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Comment from Asem.inspirations
Hello there my friend, I truly enjoyed my trip with you all through the map of the world. You have so perfectly described so many different countries and destinations in the beautiful poem and took us for a long ride through it all. This poem obviously took a lot of commitment. I could tell that you put a lot of care and work into writing it. Thank you so much for this information. Good write...NICE...
reply by the author on 21-Jul-2017
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Hello there my friend, I truly enjoyed my trip with you all through the map of the world. You have so perfectly described so many different countries and destinations in the beautiful poem and took us for a long ride through it all. This poem obviously took a lot of commitment. I could tell that you put a lot of care and work into writing it. Thank you so much for this information. Good write...NICE...
Comment Written 20-Jul-2017
reply by the author on 21-Jul-2017
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Thank you for the excellent review and your interesting comments supporting the poem. I think the poem is a bit long, but I wanted to go the cities of the world from 'a' to 'z' and kind of touch all the continents. it is a poem about diversity as much as the specific beauties and individuality of each place. estory
Comment from Mustang Patty
Such a wonderfully crafted piece of prose poetry that takes us on a vivid trip across the globe! You conjured memories of taking out the atlas and dreaming of the far away lands, or spinning the globe and seeing where my finger would be when it stopped,
The piece moves with a rhythm of its own, and compels the reader to dream,
~patty~
reply by the author on 21-Jul-2017
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Such a wonderfully crafted piece of prose poetry that takes us on a vivid trip across the globe! You conjured memories of taking out the atlas and dreaming of the far away lands, or spinning the globe and seeing where my finger would be when it stopped,
The piece moves with a rhythm of its own, and compels the reader to dream,
~patty~
Comment Written 19-Jul-2017
reply by the author on 21-Jul-2017
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Thank you for the five star review and your wonderful comments supporting this poem. I think you got this poem exactly. Glad you enjoyed your trip around the world! At least it didn't cost you anything lol estory
Comment from kiwigirl2821
Hello Estory. Ahhh but the journey was the best part of this one. Your words take a reader on a series of experiences and joyfully sometimes while others hesitant and needing to be away! Loved it for the beauty of the writers travels. Sharing it with your readers - Amazing! xoxo Kiwi
reply by the author on 21-Jul-2017
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Hello Estory. Ahhh but the journey was the best part of this one. Your words take a reader on a series of experiences and joyfully sometimes while others hesitant and needing to be away! Loved it for the beauty of the writers travels. Sharing it with your readers - Amazing! xoxo Kiwi
Comment Written 19-Jul-2017
reply by the author on 21-Jul-2017
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Thank you for the excellent review and your wonderful comments supporting this poem. Glad you enjoyed it, and the trip around the world estory
Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear
This speaks the feeling and imagination about places on map and enjoying the culture and civilization about the people at different places finding on the world map; I liked.
reply by the author on 21-Jul-2017
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This speaks the feeling and imagination about places on map and enjoying the culture and civilization about the people at different places finding on the world map; I liked.
Comment Written 18-Jul-2017
reply by the author on 21-Jul-2017
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Thanks for the excellent review and your wonderful comments supporting this poem. I think you got what I was trying to convey' a sense of the diversity of the world, at the same time the unique gems within it estory
Comment from lalajovanoski
Hello my dear friend, I very much enjoyed reading this beautifully written free verse poem. You've managed to cover a lot of places in this. I like the way that this flows is very soft and smooth. I like the way that this paints a very Vivid and clear image in my mind. You are very talented. Thank you so much for sharing this. God bless you. With love, Lola
reply by the author on 21-Jul-2017
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Hello my dear friend, I very much enjoyed reading this beautifully written free verse poem. You've managed to cover a lot of places in this. I like the way that this flows is very soft and smooth. I like the way that this paints a very Vivid and clear image in my mind. You are very talented. Thank you so much for sharing this. God bless you. With love, Lola
Comment Written 18-Jul-2017
reply by the author on 21-Jul-2017
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Thank you for the excellent review and for your wonderful comments supporting the poem. Glad you enjoyed your trip around the world, from 'A' to 'Z' estory
Comment from Nikki-Nicole
I think 'Maps' is a good read.
This poem talks about maps and reminds me of a stamp on a letter. It travels the world, yet somehow manages to stay in the same corner. Looking at a map, I can go to twenty different places without ever moving from my chair.
As for the two questions at the end. I've started to get a craving for a milky way.
Thanks for sharing.
Good luck with your future writing.
-Nicole-
reply by the author on 21-Jul-2017
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I think 'Maps' is a good read.
This poem talks about maps and reminds me of a stamp on a letter. It travels the world, yet somehow manages to stay in the same corner. Looking at a map, I can go to twenty different places without ever moving from my chair.
As for the two questions at the end. I've started to get a craving for a milky way.
Thanks for sharing.
Good luck with your future writing.
-Nicole-
Comment Written 18-Jul-2017
reply by the author on 21-Jul-2017
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Thanks for the great review and your interesting comments supporting the poem. Glad you enjoyed your trip around the world, from 'A' to 'Z''. I wanted to capture the unique charms of each spot, as well as the diversity of the world. But I think the swiss would frown on milky way. over there, its lindt or Tobler. lol estory
Comment from His Grayness
I appreciate the author's unique and interesting mission to take the reader on a variety of visits to lovely places. The writing does that very well and delivers many points of interest. My suggestion to improve this work would be to capture some related artwork to provide a bit more "capture" into the writing. Much appreciation for this work! HIS GRAYNESS: Vance
reply by the author on 18-Jul-2017
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I appreciate the author's unique and interesting mission to take the reader on a variety of visits to lovely places. The writing does that very well and delivers many points of interest. My suggestion to improve this work would be to capture some related artwork to provide a bit more "capture" into the writing. Much appreciation for this work! HIS GRAYNESS: Vance
Comment Written 18-Jul-2017
reply by the author on 18-Jul-2017
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Thank you for the excellent review and the suggestions and comments supporting the poem. I just edited it, I think it is maybe a little bit more colorful, more exotic, but the poem is already kind of long and I have to have some kind of limit on it. The world is a big place estory
