Choices
For the most part - the choice is mine69 total reviews
Comment from artemis53
To myself this is about personal perception. Do we live or do we die. Do we see the light or only the dark. What a lovely piece and yes, it is about our choices.
"And so, we choose our daily bread
from dark to light and in between.
Sometimes a single goss'mer thread
will hold our lives in peace serene."
Yes. I understand.
reply by the author on 22-Jul-2017
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To myself this is about personal perception. Do we live or do we die. Do we see the light or only the dark. What a lovely piece and yes, it is about our choices.
"And so, we choose our daily bread
from dark to light and in between.
Sometimes a single goss'mer thread
will hold our lives in peace serene."
Yes. I understand.
Comment Written 22-Jul-2017
reply by the author on 22-Jul-2017
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Than you Diane for your thoughtful and encouraging review.
Blessings
Janet
Comment from Bill Schott
This poem, Choices, I a delightful display of weather's awesome effects which mirror life's challenges and trials. The glimmer of sun always reminds us of the good things that exist as well. Really liked your work here.
reply by the author on 22-Jul-2017
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This poem, Choices, I a delightful display of weather's awesome effects which mirror life's challenges and trials. The glimmer of sun always reminds us of the good things that exist as well. Really liked your work here.
Comment Written 22-Jul-2017
reply by the author on 22-Jul-2017
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Than you Bill for your thoughtful and encouraging review.
Blessings
Janet
Comment from Vicki Easterly
Enjoyed this spiritual poem. Both the literal physical descriptions and the allegory were beautiful. I especially liked the description of the apricot sky and the angry shards of lightning. And all is better in the end, Great job.
reply by the author on 22-Jul-2017
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Enjoyed this spiritual poem. Both the literal physical descriptions and the allegory were beautiful. I especially liked the description of the apricot sky and the angry shards of lightning. And all is better in the end, Great job.
Comment Written 22-Jul-2017
reply by the author on 22-Jul-2017
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Than you Vicky for your thoughtful and encouraging review.
Blessings
Janet
Comment from duchessofdrumborg
"Choices" is an extremely well-written and delightfully descriptive piece. This talented poet's work was a pleasure to both read and review. You KEEP WRITING and I'll keep reading.
reply by the author on 22-Jul-2017
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"Choices" is an extremely well-written and delightfully descriptive piece. This talented poet's work was a pleasure to both read and review. You KEEP WRITING and I'll keep reading.
Comment Written 22-Jul-2017
reply by the author on 22-Jul-2017
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Than you Dutchess for your thoughtful and encouraging review.
Blessings
Janet
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Janet, as always you're very welcome.
Best wishes, the Duchess
Comment from oliver818
I enjoyed this beautiful poem. It has great rhythm and flow, and the imagery is particularly evocative. I love fiery skies and storms and you really captured that here. Thanks for sharing and have a really great day
reply by the author on 22-Jul-2017
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I enjoyed this beautiful poem. It has great rhythm and flow, and the imagery is particularly evocative. I love fiery skies and storms and you really captured that here. Thanks for sharing and have a really great day
Comment Written 22-Jul-2017
reply by the author on 22-Jul-2017
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Than you for your thoughtful and encouraging review.
Blessings
Janet
Comment from Nika2016
The color scheme is appealing and the words in stanzas portray the poet's feelings about storms...
We have the most powerful, scary storms in the Midwest...
reply by the author on 22-Jul-2017
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The color scheme is appealing and the words in stanzas portray the poet's feelings about storms...
We have the most powerful, scary storms in the Midwest...
Comment Written 22-Jul-2017
reply by the author on 22-Jul-2017
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Thank you Nika for your thoughtful and encouraging review.
Blessings
Janet
Comment from bob cullen
This is great. The rhyme is sensational and the imagery simply superb.
I really think this poem should be an entry in the next poem of the month competition.
reply by the author on 22-Jul-2017
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This is great. The rhyme is sensational and the imagery simply superb.
I really think this poem should be an entry in the next poem of the month competition.
Comment Written 22-Jul-2017
reply by the author on 22-Jul-2017
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Thank you Bob for your thoughtful review. I greatly appreciate your encouragement.
Blessings
Janet
Comment from beizanten
Interesting, good imaginary first paragraph.
Pretty great 3rd paragraph. Great Beautiful imaginary of sunset. This deserve a 6 stars. Keep up the great work
reply by the author on 22-Jul-2017
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Interesting, good imaginary first paragraph.
Pretty great 3rd paragraph. Great Beautiful imaginary of sunset. This deserve a 6 stars. Keep up the great work
Comment Written 22-Jul-2017
reply by the author on 22-Jul-2017
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Thank you for your thoughtful and encouraging review and those special six stars. .
Blessings
Janet
Comment from Ben Colder
Great wording. Send this my way.From my front window, I can see
rain pouring, pounding every hill.
The storm is raging right toward me --
it gives my frightened heart a chill.
reply by the author on 22-Jul-2017
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Great wording. Send this my way.From my front window, I can see
rain pouring, pounding every hill.
The storm is raging right toward me --
it gives my frightened heart a chill.
Comment Written 21-Jul-2017
reply by the author on 22-Jul-2017
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Thank you Ben for your thoughtful and encouraging review.
Blessings
Janet
Comment from Drew Delaney
Excellent rhyme and rhythm here. Your terse descriptive words describe the scene of a possible storm heading your way or a clearing about to take place. You use it well as a metaphor of life. Choices are ours to make, whether good or bad.
Nice poem.
Drew
reply by the author on 22-Jul-2017
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Excellent rhyme and rhythm here. Your terse descriptive words describe the scene of a possible storm heading your way or a clearing about to take place. You use it well as a metaphor of life. Choices are ours to make, whether good or bad.
Nice poem.
Drew
Comment Written 21-Jul-2017
reply by the author on 22-Jul-2017
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Thank you Drew for your thoughtful and encouraging review.
Blessings
Janet
