Blessed
Short free verse20 total reviews
Comment from LIJ Red
Dayspring means much to almost everyone. Man has poor night vision, day is man's time, and the departure of the fearful darkness is a blessing indeed. An excellent
free verse, and just the right length for the message.
reply by the author on 24-Jul-2017
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Dayspring means much to almost everyone. Man has poor night vision, day is man's time, and the departure of the fearful darkness is a blessing indeed. An excellent
free verse, and just the right length for the message.
Comment Written 24-Jul-2017
reply by the author on 24-Jul-2017
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Thank you:)
Comment from honeytree
Love the words written
how true what you have written
The words beautifully placed.
Every day every where on earth
night turns to day a gift that
is so special.
Honey tree
reply by the author on 22-Jul-2017
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Love the words written
how true what you have written
The words beautifully placed.
Every day every where on earth
night turns to day a gift that
is so special.
Honey tree
Comment Written 21-Jul-2017
reply by the author on 22-Jul-2017
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Thank you so much:)
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Great writing
Honeytree
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That's fine.
Honey tree.
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Interesting.
Annie
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That's fine.
Annie.
Comment from expressions9
Hi Tab
Aww...there is so much beauty in those few true words - great imagery!
I love those words "all is well with the world", expressing the joy that everyone feels at the dawning of a lovely sunny day. Despite the various things that make news headlines, with the morning sun's arrival "all is well". Very nice :)
God bless
Christine
reply by the author on 22-Jul-2017
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Hi Tab
Aww...there is so much beauty in those few true words - great imagery!
I love those words "all is well with the world", expressing the joy that everyone feels at the dawning of a lovely sunny day. Despite the various things that make news headlines, with the morning sun's arrival "all is well". Very nice :)
God bless
Christine
Comment Written 21-Jul-2017
reply by the author on 22-Jul-2017
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Thank you Christine:)
Comment from IndianaIrish
I treasure the wonder and beauty of the sunrise ... I suppose because I view them less than sunsets. I like the imagery in your poem, Teresa, and your last words, "blessed" is perfect. I would like to suggest you change everyday to every day.mwhen used as one word, it means ordinary or mundane. As two words, it means each day, and I think that's the way you want it to mean.
Smiles,
Karyn :-)
reply by the author on 22-Jul-2017
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I treasure the wonder and beauty of the sunrise ... I suppose because I view them less than sunsets. I like the imagery in your poem, Teresa, and your last words, "blessed" is perfect. I would like to suggest you change everyday to every day.mwhen used as one word, it means ordinary or mundane. As two words, it means each day, and I think that's the way you want it to mean.
Smiles,
Karyn :-)
Comment Written 21-Jul-2017
reply by the author on 22-Jul-2017
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Thank you Karyn for the suggestion. I will change it.:)
Comment from Jacqueline M Franklin
Hi, Teresa
= I like the simplicity of this.
= No artwork lets the reader imagine your words.
= Good stuff.
<> A Smile Is A Frown Turned Upside-down (*>*)
<> Cheers <> Jax / Jackie
reply by the author on 20-Jul-2017
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Hi, Teresa
= I like the simplicity of this.
= No artwork lets the reader imagine your words.
= Good stuff.
<> A Smile Is A Frown Turned Upside-down (*>*)
<> Cheers <> Jax / Jackie
Comment Written 20-Jul-2017
reply by the author on 20-Jul-2017
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Thanks Jax:) have a good day.
Comment from Joan E.
It is remarkable isn't it that we take this miracle for granted--everyday! I appreciated your resonant "all is well with the world" as I end this day with your spiritual poem. Sweet dreams- Joan
reply by the author on 20-Jul-2017
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It is remarkable isn't it that we take this miracle for granted--everyday! I appreciated your resonant "all is well with the world" as I end this day with your spiritual poem. Sweet dreams- Joan
Comment Written 20-Jul-2017
reply by the author on 20-Jul-2017
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Thank you Joan:)
Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
Teresa,
I enjoyed your poem. I like how you seem to be saying that when a new dawn breaks we all have a chance to make that day better than the one before. Great message in a poem. Thanks for sharing. Jan
reply by the author on 20-Jul-2017
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Teresa,
I enjoyed your poem. I like how you seem to be saying that when a new dawn breaks we all have a chance to make that day better than the one before. Great message in a poem. Thanks for sharing. Jan
Comment Written 19-Jul-2017
reply by the author on 20-Jul-2017
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Thank you Jan:)
Comment from BeasPeas
This is a nicely described free verse poem, Teresa. Every day I feel blessed. Taking one day at a time is all we can handle. Every day is a good day. Nice message within your piece. Marilyn
reply by the author on 20-Jul-2017
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This is a nicely described free verse poem, Teresa. Every day I feel blessed. Taking one day at a time is all we can handle. Every day is a good day. Nice message within your piece. Marilyn
Comment Written 19-Jul-2017
reply by the author on 20-Jul-2017
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Thanks Marilyn:)
Comment from Sasha
This is so lovely. I like to think of each new day as a chance for a better one than yesterday. Very, very nice work with this and so uplifting too.
reply by the author on 20-Jul-2017
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This is so lovely. I like to think of each new day as a chance for a better one than yesterday. Very, very nice work with this and so uplifting too.
Comment Written 19-Jul-2017
reply by the author on 20-Jul-2017
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Thank you Sasha:)
Comment from Dean Kuch
With every new day that dawns comes fresh hopes of a brighter day and an even better tomorrow.
At least that's the way I like to see it.
Short but sweet, Teresa.
Nice...
~Dean
reply by the author on 20-Jul-2017
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With every new day that dawns comes fresh hopes of a brighter day and an even better tomorrow.
At least that's the way I like to see it.
Short but sweet, Teresa.
Nice...
~Dean
Comment Written 19-Jul-2017
reply by the author on 20-Jul-2017
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Exactly Dean. Thanks so much:)
