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Viewing comments for Chapter 3 "Marquis Gregoire's dilemma"
Historical fiction

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Comment from LaRosa
Exceptional
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I enjoyed reading your inter-mingled story line, from Equerry Harry to potential love interest to suffragette.
Each, with his/her own poignant purpose in life, each of differing life backgrounds and interests. No wonder Lady Mathilda can't keep a man, considering her suffragette beliefs in the 1820's.
Glad I found this chapter, will have to go back and start from the beginning.
It's well told, organized, and I'm learning new words! Equerry and gymkhana

 Comment Written 23-Jul-2017


reply by the author on 24-Jul-2017
    Superb ..delighted you enjoyed reading it - thanks for those 6 twinkling stars. zanya
Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear
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This speaks a common and somewhat strange cause of action manifestation, in other words, Marquis Gregoir's' dilemma as he felt like he was being inadvertently caught up in a maelstrom; I liked.

 Comment Written 23-Jul-2017


reply by the author on 24-Jul-2017
    Thanks for reading and critique
Comment from apky
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Poor Gregoire. I suppose suffragettes in those days were pure horror to a man.

'Gregoire, I shall be delighted to accompany you.' Mathilde replied.' What a wonderful opportunity it will be to become acquainted with the London suffragettes. I must advise Mama and have her prepare my little flag for the occasion.

 Comment Written 23-Jul-2017


reply by the author on 24-Jul-2017
    Yes ...I guess !! Must have been interesting times to live in ......thanks for reading and critique. zanya