Stormy Weather
Loving Thunderstorms8 total reviews
Comment from BeasPeas
I like a storm once in a while too. Not so much the thunder and lightning and my doggy surely doesn't like them. This is a well written 5-7-5. Illustration is impressive. Marilyn
reply by the author on 23-Jul-2017
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I like a storm once in a while too. Not so much the thunder and lightning and my doggy surely doesn't like them. This is a well written 5-7-5. Illustration is impressive. Marilyn
Comment Written 22-Jul-2017
reply by the author on 23-Jul-2017
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Thank you. I have a cat that feels the same way!
Comment from Dean Kuch
I'm with you on this one, Anonymous Poet.
Whenever an active thunderstorm comes rolling in I'm always the first one sitting on the front porch taking in Mother Nature's light show.
Before I sign off I wanted to let you know that I read this in the prose category when it should be listed in poetry. You will have to contact Tom Ens, the site administrator, to have him switch it for you.
Best wishes to you in the contest.
~Dean
reply by the author on 21-Jul-2017
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I'm with you on this one, Anonymous Poet.
Whenever an active thunderstorm comes rolling in I'm always the first one sitting on the front porch taking in Mother Nature's light show.
Before I sign off I wanted to let you know that I read this in the prose category when it should be listed in poetry. You will have to contact Tom Ens, the site administrator, to have him switch it for you.
Best wishes to you in the contest.
~Dean
Comment Written 21-Jul-2017
reply by the author on 21-Jul-2017
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Thank you for letting me know, and for taking the time to read my poem.
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My pleasure. :)
Comment from l.raven
I love the sound of rain...and love it when it storms...love lighting and thunder...the just don't last long enough...as long as they don't cause damage...let it rain...love your poem...and a stunning picture...love Linda xxoo
reply by the author on 21-Jul-2017
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I love the sound of rain...and love it when it storms...love lighting and thunder...the just don't last long enough...as long as they don't cause damage...let it rain...love your poem...and a stunning picture...love Linda xxoo
Comment Written 21-Jul-2017
reply by the author on 21-Jul-2017
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Thank you for your nice review, and for taking the time to read my poem. I'm always glad for other writers input.
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you are so very welcome...xxoo love
Comment from humpwhistle
I, too, love storms. But I live in a place where storms tend to be moderate in nature. No Tornado Alley for me. No Katrina magnets.
I wonder if your opening line is as strong as it can be?
Statements are rarely poetic.
Just a thought.
Peace, Lee
reply by the author on 21-Jul-2017
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I, too, love storms. But I live in a place where storms tend to be moderate in nature. No Tornado Alley for me. No Katrina magnets.
I wonder if your opening line is as strong as it can be?
Statements are rarely poetic.
Just a thought.
Peace, Lee
Comment Written 21-Jul-2017
reply by the author on 21-Jul-2017
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That's true, but I think the rules were that we had to start with..."I love". I welcome any suggestions and comments, and I'm so glad you read my poem,
Comment from Mustang Patty
thank you for sharing this well structured 5-7-5 about love. You have done a great job of describing your love for the storm - and then used descriptive words to emphasize what you love.
Well done and good luck in the contest,
~patty~
reply by the author on 21-Jul-2017
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thank you for sharing this well structured 5-7-5 about love. You have done a great job of describing your love for the storm - and then used descriptive words to emphasize what you love.
Well done and good luck in the contest,
~patty~
Comment Written 21-Jul-2017
reply by the author on 21-Jul-2017
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Thank you so much for your kind review. I really do love storms, complete with thunder and lightning, and we have been getting a lot of that this summer in Minnesota. I'm glad you read my poem, I appreciate it so much.
Comment from Meia (MESAYERS)
I love them too, though they get the adrenaline racing and the dogs nervous! I think it is marvellous how the thunder and lightning reduce us to primitives again, my mother and the dogs hide under the bed lol there is something primordial about it and I think you have captured that very neatly in the fantastic poem, enjoyed very much well done Meia xx
reply by the author on 21-Jul-2017
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I love them too, though they get the adrenaline racing and the dogs nervous! I think it is marvellous how the thunder and lightning reduce us to primitives again, my mother and the dogs hide under the bed lol there is something primordial about it and I think you have captured that very neatly in the fantastic poem, enjoyed very much well done Meia xx
Comment Written 21-Jul-2017
reply by the author on 21-Jul-2017
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Thank you so much. I have a cat called pandora, that takes cover anytime a storm happens.😊. I'm so glad you read my poem and I love any feedback I can get.
Comment from RodG
I, too, love stormy days, especially nights when the Lightning flares.
Good focus on audio images in line 2 and the visual drama in line 3.
reply by the author on 21-Jul-2017
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I, too, love stormy days, especially nights when the Lightning flares.
Good focus on audio images in line 2 and the visual drama in line 3.
Comment Written 20-Jul-2017
reply by the author on 21-Jul-2017
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Thank you for the nice review. It'd nice to know that other people are reading my work. It means a lit to me.
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My pleasure. Rod
Comment from KL Williams
I also love a good thunderstorm, though my dog is not as much a fan. Great job on the poem, and best of luck in the contest! :)
reply by the author on 21-Jul-2017
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I also love a good thunderstorm, though my dog is not as much a fan. Great job on the poem, and best of luck in the contest! :)
Comment Written 20-Jul-2017
reply by the author on 21-Jul-2017
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Hahaha... I have a cat who runs for cover, evetytine a storm occurs. Thanks for taking the time to read my poem.
