Comment from Y. M. Roger

Excellent

Duuuuude.... thaaat muuusst'vvve beeeen ooone stoooned sloth!! ;) Whew! No sixteen-legged creatures! And hooray for sloths - of course, my favoritist sloth in the world works at the DMV in the movie 'Zootopia'... lol!! ;) Yvette

 Comment Written 19-May-2020

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reply by the author on 19-May-2020

Muscle cramps?

Comment from Spitfire

Excellent

A great image to get across the personality of the sloth.
Sloth who coughed --nice use of assonance in the first line, also Monday and covered in line two.

 Comment Written 22-Jul-2017

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reply by the author on 23-Jul-2017

Thanks, Shari.

Comment from BeasPeas

Excellent

Sloths are so cute and I really like your amusing 5-7-5. This is the fourth in the series. I'll go back and read the others. It's been a few days since I've had a chance to review. Marilyn

 Comment Written 22-Jul-2017

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reply by the author on 22-Jul-2017

Thanks, Marilyn, for the great review. Bill

Comment from kiwigirl2821

Excellent

Hi Bill. This is not only funny but in great form too. I also like sloths and particularly because they do take their time. Your last line had me laughing! Great stuff. Good luck. xoxo Kiwi

 Comment Written 22-Jul-2017

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reply by the author on 22-Jul-2017

Thanks, kiwi

Comment from Teri7

Excellent

This is a very interesting poem you have penned. You used very good wording, a little confusing, but good. You also used very good imagery with the picture. Blessings, Teri

 Comment Written 21-Jul-2017

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reply by the author on 22-Jul-2017

Thanks, Teri

reply by the author on 22-Jul-2017

Thanks, Teri

Comment from nomi338

Excellent

Better late than never, I guess. For one to take the steps to cover up a mess. You might criticize how long it took for him to act, better that he acted than the uncouth one who quickly ignored the need to do something at all.

 Comment Written 21-Jul-2017

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reply by the author on 21-Jul-2017

Ah? Ok.

Comment from damommy

Excellent

LOL. It would take about that long, I imagine.

I'm losing these creature poems of your.

This one reminds me of the old joke: "Don't tell him a joke on Saturday night. He'll laugh in church Sunday morning." 8-)

 Comment Written 21-Jul-2017

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reply by the author on 21-Jul-2017

Thanks, da.

Comment from Meia (MESAYERS)

Excellent

As always funny and quick witted Bill unlike that slovenly sloth lol I had to read it twice to get the joke but it was worth it, enjoyed very much you always make me laugh you never fail well done kindest regards Meia x

 Comment Written 21-Jul-2017

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reply by the author on 21-Jul-2017

Thanks, Meia.