is that I put the poor snail in a big matchbox and it died. I was devastated.
Yes, I'm an EFL teacher.
Thanks for reading.
Comment from Sis Cat
I enjoyed this simple tale. It does not have a point other than to delight the imagination. It is creative and inventive:
'I'm sorry to inform you he was carried to market on top of a lettuce...'
As sad as wrinkled Susie is, her story made me smile. That says a lot.
Thank you for sharing your simple, silly story.
reply by the author on 25-Jul-2017
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I enjoyed this simple tale. It does not have a point other than to delight the imagination. It is creative and inventive:
'I'm sorry to inform you he was carried to market on top of a lettuce...'
As sad as wrinkled Susie is, her story made me smile. That says a lot.
Thank you for sharing your simple, silly story.
Comment Written 25-Jul-2017
reply by the author on 25-Jul-2017
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I'm glad I made you smile, Andre.
Thanks for reading.
Comment from patcelaw
Maria, it is a cute story for children of any age, even us 79 year old children. Many blessings for a great week. Patricia
reply by the author on 25-Jul-2017
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Maria, it is a cute story for children of any age, even us 79 year old children. Many blessings for a great week. Patricia
Comment Written 24-Jul-2017
reply by the author on 25-Jul-2017
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Thanks for your review, Patricia. Take care.
Comment from loismddavis
I liked your very well written silly story--and indeed it was kind of silly, but one does not have to be a kindergartener to enjoy a story like this once in a while. Very good job and perfect picture
reply by the author on 24-Jul-2017
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I liked your very well written silly story--and indeed it was kind of silly, but one does not have to be a kindergartener to enjoy a story like this once in a while. Very good job and perfect picture
Comment Written 24-Jul-2017
reply by the author on 24-Jul-2017
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Thanks for your kind review, Lois.
