Brandon McCann
Viewing comments for Chapter 1 "Flight 1618"Young boy missing en route to Orlando, Florida
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Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written introduction chapter. A thirteen old boy, attracts mushief to them like a magnet. When a care taker doesn't keep one eye on them all the time the can disappear in a few seconds.
reply by the author on 22-Jul-2017
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A very well-written introduction chapter. A thirteen old boy, attracts mushief to them like a magnet. When a care taker doesn't keep one eye on them all the time the can disappear in a few seconds.
Comment Written 21-Jul-2017
reply by the author on 22-Jul-2017
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Glad you enjoyed this posting.
Comment from Meia (MESAYERS)
She knew it was her responsibility to not take her eyes off Brandon until she'd safely delivered him to his grandparents anxiously awaiting his arrival at the gate. She had escorted several young fliers before. When Becky turned back to where Brandon was supposed to be, all she noticed was his suitcase riding around on the carousel.
In a crowded airport, among a massive horde of people scurrying about in all different directions, Brandon McCann vanished. '
In the U.K we have a big missing child case with a little girl named Madeline McCann. She was just 6 when abducted though it can happen to older children of course. But why would Brandon go with anyone? I guess I will have to wait to find out I found your story engaging and true to life and very much hope to find out what happens to young Brandon. Kindest regards and well done Meia x
reply by the author on 22-Jul-2017
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She knew it was her responsibility to not take her eyes off Brandon until she'd safely delivered him to his grandparents anxiously awaiting his arrival at the gate. She had escorted several young fliers before. When Becky turned back to where Brandon was supposed to be, all she noticed was his suitcase riding around on the carousel.
In a crowded airport, among a massive horde of people scurrying about in all different directions, Brandon McCann vanished. '
In the U.K we have a big missing child case with a little girl named Madeline McCann. She was just 6 when abducted though it can happen to older children of course. But why would Brandon go with anyone? I guess I will have to wait to find out I found your story engaging and true to life and very much hope to find out what happens to young Brandon. Kindest regards and well done Meia x
Comment Written 21-Jul-2017
reply by the author on 22-Jul-2017
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Glad you enjoyed this posting.
Because several FanStorians have asked me, I may have to extend this tale out into more of a book.
So, I invite you to ride along while I do.
Comment from Barb Hensongispsaca
The lead in to the story was exceptionally done. The history of the character and the journey, then the excitement of the landing, then the missing child. No problems noted
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reply by the author on 22-Jul-2017
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The lead in to the story was exceptionally done. The history of the character and the journey, then the excitement of the landing, then the missing child. No problems noted
This rating does not count towards story rating or author rank.
The highest and the lowest rating are not included in calculations.
Comment Written 21-Jul-2017
reply by the author on 22-Jul-2017
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Glad you enjoyed this posting.
Always appreciate your comments and support.
